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Hot_Chocolate

@Hot_Chocolate

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#21

anu! I am really speechless after reading this. .. I had read many many OSs earlier. well almost one and half years ho gye hain Ipk khatam huye and muje IF join kare huye..but this is brilliant!... so emotional and expressive. its like arnav is baring his heart on this letter. all the trauma..His whole life.. ahh. I can't explain..difficult hai especially mere liye..

this is the first time I've read something by you and I am highly impressed.

well done

thanks for the pm.:)

keep writing.

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drakecyrus

@drakecyrus

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

#22

beautiful piece of work !

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BSDsarun

@BSDsarun

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#23

awww such nice latter
written by arnav...
nice keep it up
😊

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devishree

@devishree

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#24

loved it

very strongly drafted letter letting out everything by ASR

superb

i would love to get a marvellous and fitting reply/confrontation from khushi plzz its a request

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javeria

@Javeria3991

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#25

One word STUPENDOUS 👏 👏 👏

Love the way you describe the whole journey of Arnav from Mallik to Raizada and to his love.

The way wrote young Arnav's disappointment on catching his father cheating his family, fear losing his family his sister, pain of loosing his mother and seeing shattered condition of his sister, trust issues, pain and love are amazing.

Love the ending line "Main hamesha tum se hi pyaar karoon ga"I so wish Arnav to complete this last of Heer Ranjah act, thanks for letting it happen in your shot.

Can you please continue it as khushi writing a reply to it, pretty please.

Edited by Javeria3991 - 11 years ago

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Mandy

@foreverromantic

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#26

That was beautiful!!! U are sooo talented!!! It was written perfectly! It actually brought tears to my eyes!

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classyandsassy

@classyandsassy

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#27

OMG ... This is an amazing OS ... I wish Arnav had written a letter like this then to maza hi aa jata ...

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mpuhan

@mpuhan

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#28

an emotional Arnav ... nice shot

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Meerah14

@Meerah14

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#29

Such a heart touching letter...lovely

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ZAIDI

@Miss.Zaidi

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#30

inspired by VS , dj and ops yellow .. OS tou parhy ka pari 😆

... new arhi OS p res by me .. lol . i wont unres any soon :P

p.s tu mery sy kab inspire ho gi ;P