Blast from the Past Thread #23!!Catch up and some ott!! pg 114 epi 230

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indi52

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Originally posted by: aarwen
Spent my whole day reading Faiqa and Indi di's new posts and Sohara's comments.. and then a lovely SS recommended by Javeria where Akash oh so cutely kept teasing his new blushing bhabhi Khushi.. What a great way to spend my Sunday.. I keep repeating this but am so happy I joined you all.. Thank you 🤗

🤗 you are bhery bhelcomes... and i am so happy you hang out here. i hope you keep having a good time, while your sanity is questioned by all and even sundry. 😆 i don't read fan fiction so i read the takes on blast and elsewhere, then spend hours fretting over the updates for my kahanis... what would khushi do exactly... and asr and whoever. once in a while i tell myself the world will not change its shape and structure if i don't get it right and this is not "real" writing but a second later i am back at it and happy... what is the with me. 😆

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Mehreen

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Posted: 11 years ago

#892

indi , beautiful than ever, love your thoughts about Naniji's scolding but she did plant a seed in his head which made him important and happy despite being annoyed.He was happy to sit with her to eat.He wants her attention desperately, wants to see just HIM in her eyes , in her thoughts and at her lips.He can't stand her silence , not calling his name, his own name Arnavji and Laadovernor.She is a "tar" of veena who strings his heart which just says her name only her name in hate or love.

Her innocent heart , wants all those bangles, bindi, and all from this man who strings her heart with him and the rhythm goes in third dimension.He was touched by her concerns and care and couldn't resist putting himself in her hands and she couldn't resist holding it.Layers are peeling and new layers are weaving.

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Mehreen

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Posted: 11 years ago

#893

ArshiH, brilliant as always.Love your connection with guest house, very insightful and shows the depth of your keen eyes.He can't make clear judgements and decision in his anger and she can't in her focus missions.😊Binding Accords of trust and right, beautiful way to put it as weaving new layers.Both of them can't see anyone in trouble and putting all aside they reach for each other no matter what, either he is in temple for taking care of her finger or she is at his rescue mission from kidnappers.She will be there to make sure he didn't take wrong meds and he will be there not to let anyone make fun at his wife.She can tease her, he can break her in million pieces, both can yell out of their lungs they hate each other but both can't deny the pull, the attraction of their desires, possessiveness , passion, pride, and calmness which they only share with each other and with no one else.

Editing again

The shadow of mother to her child and Khushi's shadow holding his chin.You are making me nostalgic and ecstatic with this thought .She will be his when she will be taking one step more than his mother and will earn higher place than Anjali.You made me speechless with this one.Beautiful.👍🏼

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indi52

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Posted: 11 years ago

#894

^^^

thanks, mehreen.

nani ji was quite instrumental in the setting up of this scene wasn't she? oh he does so desperately want his jhalli's attention and to be released of this swami thing... aww... she too just wants her choori bindi man... but they will both grow and keep touching new spaces of love, new limits and be so intensely woven together...

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Horizon

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Posted: 11 years ago

#895

Indi,229, what you read between those two pairs of eyes was a very pleasant reading.

as thoroughly frustrated by Khushi since that morning I couldn't read much through them. Feeding a loved one, culturally a very passionate act by itself.. Upar se the Barjatya fan in me reminded of a boy and girl beautifully confessing their love over a tranquil dinner table .. Lot associated just with that ambience per se... Why would Khushi not leave a single morsel for her Arnavji.. Very insensitive writing.

His frustration. Her guilt all beatifully brought in ur writing. Loved your little ramble about sneh and his loneliness. Absolutely loved what u said about he looking into her eyes and everything g changing when she said "upar dekhiye" ( on a tablet handicapped to highlight)

And those killer edits.. The first one.. Is from "without you" if I am not wrong.. I have to go and read that chapter again where you described how Khushi felt touching him.. You are taking me to places today Indi.

Nice read Indi, thanks.

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Horizon

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Posted: 11 years ago

#896

Indi, btw I remember that chat of you and Issk about tango. Thanks for sharing again.

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Horizon

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Posted: 11 years ago

#897

Aarwen it was great having you here and reading your simple yet thought provoking takes. Good to know you had a good day here.

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Horizon

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Posted: 11 years ago

#898

Faiqa, lovely read 229 full of symbolism and connections.

Loved what you said about Anjali's concern of these tow not understanding each other...about comfort and right flowing into their relationship unknowingly. Great edits.

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DurgaS

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Posted: 11 years ago

#899

Disclaimer: Please do not copy my work anywhere. If you do, please give credit.

Episode 229

Aaj karne do

Raah mein aise mod bhi aate hain

Kuch baatein hadd se guzar jaate hain

Bigdi haalat ko zara sambhaalne do

Aaj karne do, humey karne do

Na ye takraar ka waqt hai, na tiraskaar ka hai

Iss behas mein zaroorat ek Tehraav ka hai

Iltija hai ke in baaton ko ab rehne do

Aaj karne do, humey karne do

Nasaaz tabiyat aapki nahin humey manzoor

Aapki khatir hum khudko khudse kare door

Ye zaroorat hai humari, humey poori karne do

Aaj karne do, humey karne do

Translation:

On the way, such turns also come

Some things cross the limit

Let me take care of the worsened situation

Today let me do, let me do

This is not the time for a clash nor for refusal

A halt is required in this argument

I request you to let these matters be

Today let me do, let me do

Your unwell health is not acceptable

For your sake, I would separate me from myself

This is my necessity, let me fulfill it

Today let me do, let me do

DurgaS's Index

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indi52

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Posted: 11 years ago

#900

^^^

durga, that poem is lovely like the night. maybe we need darkness for the pretense of the day to fall away... for the rational to succumb to the call of the heart... that knows no reason... just must do what it must do.

thanks for the lines that accepts this.

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