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indi52

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Posted: 11 years ago

#11

^^^

hi aashi,

the sting of pain...

enjoyed your comment. thanks for reading.

Edited by indi52 - 11 years ago

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Horizon

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Posted: 11 years ago

#12

May be she is the one with the power... the power to forgive! how hard is it to go through this excruciating pain of hurting someone one loves.. there is no remedy to it but to burn in this fire of guilt.. but thanks there she is.. to sooth the burns with her analgesic presence and touch.

Always love how you touch upon his guilt filled moments... you are right they never really acknowledged that they were in love by that fateful night...but loved the way you gave a sense of closure to that night tat love is what brought that haste on.. and peeks everything else.

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chavvi16

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Posted: 11 years ago

#13

aww bless he was thinking of what he did with khushi
and repenting over it
funny they loved one another and yet this is what they did
that sure was touching moment for sure

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RebeccaDaphne

@RebeccaDaphne

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Posted: 11 years ago

#14

Lovely OS Indi, love his remorse and how their love shone through! The beginning bit reminds me of the New Years scene when he was hiding from Buaji in her bed! Sweet memories ,

Happy New Year!

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mayurisb80

@mayurisb80

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Posted: 11 years ago

#15

Bitter sweet memories that don't give you the peace you crave...That was a beautiful chapter ...

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indi52

@indi52

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Posted: 11 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: Horizon
May be she is the one with the power... the power to forgive! how hard is it to go through this excruciating pain of hurting someone one loves.. there is no remedy to it but to burn in this fire of guilt.. but thanks there she is.. to sooth the burns with her analgesic presence and touch.

Always love how you touch upon his guilt filled moments... you are right they never really acknowledged that they were in love by that fateful night...but loved the way you gave a sense of closure to that night tat love is what brought that haste on.. and peeks everything else.

thanks for reading, horizon. i have always hated that girl shut out in the cold sleeping on the floor thing. i accept this strange powerful character as he is... there is excess in him of all kinds, but inside all that that incredible sweetness and sense of fairness, even when he transgresses he will realise at some point and not be easy on himself... he will not sugar coat. and so it is really wonderfully that she, with her "analgesic" (niiice word) self is in his life. or a character like this can combust blaming himself too...

that love thing just happened as i wondered where the story would progress to. i was quite surprised when i heard him blurt that out. 😳 and her too. i find this relationship quite life like in many ways. and if anger remains at the end point of a story, it no longer bothers me. a bit like a touch serious european or bengali/hindi cinema huh amid all the dreamy romance! 😆

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indi52

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Posted: 11 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: cinthiann1758
Indi, loved it. I was just watching the episode yesterday and laughing hysterically about the crick in his neck. I kept saying to myself, "Arnavji, you deserve it!" Now he knows how she must have felt. In a way I thought he did that to punish himself for treating her so poorly. Sure his excuse was so Di wouldn't catch cold from Khushi but that was just his excuse. Like your story, he couldn't stand what he was putting her through. Arnav Singh Raizada loved Khushi Kumari Gupta...Singh Raizada, BAS! Dammit!

Brilliant Indi👏👏👏

ha ha, i have no kind feelings, none, toward him for leaving her out there. and the boy didn't even apologise for that in that list of his, all of which had me going awww of course. she poor thing has no idea how to be really happy at someone else's pain, a little discomfort maybe, but the man couldn't move his neck. i felt bad for him but stayed resolute in my "never shall i forgive you".

por asr. first, he is only fictional... then he has to deal with phangurrls like me... what the.

thank you, cynthia, for lining it...

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indi52

@indi52

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Posted: 11 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: Arshi.Sugi.IPK
Awesome OS 😊

thank you, arshi.sugi.ipk... good to see you.

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indi52

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Posted: 11 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: chavvi16
aww bless he was thinking of what he did with khushi
and repenting over it
funny they loved one another and yet this is what they did
that sure was touching moment for sure

hi chavvi,

thanks for reading... yeah they madly loved each other, i guess that's why no matter what who did they couldn't walk away... nor not forgive. love is a very different sensation than what sugar coated stories would have us believe... 😆 thank you so much for enjoying the story.

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indi52

@indi52

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Posted: 11 years ago

#20

Originally posted by: RebeccaDaphne
Lovely OS Indi, love his remorse and how their love shone through! The beginning bit reminds me of the New Years scene when he was hiding from Buaji in her bed! Sweet memories ,
Happy New Year!

happy new year, rebecca... you found the story. me thrilled. them in buaji's bed... oh i did everything i could to not think of that new year this year... miss them like mad... maybe that's why it crept into the story 😆. thank you so much for reading and the memories.

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