arshi ff: without you... #2, chapters 14 - 27 **completed**

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indi52

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Posted: 11 years ago

#671

^^^

thanks, asha,

glad you enjoyed... i hope to continue next weekend.

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Love.life2

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Posted: 11 years ago

#672

Hi thnx for d pm

Sorry cudnt comment earlier I ws away frm IF for sometime.

Bt catched up on all updts frm the 12th to 22nd.

This story is fantastic goin bet past n present.

Past again into Arnav's childhood n Arshi before n after their hate marriage.

Drawing parallel bet present n past.

Tho sometimes I do get confused reg certain scenario's when u hve chnged frm the show track.

Like the runaway part. when did Arnav ask khushi tht.

Also a particular part when khushi remembers Arnav asking her to live in with him n she gets hurt tht how cud he ask her tht n then he's like you want me as much.

Then wht hppnd is it same as wht hppnd on the show.

Now tht the creep is out of jail how cud they let him off tht too for a marriage cudnt they inform Arnav b4 hand to b careful. Arnav shud have kept a watch on him since he had been having nightmares.

Arnav is still worried abt his di when will khushi come 1st for him why does he alwys blame Khushi when its abt his DI. Khushi takes tht crap when she shud tell him tht he cnt keep lashing out at her for everythng thts abt his DI.

Is Khushi's mom the other woman in Arnav's dad's life. Is the creep privy to wht hppnd? guess will wait for the story to unfold.

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.Brooke.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#673

Originally posted by: -indi52-
and got the song of 2013 to 2012 and got going

I said that as why not our show continued till 2013 sigh 😭 and can be ended on their first anniversary on 14th Feb 😊

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@soni19sweet

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Posted: 11 years ago

#674

hi di need a help i lasread this ff

when khushi

drunk in holi and fainted

and arnav told i will take her care

which part was that 😳

Edited by salooni - 11 years ago

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nadianatalie

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Posted: 11 years ago

#675

Fabulous. Absolutely fabulous. You really captured the essence of as rand khushi. Loved it!

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indi52

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Posted: 11 years ago

#676

Originally posted by: renee.bee
Hi thnx for d pm
Sorry cudnt comment earlier I ws away frm IF for sometime.
Bt catched up on all updts frm the 12th to 22nd.

This story is fantastic goin bet past n present.
Past again into Arnav's childhood n Arshi before n after their hate marriage.
Drawing parallel bet present n past.

Tho sometimes I do get confused reg certain scenario's when u hve chnged frm the show track.
Like the runaway part. when did Arnav ask khushi tht.
Also a particular part when khushi remembers Arnav asking her to live in with him n she gets hurt tht how cud he ask her tht n then he's like you want me as much.

Then wht hppnd is it same as wht hppnd on the show.

Now tht the creep is out of jail how cud they let him off tht too for a marriage cudnt they inform Arnav b4 hand to b careful. Arnav shud have kept a watch on him since he had been having nightmares.
Arnav is still worried abt his di when will khushi come 1st for him why does he alwys blame Khushi when its abt his DI. Khushi takes tht crap when she shud tell him tht he cnt keep lashing out at her for everythng thts abt his DI.
Is Khushi's mom the other woman in Arnav's dad's life. Is the creep privy to wht hppnd? guess will wait for the story to unfold.

renee, hi,

thank you so much for reading.

i know you haven't been on the forum, i received your pm and am delighted to see you back.

sorry, the story does get a bit confusing with all the back and forth in time.

he asked her to run away with him one evening after they had had a tiff and they made up... he meant the honeymoon of course... he planned it like an elopement and took her straight after the fashion show to his suv and drove off.

he had asked her to live with him way back, after she realised that he was not getting engaged and one day he found her in the kitchen and they both lost control... they were kissing on the floor, covered with flour... he felt he needed her with him all the time and asked her...

he later realised, no, he wanted to marry her, the evening he found her talking to lakshmi ji when he came home.

i hope all is well with you and see you soon.

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indi52

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Posted: 11 years ago

#677

Originally posted by: ...SaRun...

I said that as why not our show continued till 2013 sigh 😭 and can be ended on their first anniversary on 14th Feb 😊

lizzie,

i know... how terribly i miss ipk at times... it is hard to explain really. their first anniversary... so much left unfinished, and they say the story has run its course. i still need to see them at the poolside, sitting and feeling and him making her feel precious... she is wearing her red lehenga from the temple wedding... maybe i should write it and get it off my chest.

the song was a bit from my heart too... filmi, but i feel tat way.