Arshi OS - Always Together (Index of Arhi contest OSs added - pg 6)

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DurgaS

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Posted: 11 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: dmg123
A very very sweet OS!

Thank you. 😳

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DurgaS

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Posted: 11 years ago

#22

Originally posted by: Jyoti_1991
Lovely..

Thanks. 😊

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DurgaS

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Posted: 11 years ago

#23

Originally posted by: ArshiHamesha
RES

going to work...get back to it

Unrest

Durga 👏

Love the Gupta house scene.But the way you made remember all of this and connected it all was amazing. So he did the entire thing just for her.

You know That's exactly I was thinking about farm house...it should be guest house rebuild just for them...but he did his best for his Khushi doing all of this...So sweet of him.

It was the place where Arnav sent her , then rescued her and himself as he couldn't resist loving that lioness that day.Hold her so close to his heart.

Nice Durga...👏

Thanks Arshi. Yes, even I wondered once whether the farm house was the same where the guest house once stood. He loves her so much, he wants to remove all her pain, replace all her painful memories with good ones.

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littlemissstar

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Posted: 11 years ago

#24

awesome..
loved it. 😊

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DurgaS

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Posted: 11 years ago

#25

Originally posted by: littlemissstar
awesome..
loved it. 😊

Thanks. 😃

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smiley-shiney

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Posted: 11 years ago

#26

Beautiful

❤️ it so much

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wiwy

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Rocker

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Posted: 11 years ago

#27

Oh what a beautiful OS Durgey. 👏Very romantic and very touching. In the guest house episode, a watershed in their relationship, how close Arnav was to losing her and how it galvanized him into action! And the spunky Khushi gave him a piece of her mind! I am glad in your story she continued the trend after marriage. But at the same time you have wonderfully portrayed Khushi as an understanding and forgiving wife. Just like Maa had wanted Chhotey's dulhan to be! And Arnav knows how much Khushi cares for him. That is why he loves her so and feels remorseful everytime he makes her cry. Beautifully written! I am proud of you, my friend! ⭐️

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DurgaS

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Posted: 11 years ago

#28

Originally posted by: Swaran13
Nice one

Thanks. 😊

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DurgaS

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Posted: 11 years ago

#29

Originally posted by: smiley-shiney

Beautiful

❤️ it so much

Aww, thanks. Very happy that you loved it so much. 😃 😳

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DurgaS

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Posted: 11 years ago

#30

Originally posted by: wiwy
Oh what a beautiful OS Durgey. 👏Very romantic and very touching. In the guest house episode, a watershed in their relationship, how close Arnav was to losing her and how it galvanized him into action! And the spunky Khushi gave him a piece of her mind! I am glad in your story she continued the trend after marriage. But at the same time you have wonderfully portrayed Khushi as an understanding and forgiving wife. Just like Maa had wanted Chhotey's dulhan to be! And Arnav knows how much Khushi cares for him. That is why he loves her so and feels remorseful everytime he makes her cry. Beautifully written! I am proud of you, my friend! ⭐️

Really Wiwy. Yay, I am jumping with joy (in my mind, that is). I am glad you loved it. This was a difficult one for me to write. I was stuck a couple of times as to how I should proceed. Took me about 3-4 days to conceive the full story outline. And the biggest challenge was make it as romantic as possible. 😆 I am so happy that it is well received and getting good comments too. 😳 😃