arshi ff: without you... #2, chapters 14 - 27 **completed**

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ranogill

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Posted: 11 years ago

#421

At least arnav had one thing going for him that he did not marry lavanaya and then fell for khushi like his father did...before marriage you got right to change your mind ...but if he betray khushi after marriage with other woman then indeed his like his father...brilliant story

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nishu_shorna

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Posted: 11 years ago

#422

Originally posted by: indi52
^^^

nishu_shorna,

thank you thank you and thank you.

i am so so glad you enjoyed the chapter.

even i had no idea seriously how entangled i'd get while writing the story... but somehow all these characters had things in them... i am still wondering about nk and mama ji... and of course our sweet venomous shyam baby.
Haaww...😲 if he is sweet then I am the president of America...
@ blue bring it up Di...

you like vijay verma i hope... and the anjali that is trying to rebuild her life.
like it??? I am LOVING it...

you liked thanda thanda breakfast scene? hayee... it's such fun to write all that stuff. asr and kkg leap around doing crazy stuff in my head... better than going to a bar or a theme park or anything... just let them loose inside you.
that's true...they are the best for their uniqueness...

hope all good.
don't worry... nothing terrible will happen which saccha pyaar cannot handle... 😆
Thanks for the assurance...😛

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indi52

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Posted: 11 years ago

#423

^^^

ranogill, hi 😳

and thanks for reading.

yes, asr has a fear and he needs to tackle it i think... so this is possibly facing that demon head on... he acted with conscience toward lavanya... maybe he didn't realise her feelings and he certainly did never plan to feel this way about kkg... but he did feel things... and he is hard on himself always... i hope this journey is useful for him...

thank you so much for liking the story... and your point is totally valid... i know he is nothing like his dad... he will find out i bet. there is also that love he feels for his fallen idol... oh the man has a lot to deal with.

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RizArshi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#424

Arnav has never wanted to be anything like his father but the past seems to make him feel that he was indeed his father's son. But there is a difference. When he realized he was doing wrong with Lavanya, he went to her straightaway and confessed that they can't be together. While his father was dishonest to both the ladies. Felt bad for Arnav. But when Khushi is with him, he will be alright no matter what happens. Their Nainital days are going great. Loved their romance and little nok jhoks. I am glad that Anjali is progressing too. Mami was always fiercely protective towards all her children. I hope in an attempt to safeguard her child, she doesn't ruin it for her. Akash and Payal were lovely. Nice chapter. Thanks for the PM :)

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javeria

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Posted: 11 years ago

#425

Fantastic update

I love Payal and Akash strong relation. Akash is well aware of her wife insecurities for her baby sister n he is always present to fade them away as a friend. She is a perfect sister n Akash a perfect brother for Khushi.

They knew the truth behind Arnav and Khushi elopement. If past repeats itself ever again I am sure Akash n Payal won't tolerate any mishap troubling Khushi. Khushi is very lucky to have so many people to take care her, love her unconditionally. It's all the fruit of her investment of love in every relation she have. Now she is getting it all back with interest.

Pyaar soodh sameeth wapis

Wow Payal and Akash are going to live the joy of being parents. Everyone will be ecstatic espacially Khushi when they will break this awesome news.

Anjali is getting confident n brave. I love the conversation of her with vijay. She never had any mature conversation with anyone, not even with Arnav neither Shyam. She has found her other half and a true friend in vijay.

Vijay's story is so sad n emotional. 😭Poor guy 😒he saw his lover dying in front of his eyes and he couldn't do anything. It feel terrible being helpless.

I like that he feel alive when ever he meet Anjali n spend his time with her.

But one thing bug me is that why is that girl, Anajli. I am sure there must be other women who had tried to date him but what so special he feel about Anjali.

Nani is always very helpful n understanding. She is a conservative lady but she is all aware of every modern trend. she observe everything very closely and she has also got ample of experience She is getting positive vibes from vijay n she knows that vijay's friendship will help more to take Anjali completely out of her shell. She has never been wrong.

The honeymoon period is going great. Arnav is fulfilling khushi's every wish.

Khushi once spoke to her mother that her every wish becomes fulfill before coming out of her mouth.

Hamari har iccha humaray kehnay se pehlay hi poori ho jati hai

That's what is happening now. Arnav is making her feel very special and fulfilling her every wish. Her wish is his command.

Both are happy after a very long time and that's wonderful.

Arnav will never be like his father if he take decision from his heart because he carries the heart of his mother. He just need need to be Arnav, just Arnav, bitwa of his nani, chottey of his Di and laad governor of khushi, then everything will be fine in his life. Moreover he is always honest whether loving anyone or hating it. He is not confuse as his father who betrayed two ladies. When he didn't feel like having relationship with lavanyah he told her honestly neither he gave any hope of marriage to lavanyah that their relation will end up getting married to each other.

Waiting for the next update excitingly

P.S. I love the banner of this update.

