Gita's 'ASR's musings' - an interlude - Page 3

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Posted: 11 years ago
#21
viji..ye banners khud bnati ho ? 😳
i wnt say anythng abt it .. just perfect ⭐️⭐️⭐️

about the update .,..lol..after mintu s chatni .. yu made mem1 herself yur shikaar 😆 ..haha .. mast hai .. lagy rahoo 😉

lol .. that part .. ARNAV JI YU R FRGTTNG SMTHNG .. UR LAPTOP ..hahaa .. i just imagined the annoyed looking sobti here
buhaha .. perfect thingfor khushi to muse on .. ;P ..arnav ji are yu writing arnav singh raizada s musing ..lol.. lol.. i wonder if mem1 will write the next update of arnav musing over this musing .. lol..

😲 khushi at driving seat .. arnav at passenger s .. wo bhi blind folded 😲 ...koi bacha lo arnav ko ..bechara marny wala hai .. 😆

lol lol ..did khushi say ..LAAD GOVERNOR SHUT UP !! 🤣


KYAAA 😲 SHE HAS BROUGHT HIM .. I MEAN THE A.S.R TO A PSYCHIATRIST😲
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"But it also contains details which are privy to only you and me. How is that even possible? Unless someone has been following us even in our bedroom. We have discussed so many stories written by many writers but how come the details of our discussion are written there?"



yu all will not kill me for saying this ? will yu ? 😳 bedroonm.. ASR they followyu to the washroom .. thy peek a boo in yur honeymoons .. ( lol ..kyu lazy ?😛)when yu bath when yu change .. and wnever yu do rabba ve .. sab ki naxar is only on yu 😆😆

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haha VS .. doctorwa ..lol..flash of yellow 😉 the kurta yu share 😳
viji OS mai chitra ji bhi hai .. vs bhi hai ,. mintu bhi hai .. mem1 almost hai ..
where am i dammit 😭

"I like this Gitaji. She is so sweet. She treats all her readers with respect and shares a great camaraderie with them. She gives great importance to her friends and encouraged them to write in her thread, which is very rare"

i also like gita ji .. she is VS ki n yurs n mintu s frnd and she cmnted on OS 😳😆

Disclaimer: Kindly excuse mistakes, if any, committed with respect to DID. Just for fun. No offense to anyone living or dead !!

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ye sab VS ka idea tha 😳 shabaash VS .. lol ..
mast likha viji 👏 shabash 😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
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What the !!!!
Dr U...great idea. ⭐️
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Posted: 11 years ago
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God!! I am at work!!!

How am I supposed to control my laughter??? This was soo so so fuuny. I cant list down all that I laughed at, kaam kareka padi!

Chitra the sophisticated doctor and Vandana the smiling fangirl! I could so imagine them in these avatars...

Viji what do you do? I mean what is your profession? Coz you not only got the word Dissociative Identity Disorder right (Multiple Personality Disorder and split personalities were rubbished away in DSM-IV) you also got the psychiatric conversation/ the jargon right 👍🏼

Main wahi toh sochun Mem1 ko sab kaisan pata about ArHi's personal lives without delving into Arnav's business or ArHi's intimate moments... Fortunately, she cant 'inceptionalize' the former and unfortunately cant 'inceptionalize' the latter... 😛

And I agree, not only are her musings funny and cute but she interacts well with her readers too ⭐️

Viji then how you interwove Minty ka musing to this was a masterstroke. Bas!

Thank you Viji and v.s for the links. Mem1 deserves this wonderful musing and I deserve to read it. Bas!

Btw, banner bhi bahoot hi badhiya hain 😊
Edited by Rasgulla_sp - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Fantastic concept Uthra, I always use to wonder that what if someone writes a Musing on Memji and you have done a phenomenal job here, totally fabulous and super hilarious 🤣 Loved the way you kept the humor intact whether its Khushi wondering whats wrong with open hair or Khushi giving him laptop instead of goodbye kiss 😆 The way you wrote ASR's crazy wife's antics and his continuos thoughts about them was amazing and best was their doctor encounter... Whether it was Dr.Chitra or ever blushing Dr.Vandana... I think I loved each n everything about it, poor ASR was stuck in between three beautiful women... Finally the result of appointment that Memji is the real culprit and Khushi loves her too.. was like cherry on top of cake. Brilliant interlude, you rock Uthra...! Eagerly waiting for your next...

