arshi ff: without you... #2, chapters 14 - 27 **completed** - Page 58

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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome update di👏👏
very well written👍🏼
waiting 4 next update di😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
"...and maybe a handful of fireflies.

he felt his heart fill with a crazy longing, i wouldn't have you any other way, my jhalli pompom girl, he thought, don't ever change, don't you dare... and remember, mine, you're mine."

You write something this wonderful and then scare us with a missing Khushi.. Not fair Indi di 😛 .. Update soon..
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Posted: 11 years ago
It was a wonderful and emotional update. Feel sad for anjali. what all she had to suffer. Hope she will forget her past and will be able to lead a happy life. You have written the feelings of Anjali very well. Loved how Nani gave her strength. Loved how Arnav picked up all the foods which makes his wife happy. Hope nothing bad happens to khushi. Is khushi preparing for a surprise to her Arnavji or khushi is kidnapped. Hope you will not separate them. Waiting eagerly for next update. Thanks for the pm. IT was a superb update.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Nice update. Anjali's life was not an easy one. She has suffered at the hands of the men she loved and respected starting with her own father. Its difficult for her to trust another man again. Loved how Nani made her understand that she should not compare the doctor with Shyam. The flashback was fantastic. Arnav's pain, his longing everything came out beautifully. He loved the person he so wanted to hate and still was unable to. Loved Arnav and Khushi's little moment. But I hope Khushi is alright. Thanks for the PM :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
Thanks for the pm .great update love it.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Fantastic update
Anjali, i cried for her. Having a limp always make her life a little hard but she face them all with courage and determination. I like her beautiful relation wit her father. No matter how bad husband he was but he dearly love his children. Their father character is still a mystery and i always get lost thinking about him. Arnav hated him because he cheated his mother and that ultimately made us hate him but if he was a beast then he would also be a prince too. I like him pampering Anjali and fulfilling her wishes like a normal father do.
Naniji, i haven't seen a strong matriarch like her. She is smart, confident and fabulous. Truly what would have happen if she didn't took young Arnav and Anjali in her shelter. I think her secret is love. I always pictured her past like that of khushi's present in every way. She must had a very strong relation with her family,husband and would be very close to all. She has every solution of any problem just like khushi. She never back down not even in front of her arrogant grandson, she never demanded anything excessive from Arnav like other used to. But she always raised voice when she felt any danger to her family dignity and her values. She always made sure that history don't repeat itself. She survived all the seasons of life. I adore her.
I love reading a bit about misunderstanding track. Arnav married her forcefully because how much he tried to hate her for ruining his sister life, he couldn't let her go away from him. I want to know more about their relation and marriage more before his comatose. The key to solve his all problems especially trust issues lie in his past. I feel very sad for Arnav the way he hold khushi's hand but he could spoke out his feelings and complains.
Nafrat Paas Anney Na de, Muhabbat Dorh Janney Na Dey...
Love Arnav enjoying the taste of happy normal life with khushi on their honeymoon. His khushi is unique. She found joy in little things unlike other girls who are happy in luxuries only.
He bought strawberries and Gool Gappay for her, yummy.
Still the fear of losing Khushi harbors in him strongly. I guess this feeling will never fade away from him, it might get less but won't be wipe out.
I hope khushi is fine.
They are leaving for Lucknow, at last.
Update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
I loved it today...seeing things through Anjali's eyes...knowing a more about the past...understanding her a bit more...thanks for this Di...
and the flashback from Arnav's POV...u know Di, such flashbacks always give me goosebumps...feels like I can feel their feelings...its beautifully written...
loved ArShi moment so much...ASR and his jhalli pompom girl...i love them dammit...

but now where's is Khushi...what happened...jaldi next update de do...I wanna know more...
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Posted: 11 years ago
I loved this update especially the agony and despair in the mind of Anjali..
You have aptly put the turmoil she had to endure because of her father before and later on because of her husband.
The only saving grace for her is her nani and of course Arnav!

The longing for khushi And her presence around him is so vital for his own presence.

Where did khushi go?an act of Shyam ?


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Posted: 11 years ago
hey...beautiful update...
but m little confuse in one part..."when Khushi was sleeping and Arnav was having his drink"...that part was little confusing for me...

Anjali really deserves a happy life...may be with Mr.Doc

and the last part...it's scary...i really hope she is fine...plzzz
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: 1987Trisha

hey...beautiful update...

but m little confuse in one part..."when Khushi was sleeping and Arnav was having his drink"...that part was little confusing for me...

Anjali really deserves a happy life...may be with Mr.Doc

and the last part...it's scary...i really hope she is fine...plzzz



hi trisha,

sorry, sometimes my writing can confuse.

this is a flashback... he has come back home tired from work, this is soon after he forced her to marry him, he still thinks she is a home wrecker who loves shyam, but somehow he can't bring himself to hate her, though he keeps saying that's what he does. khushi too... despite everything seems comfortable in her room and when she wake sup and sees arnav, in her sleepy state she shows him love instead of getting angry. hope that's clearer.. 😳

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