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aashi12

@aashi12

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Posted: 11 years ago

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opsyellow

@opsyellow

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Posted: 11 years ago

😃 Why Anu why? I was so happy that you wrote this OS for me with My Lovely and My Dee but after reading I am not so happy you know. its not good for my hormones. I can cry easily now days😭

Arnav made me cry, no you made me cry. you better write one letter from khushi's side to make Arnav happy and me.

Beautifully written Anu👏

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ameena671

@ameena671

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Posted: 11 years ago

wow wonderful os loved it thank you for pm.

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hmm.. guess karo :P

@jas0308

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Posted: 11 years ago

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anu... what a splendid OS you wrote yaar... and it's so different from you *you know what I mean*😉

very very very beautifully written...

every emotion, every scene you made arnav wrote.. reminded me IPKKND days

loved it how arnav tried to write in hindi and deciding to write.. typical him😛

you beautifully wrote about his journey of Arnav Malik to Arnav Singh Raizada... 👏👏

felt bad for Anjali too... what she had gone through in all this, can really imagine, how she was (in the show) her past, too affected her.. but maybe for him she could move on...

you made me cry.. iss baar sacchi mai...

this letter.. touched me yaar!!

kudos to you⭐️⭐️

PS: you know I don't like thank you's.. aur maine abhi kuch kaha hi nahi... later I will force you to write.. 😉😉 you know for what

PPS: sorry for delay.. but teko maine pehla hi mera reaction bta diya tha😆

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Deepa jha

@Dee_J

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Anu meri jaan, first here's a tight hug to you for dedicating this to me 🤗
Now to the OS😭
I have said pehle and saying it now too, you write beautifully. The way you've weaved his emotions here is just so perfect. I am not a rotli now, and after reading this I cried :( I seriously did. When it comes to arnav's redemption, I really think that show did nothing to show his redemption. A simple hug cannot cure everything and I am glad that you wrote this OS. I love to see a crying and growling arnav, because what he did cannot be justified. True he was ASR, ruthless and thought of himself as his own almighty and never thought before saying anything, but then after hurting others he hurted himself too, which was missing when he'd hugged her in show seeking for forgiveness in the show. I am glad you came out with this idea. Love you Anu ❤️

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vandana.sagar

@vandana.sagar

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Posted: 11 years ago

Anu...

I was not expecting this ...my God, that was intense and oh so amazing. I was captivated...your concept, your thoughts and the way you wrote it. So emotional...poor poor Arnav...what all he went through, the journey of ASR from being a happy innocent carefree Arnav Malik to becoming an arrogant, ambitious and almost like a heartless ASR...only he was not heartless but just protecting himself from feelings and emotions that he blames and connects with his failure, weakness and hopelessness.

You gave him concrete reasons to behave in the manner he does, what happens to his mother, his father and to Di, also explaining her story and why she was the way she way...having gone through so much...I felt all chocked up and had goosebumps, I never felt so much empathy for Anjali after reading when she went through which I never felt for her on the show...and this gave me some insight to her and her life...

I love how you blended IPK scenes and the story for this OS completing it better than before...

His regret and repentance and his justification to himself as he was unable to forgive himself for the way he treated her, taking full responsibility and accountability for his actions ...my heart was weeping for him...the depth of his emotions and how seeing her suffer and in pain would hurt him and cause him pain twice folded...

I loved the concept of his writing a letter, his words ( his attempt in hindi ) was honest and heartfelt...baring himself completely to the one he loves and feels he has wronged by not trusting her love for him, his love for her ...beautifully expressed...I was completely taken in by his honest confession and I could feel his pain and his anguish, his guilt and his love...

Brilliant Anu...and thanks my darling for this beautiful dedication...that too with my Lovely and virtual beti...and thanks Jas for being there for her...

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chavvi16

@chavvi16

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Posted: 11 years ago

awww man that was just beautiful
him telling all of his feelings for her
what he felt
what he went through
the reason he became ASR
everything
and to see him bare himself in front of her was just beautiful
will there be a letter from her side
you have done it again dear
cheers for pm

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Skiran

@Skiran

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Arnav Singh Raizada writing letter to Khushi in Hindi 😲

Magnificent story about how and why Arnav turned into a heartless monster 👏

Anjali loosing her virtue, a young helpless Arnav brought tears to my eyes. He turned cold experiencing cruel behaviour of people at such young age..not to blame him. He steeled his heart but fell in love with Khushi. Excellent comparision of Khushi with his happiness ❤️

Its simply superb ⭐️ loved it 👍🏼

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KBS

@oKBSo

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Posted: 11 years ago

I am spell bounded... this is splendid dammit

the way u wrote,... I can imagine Arnav face while writing it

so nice

will like read about KKGSR's reaction too

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celinawalter

@celinawalter

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Posted: 11 years ago

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unres!

Did i tell you Anu ever, you are a wonderful writer!!!
I guess,i didn't, so here it is. yes you are dear!
the way you wrote this OS and all the pent up emotions of ASR were sooo beautifully out there. I loved it.

And i love the Rakshas story and then the way you steered it into the past of Malliks. it was fab.
Hat's of Girl!
then How you added your little inputs along with the IPK scene were added bonus!.
i loved it.
Keep Writing.😊

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