Edited by Javeria3991 - 11 years ago

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indi52

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Posted: 11 years ago

#426

Originally posted by: RizArshi
Arnav has never wanted to be anything like his father but the past seems to make him feel that he was indeed his father's son. But there is a difference. When he realized he was doing wrong with Lavanya, he went to her straightaway and confessed that they can't be together. While his father was dishonest to both the ladies. Felt bad for Arnav. But when Khushi is with him, he will be alright no matter what happens. Their Nainital days are going great. Loved their romance and little nok jhoks. I am glad that Anjali is progressing too. Mami was always fiercely protective towards all her children. I hope in an attempt to safeguard her child, she doesn't ruin it for her. Akash and Payal were lovely. Nice chapter. Thanks for the PM :)

hi rizarshi,

thanks for reading.

yes, arnav sigh raizada is nothing like his father... but i have often felt that question in him rising, and a complete rejection of a man he dearly loved... his fallen hero.

being the thinking, conscientious man he is.. he needs to ponder this... you are right, the moment he ralised what was happening, he went and told lavanya that he couldn't go on... one of the finest scenes of ipk, perhaps television in india, perhaps more. he said to himself, maybe i have been unfair to lavanya from the word go. but here he faces a demon he has tried not to look at, it worries him so... am i like my father?

now that he has love, he feels love, he has his life mate with him, i think he will ask these difficult questions and arrive at his own conclusions.

i love the complexity of arnav... and his strength and sense of purpose.

glad you enjoyed the chapter, i do hope mami ji doesn't do something silly. 😆

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indi52

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Posted: 11 years ago

#427

Originally posted by: Javeria3991
Fantastic update
I love Payal and Akash strong relation. Akash is well aware of her wife insecurities for her baby sister n he is always present to fade them away as a friend. She is a perfect sister n Akash a perfect brother for Khushi.
They knew the truth behind Arnav and Khushi elopement. If past repeats itself ever again I am sure Akash n Payal won't tolerate any mishap troubling Khushi. Khushi is very lucky to have so many people to take care her, love her unconditionally. It's all the fruit of her investment of love in every relation she have. Now she is getting it all back with interest.
Pyaar soodh sameeth wapis
Wow Payal and Akash are going to live the joy of being parents. Everyone will be ecstatic espacially Khushi when they will break this awesome news.
Anjali is getting confident n brave. I love the conversation of her with vijay. She never had any mature conversation with anyone, not even with Arnav neither Shyam. She has found her other half and a true friend in vijay.
Vijay's story is so sad n emotional. 😭Poor guy 😒he saw his lover dying in front of his eyes and he couldn't do anything. It feel terrible being helpless.
I like that he feel alive when ever he meet Anjali n spend his time with her.
But one thing bug me is that why is that girl, Anajli. I am sure there must be other women who had tried to date him but what so special he feel about Anjali.
Nani is always very helpful n understanding. She is a conservative lady but she is all aware of every modern trend. she observe everything very closely and she has also got ample of experience She is getting positive vibes from vijay n she knows that vijay's friendship will help more to take Anjali completely out of her shell. She has never been wrong.
The honeymoon period is going great. Arnav is fulfilling khushi's every wish.
Khushi once spoke to her mother that her every wish becomes fulfill before coming out of her mouth.
Hamari har iccha humaray kehnay se pehlay hi poori ho jati hai
That's what is happening now. Arnav is making her feel very special and fulfilling her every wish. Her wish is his command.
Both are happy after a very long time and that's wonderful.
Arnav will never be like his father if he take decision from his heart because he carries the heart of his mother. He just need need to be Arnav, just Arnav, bitwa of his nani, chottey of his Di and laad governor of khushi, then everything will be fine in his life. Moreover he is always honest whether loving anyone or hating it. He is not confuse as his father who betrayed two ladies. When he didn't feel like having relationship with lavanyah he told her honestly neither he gave any hope of marriage to lavanyah that their relation will end up getting married to each other.
Waiting for the next update excitingly

P.S. I love the banner of this update.

thank you, javeria.

your words are moving... arnav singh raizada has teh heart of his mother, you say... and that never lies.

i too always felt that his strong conscience, his cleanness came from his mother. actually i also felt if there was anyone touched by his father's kind of slightly fuzzy, not too honest thinking, it was anjali. layers i speak of, not absolute black and white things.

he has something of his dad... gussa.

but the reason for his and what triggers it are quite different from his father's who seemed to have a streak of entitlement and selfishness along with irresponsibility in his.

i feel asr's gussa saved him from falling apart too.

i am beginning to feel my way around anjali and vijay verma... no idea yet if this works, or what.

i also think payal was a strong girl who was always khushi's jiji and would do anything for her... it is really difficult for her to accept the horror her sister endured... and yes, she'd going to have a baby... so she is temperamental too 😆.

akash has a tender love for asr as we have seen in ipk... would love to see it at some point.

hey, thanks so much for liking the chapter... i actually quite loved writing it. took me two days but finally it clicked. you like the edit? i'd used it for my take on nainital... jazzed it up a bit. thanks.