ArHi Where Do We Go Worng upd part 3 PG 6 - Page 2

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ARSHIANDI thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
#11
awesome di👏
pls nxt chap asap😃
nd pm me too
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Posted: 11 years ago
#12

Originally posted by: ARSHIANDI

awesome di👏

pls nxt chap asap😃
nd pm me too



i had not started sending pm..i had to update then i'll pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
#13
Awesome update maria...superb
They are married and fight so much after marriage and khushi is thinking he has an affair with someone else
Flashback is nice
Let see how this story unfold
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Posted: 11 years ago
#14

Originally posted by: MeenuArshiCrazy

wooowww

Cool
Daughter
not married
Susan

so many questions



thank you soo much for likking the update:)
yup soo many quesion but will answered soon:)
love
maria:)
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Posted: 11 years ago
#15

Originally posted by: Nickysweet

Awesome update maria...superb
They are married and fight so much after marriage and khushi is thinking he has an affair with someone else
Flashback is nice
Let see how this story unfold
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a a a a go and read the part again:(
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: rupamudra

nice concept dear

continue soon



thank you soo much for your coment dear:)
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Posted: 11 years ago
#17
Read again..they are not married😆
Send me pm and add me to your list
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Posted: 11 years ago
#18
Part 2 AR Fear..!
Yes I do..
Kushi replied while looking downward..
The persist ask the same question to arnav
Arnav:"Yes i do accept her as my wife"
A layer of moister form in
Kushi eyes when she heard aravn saying this...she took a sigh as if she get rid of a very large burden..She was feeling like feather...She close her eyes when she felt arnav lips on hers..she had kissed him so many times but today it is different finally he is hers in every sense...

"Wow Mama you are married to papa now",
Kushi smiles hearing her 7 year old saying this..She sits on her knees and hug Aliya tightly...tears trickle down her eyes as she hug the limp body of her daughter in her hand..a wave of fear pass through her thinking of the future and she jerked aliya more tightly knocking aliy's breath...Aliya try to get away from her but Kushi was not leaving her...Kushi look up when she felt a hand on her shoulder,she look into arnav's eyes with fear in his eyes.
Arnav spoke understanding her fear as the same fear reflect in his eyes:"Leave her,you are knocking her breath".Then
Kushi realize she is hugging aliya tightly..She left her quickly and start checking her breathes and spoke with chocked voice:"Ba-b-y are y-ou fin-e-e-..are you feeling problem while breathing..baby pleaze speak plz"..Aliya chuckles looking at her mom,not understanding her mom's fear...Kushi look at her calm and smiling face and took a breath of relief...She too give her teary smile and murmur "sorry"..Aliya in turn hug her ..Kushi hug her back but lightly...

Arnav look at this scene,he know what
Kushi is feeling,he himself has that fears,he himself felt his breath away when ever he look at aliya's smiling face..Aliya and Kushi is his only world he can't,he just can'y loose,even though he has to fight with god...!
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Arnav and
Kushi enter there with aliya sleeping in arnav hands..Kushi stops in living room and ask for aliya..when arnav took aliya into her room without saying Kushi anything.Arnav slowly lays aliya on the bed and kisses her fore head,he kept staring at the little plump face..She resembles Kushi too but she resembles him more..those beautiful dimples which adore her face,her smile and those strand touching her fore head just like him but her eyes are just like Kushi ,green and shining.She is perfect picture of their love.Arnav smiles looking at her.But then a wave of realization hit him,their perfect picture is dying ,with every second she is moving away from them..And he ,he can;t do any thing to save her,nothing he is failure a looser...Tears of anger,rage,frustration and helplessness of not to save his own daughter flows from his eyes,he kept his face on her hands and cried...He felt a soft hand creasing his head..he looked up and saw Kushi look at him with tears in her eyes too..
He got up from there holding
Kushi hands and drag her to their room.He close the room tightly and pinned Kushi to the door.He placed his lips upon her and kissed her madly..he powered his anger,frustration in that kiss.Kushi didn't do any thing just kissed him back and try to soothe his pain...

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Kushi took a sharp breath and clutch the sheet tightly when she felt arnav moving away from her body and lying beside on the bed.They both kept looking into the pace with out saying thing for long...Then slowly Kushi held arnav hand in her and arnav look at Kushi .They both look into each other as if trying to share their feelings..Kushi move closer to him and peck his lips and whisper:"every thing will be fine soon.."..Arnav move more closer to her and kept his head on her chest hugging her tightly..and slept under the soothing touch of Kushi hands creasing his hairs...

Phew how was it..!
Appreciations and criticism both are welcome:D*see how good I am:P



Please guys kindly mention in your comment you ant pms or not..it will be easy for me:)
I had to make another pm acount..! please tell me whther by work is good enough or not??
Regards,
Maria:)
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Posted: 11 years ago
#19
Oh no.. Aliya is gonna die?
OMGGG

but why this?

and they married?

were they married b4?

Confusion

Can u give a face for Aliya?


Edited by MeenuArshiCrazy - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#20
awesome update
aliya going to die
loved it
continue soon

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