Arshi OS - Always Together (Index of Arhi contest OSs added - pg 6)

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DurgaS

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Posted: 11 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: deeps_92

I loved this OS...

Guest house scene...no IPKKND fan can forget it...with this OS u gave a new meaning to tat scene itself...⭐️⭐️⭐️

it was superb👏👏👏...according to me this was the best in the genre romance...loved it

after reading it, I actually felt little jealous on you as I never get these kinds of amazing thoughts to write...

write more os like this...

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deeps

Wow, this coming from the winner of the popular award! Thank you so so much, Deeps. I am elated. This wasn't an easy genre for me. I haven't written an out and out romantic story till now and I am not even comfortable writing intimate romantic moments. So, I had to think hard to weave a proper story and revolve it around some romance, the sort that I would be comfortable writing in. This was the most difficult story for me. I never had to work so hard on a story. So, I am thrilled to get some lovely comments such as yours for this OS. Thanks you once again. 😊

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DurgaS

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Posted: 11 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: AbiVakeeshan
Awesome!

Thank you. Lovely DP. 😊

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DurgaS

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Posted: 11 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: twinki
Nice os

Thanks. 😊

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Sugi

@Arshi.Sugi.IPK

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Posted: 11 years ago

#14

Lovely os 😊 Arshi talked abt guest house incident very nice 😊

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DurgaS

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Posted: 11 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: Horizon
Loved it Durga. Great closure to an epic encounter between them that became an epic for the fans as well. Loved when he asked when was the first time she sat in his SUV? Ofcourse Khushi wouldn't know.. conciously that is... but for him it was THE most memorable.. as you beautifully described.. lot of first time things there for Arnav Singh Raizada.. oh he just cant get over that..
But honestly.. he wasn't wrong in sending her there... Khushi's harmless interfering with his personal matters started then..😆 and he genuinely didn't know the status of the building.

Thanks Durga.

Thanks Horizon. Yes, another closure after Memories, my first OS. 😊

Yes, he wasn't wrong in sending her away. Only, he had no idea that the place he was sending her to was so dangerous. I wouldn't say Khushi was interfering from this point. She was simply answering Nani's questions and she had thought that everyone already knew about them. Nani in those days was in super detective mode, working out all ploys to find out about the girl in her Chote's life.

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DurgaS

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Posted: 11 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: Arshi.Sugi.IPK
Lovely os 😊 Arshi talked abt guest house incident very nice 😊

Thanks Sugi. Yes they did. That was an important phase in their life.

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chavvi16

@chavvi16

Stunner

Posted: 11 years ago

#17

ahhh when he sent her to that guest house
how can that be forgotten
the first time he cared enough to go save her
anj is right he has gotta stop doing this to her
good he got that he cant keep blasting her when it isnt her fault

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Horizon

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Posted: 11 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: DurgaS

Thanks Horizon. Yes, another closure after Memories, my first OS. 😊

Yes, he wasn't wrong in sending her away. Only, he had no idea that the place he was sending her to was so dangerous. I wouldn't say Khushi was interfering from this point. She was simply answering Nani's questions and she had thought that everyone already knew about them. Nani in those days was in super detective mode, working out all ploys to find out about the girl in her Chote's life.

Akash got the que .. but poor khuhsi wouldn't get it with naniji surely in a detective mode..😆

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DurgaS

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Posted: 11 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: chavvi16
ahhh when he sent her to that guest house
how can that be forgotten
the first time he cared enough to go save her
anj is right he has gotta stop doing this to her
good he got that he cant keep blasting her when it isnt her fault

That's right. Thanks for your comments. 😊

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DurgaS

@DurgaS

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Posted: 11 years ago

#20

Originally posted by: Horizon

Akash got the que .. but poor khuhsi wouldn't get it with naniji surely in a detective mode..😆

Yes he did. That was a funny scene. Was thinking, so many detectives we had in the show, Nani, Mami, Khushi, NK and even Arnav in the Sheetal track. Iss detectivegiri ko kya naam doon. 😆