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Posted: 11 years ago
#21
This was beautiful, truly. For someone who doesn't indulge in many non-ArHi stories I loved this one, a lot.

Lavanya Kashyap was a character whom I, unlike other, loved from the beginning, to an extent. As the story progressed I loved her more.

I mean, she was so relatable. Which one of us didn't fall for ASR? And what made it better was that she wasn't there for money.

Sure she could be crude at times, but aren't we all at times. No matter how much we don't want to judge we do, it's inevitable. La judged Khushi, but she also came to love her.

Lavanya suffered a unrequited love, one of the worst kinds. Yet she took it on with a smile. Unlike Arnav and Khushi who were there for each other even when their hearts weren't.

La's parting words to ASR on the show always struck a cord with me so I guess this OS brought back some memories.

For the girl who went from Biatch to Bffl. And for you who wrote such a beautiful OS. It was amazing! :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
#22

Originally posted by: Titaliya_AP

This was beautiful, truly. For someone who doesn't indulge in many non-ArHi stories I loved this one, a lot.

Lavanya Kashyap was a character whom I, unlike other, loved from the beginning, to an extent. As the story progressed I loved her more.

I mean, she was so relatable. Which one of us didn't fall for ASR? And what made it better was that she wasn't there for money.

Sure she could be crude at times, but aren't we all at times. No matter how much we don't want to judge we do, it's inevitable. La judged Khushi, but she also came to love her.

Lavanya suffered a unrequited love, one of the worst kinds. Yet she took it on with a smile. Unlike Arnav and Khushi who were there for each other even when their hearts weren't.

La's parting words to ASR on the show always struck a cord with me so I guess this OS brought back some memories.

For the girl who went from Biatch to Bffl. And for you who wrote such a beautiful OS. It was amazing! :)


Heyy...thanks dear...I am glad you liked it...😊 ☺️
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Posted: 11 years ago
#23
This was a truly wonderful OS.
So beautifully you have described the situation, lavanya's inner thoughts, their relationship's dynamics.

Loved reading it.😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#24

Originally posted by: avika_ShArMa

This was a truly wonderful OS.
So beautifully you have described the situation, lavanya's inner thoughts, their relationship's dynamics.

Loved reading it.😊

Thanks dear ☺️ 😊
Posted: 11 years ago
#25
That was really beautifully written.
Could feel Lavanya's pain. And Arnav's unsaid remorse.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#26
This is heart wrenching, yet so beautiful!
I loved that line about being a spectator of one's own dreams. Stunning lines! :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
#27

Originally posted by: mistyrains

This is heart wrenching, yet so beautiful!

I loved that line about being a spectator of one's own dreams. Stunning lines! :)

Thanks a bunch dear :D
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Posted: 11 years ago
#28
wow, this was so good, u kind of gave it a great slant and i enjoyed seeing it from la's side, even though i loved their break up in the show too. and i absolutely adore this song, one of my faves 😛
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Posted: 11 years ago
#29

This is beautiful! I can't believe I never came across this until today!
Such a lovely take on Arnav-Lavanya's breakup.

Loved your writing style and your choice of words. It's brilliant!
Especially this It's a funny thing how one becomes a mere spectator of one's own dreams.
This is so true.

I've always admired Lavanya, how gracefully she left realizing that it wasn't meant to be. And I love this take!


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Posted: 11 years ago
#30
Very beautifully written! It was heart-breaking to see Lavanya put up a happy faade for Arnav.
I see that this was your first piece of writing. Very well done. You should continue to write more and you'll always find a reader in me. 😊

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