ArHi OS: Breaking The Rules|| TY note, pg 15

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JCJS

@JCJS

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#81

This was awesome loved it. The way finally they stood up for each other was beautiful. Thks for the pm dear.

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Varsha Dutt

@varsha2KD

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#82

Amazing OS... beautifully written... 😊

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Deepti

@deepti1906

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#83

Comment edited on page 2..:)

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hmm.. guess karo :P

@jas0308

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#84

amazing os!

loved the concept!!

loved how you described about arnav's reaction after first seeing khushi!, their secret metting, his I love you damnit!, khushi's refusal, and then hum bhi aapse I love you damn it..

it was so beautiful!

really this society still has people who has this kind of thinking!

continue soon

thanks for the pm

PS: sorry for late comment!

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piggie

@piggie

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#85

concept hats off...bold n u did justice to it...!!!

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mubina_m19

@mubina_m19

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#86

Amazing OS
I love the concept
You write it very well
Thanks for writing some thing on this issue

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sincereme

@sincereme

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#87

Amazing OS...I really loved the concept...
No one has the right to snatch a girl's happiness and abandon her from living her life just bcuz she is a widow...
Loved Arnav and his determination...
Their love succeeded and they found their happiness...
Just loved it...

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J P

@TwilightStar_JP

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#88

Lovely one shot! I know I'm late! apologies for the same!

Wonderfully penned down!

And you highlighted one of the most important woman backwardness!!

Widow re-marriage!

Lovely concept!

Amazing choice of words!

Emotions intact!

Loved it!

Cheers