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Posted: 11 years ago

#31

Hi Indrani,

Beautiful OS. I had really enjoyed this scene between them but had only seen the funny side of Khushi's antics. You made me look at the other side how ASR must have felt lying next to the woman he loves, who has his heart but his mind is not ready because of what he saw on the terrace. Now when I go back and reflect on the scene you are right there was the shadow of desire and longing along with frustration that you could see in his eyes and his body. Barun and Sanaya did a great job in that scene. Thanks for this treat.

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indi52

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Posted: 11 years ago

#32

^^^

hey rashmi,

good to see you, long time. thanks for reading this piece and finding meaning in it. he was mad at her, yet sort of attracted i felt... barun and sanaya were so so good in these episodes.

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Viji

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Posted: 11 years ago

#33

Hey Indi di...Loved the narration of that one awesome night 🤗
Can't even imagine hw the guy had control...Loved the OS from Arnav 's pov and his feelings for the girl who was lying beaide him 😃
This was such a Cuteee Os di 😃

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indi52

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Posted: 11 years ago

#34

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hi viji

you liked it? yay. thanks so much. just got a bit carried away thinking of that episode and that night. they were a fabously crazy pair.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#35

My notorious heart skipped a beat when i read "come here, you crazy taekwondo queen, and stay still, samjhi tum!"

So damn Authoritative !

Loved it U cud have extended it .

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indi52

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Posted: 11 years ago

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hi destinyhope,

thanks so much... this heart is there so it may skip... pity not too many people can get it to that state... but a certain authoritative sort of guy... every time he does get me... you are right, could have extended, wrote it for an introduction to a thread, so curbed the instinct. happy you read.

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indi52

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Posted: 11 years ago

#37

^^^

thanks, sarah. 🤗

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Chandana

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Posted: 11 years ago

#38

LOL The Bed Scenes was one of my fav scenes.. Ouch Poor guy have to take so much punches 😆

Loved it

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indi52

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Posted: 11 years ago

#39

^^^

thanks, chandana, i see you have read almost all the stories, wow... appreciate it. glad you had fun.

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Maria

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Posted: 11 years ago

#40

Awww Indi that was such a beautiful one!😳 I mean you've revisited their most 'ajeeb' scene😆 so beautifully!😳 when i saw this scene for the first time I was like okay these 2 unbelievable😆 but yeah this was so romantic at the same time! Their romance at Gupta house was the best 😳😆

thanks for sharing such a superb piece of writing with us 🤗

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