Milestones (OS) - Page 4

Originally posted by: .sobtian.

This is beautiful! I can't believe I never came across this until today!

Such a lovely take on Arnav-Lavanya's breakup.

Loved your writing style and your choice of words. It's brilliant!

Especially this It's a funny thing how one becomes a mere spectator of one's own dreams.

This is so true.

I've always admired Lavanya, how gracefully she left realizing that it wasn't meant to be. And I love this take!

Originally posted by: esamoe

Hey sweety really awesome OS...

I like your writing style and would hope to read more Arhi stories from you..I think it was a nice closure to they breakup.

Originally posted by: pmpm1

Very beautifully written! It was heart-breaking to see Lavanya put up a happy faade for Arnav.

I see that this was your first piece of writing. Very well done. You should continue to write more and you'll always find a reader in me. 😊

Originally posted by: fortuna

Thanks a lot swthrt 😊

Fabulous piece of work. What imagination. I always felt the respect Arnav and Lavanya shared with each other. I can still remember the day when they actually parted ways and the emotion I saw in their eyes. It almost looked like love and you could see the deep sadness in their parting. 😭