Arshi OS - Mrs. Raizada - Part 4 - Page 5

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: sohara

It was fun to read Durga.

everybody faints to hear about their marriage.
But it's axiom truth that opposite always attracts.
Good thought to write an OS with Manju aunty. She was the one who told Khushi to think ASR as her husband, AR her in law's place, La, Pam and Sim as her mother in law and sister in law.
but why ended writing this series. There are so many way you can introduce Mrs raizada to the world. How cum you can ignore about the Lucknow incident. All the people in lucknow should know that the girl who fell in ASR's arm in Sheesh mahal has become his wife. Forget about Lucknow Anjali should know that girl was no other but Khushi. remember she teased him on the second or third episode, whether she is special or not!

Thanks Sohara. Thanks for all those suggestions. I do want to go back to Lucknow, but in another story. Here, I was just targetting individuals and giving the stories a lighter vein. Going back to Lucknow, wouldn't be funny. There would be regret, anger and lot of other things. Lucknow isn't an easy place for Arnav to go back to. So, it will make up a totally different genre of story telling.
And anyway, I wanted to end the series when the going's good, before it became redundant. Thanks for loving the series. 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: piaviviandsena

ummm cnt u continue dis wid one more update? its really a fun reading dis os's. preety plz!!!

Aww, your pretty plz is so tempting. But I really must stop. This started off as a single os, but with the help of ideas and suggestions by many, it became a series. I get very little time to write and I want to use that for writing something different which I've been thinking of for quite sometime. Thank you so much for loving this series. Hoping whatever I write next, it would be as entertaining and you would be able to enjoy it equally. 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: indi52

that was lovely... manju ji... how splendid... the original suggester of sasural.

i like the sweet lightness of the tale... and did you call me asr kadva? haw. very bad you are. thanks so much, durga.

😆 Yes, kadva karela is good for health, you see. And that's what Manju sees him as, the mean, arrogant whatever, with hardly any sweetness or namkeen. Ek kadvahat se bhari shaksiyat, a bitterness filled character.
To be honest, I was thinking of writing this story, atleast the dialogues in Hindi. It would have been fun writing Manju's lines. But someday, I will write one with Hindi dialogues, where almost the whole cast would be there. Let's see.
Thanks Indi. 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Aww.. This time its Manju aunties turn to faint... 😆 Loved it

She was soo shocked to find out Khushi is married to Arnav..

Enjoyed reading the series...Its Fabulous

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: nishu_shorna

lovely... brilliantly written...

Thank you so much. 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: chandana.s

Aww.. This time its Manju aunties turn to faint... 😆 Loved it


She was soo shocked to find out Khushi is married to Arnav..

Enjoyed reading the series...Its Fabulous

Thanks Chandana. 😳
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Fabulous One shot series.. Just finished reading last three parts together..
I thoroughly enjoyed...loved it❤️
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Hi Durga .. I hadn't read the previous parts. Now caught up on all and here to comment. Very cute concept. Haha chapter 2 from all those ideas from blasters..I think that is my favourite part of the OS.. Light, airy, fun chapters.. enjoyed a lot. How happy the couple are! touch wood may this bliss last forever..
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Thank you so much for all the colourful pictured comments. I am overwhelmed. 😃

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