PS: ASR recognizing Dr.Vandana with a flash of yellow was a great idea.. Nobody can forget V, she has such charm 😳😳


PPS: Memji, You totally deserved it, the way you write each n every detail beautifully that too in a humorous way, is truly commendable. Thank you for writing ASR's musing and hopefully you will keep writing them as we cant have enough of them 😊
Edited by PhenoixTears - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Mujhe itni late kyun pata chala is homecoming OS ke baare mein!!!!!! 😕

Anyways coming to it- This was superb Uthra!!! What an idea VandanaJi!!!
Dr. sahiba to bahut red ho rahi thi Mr. Raizada ke samne making Mrs. Raizada go red in different way 😆
Dr. Chitra - I don't know you but a very big thank you for motivating Mints. Otherwise how could we have gotten so many stories.
Gitaji Please continue with your inceptions and never let go off the addiction. Dream reading akrte raho.. Only Khushi can ask why no inception of private moments is unfortunate. But Dr. Vandana hum samajhte hain... Hum bhi to phangurling karte hain na aapke sath!!! 😛
Uthra you write so well. The idea, storyline, sequence everything was so perfect. Initially I thought if Khushi was taking inspiration from Gita to try her hand at writing herself. 😊
Aman too is involved with Khushi and thought Arnav could have DID!!!! So is Mr. Raizada planning to take an action against his most trusted right hand man?
And the last part - where Arnav Khushi are discussing about the Mint cookies and Gita having a relapse and has started infiltrating his mind... Waaahhh!!! Bang on!!!! Awesome :-)

And that W*F was 😆😆😆😆😆
Edited by aquagal - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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wow... This was so much fun to read...😆
amazing !!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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it was super duper fun reading the story... Absolutely fabulous Uthra...
oh my... Dr V n C r so damn lucky to meet ASR n to actually be involved in his diagnosis n treatment... U lucky , lucky gals...
Aaannnd can anyone get more luckier than our Geeta who can actually infiltrate into Arnavz mind as n when she wishes n its cmplty under her control to accept as well as omit instances... Gud gal that she is , nvr intrudes into their intimate moments...
I completely cracked up when Arnav was blindfolded sitting in the passenger seat... Its only Khushi who can come up with such ideas... Unbelievable!!
i loved the wise pun u used Uthra for W*F!!!! 😉
A perfect tribute to Geeta!!!
Hail Geeta for enthralling us the musings of Arnav thru various writers...
Hail V di for conjuring this idea...
Hail Uthra akka for bringing into life so beautifully, V diz idea...
Hail all the writers for inspiring Geeta to write something so unique...
Hail Arnav n Khushi cuz without whom all this wudnt hav ever been possible...
Edited by kooldewdrop - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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You took a great idea, and made a spectacular one shot - I had so much fun reading it! Mem1 totally deserves to have a musings done on her; her work is just brilliant!

The characters of Arnav and Khushi, the two doctors, the introduction of Mem1 - it was all written down very seamlessly. I loved how you brought out the personality disorder and the dream sharing concepts; two very unique ideas and you put such a humorous touch it!

How you blended in Mem's recent musing on Mints was also done so nicely!

Thanks Vandana for the link; really enjoyed it😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Unresed here 😉

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Posted: 11 years ago
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🤣
Laugh riot that is what this was...
Bechara unsuspecting ASR to be dragged for a visit to the doc by his darling wife...i loved the flashes of yellow that ASR had when he came across Dr. V 😉

But i thought that Gita had the best role...imagine having the powers of sneaking into mrs. and mr Raizada's life.
Great concept and written very well.

And well its been over a year and i have stopped thinking if i would ever ever get over my obsession with the residents of shantivan.

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