arshi ff: without you... #2, chapters 14 - 27 **completed**

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RebeccaDaphne

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Posted: 11 years ago

#441

Wow Indi! What can I say, I've been away for so long it's been a treat to read all the chapters in one go! Love it, I can see Khushi and Arnav in front of me as you write. Excellent work, emotions captured wonderfully, big hugs for you 🤗,

Going to read all your other stories for my holiday treat! 🥳

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Great chapter. Really glad that Arnav's emotional infedelity to Lavanya is addressed here. Very well written chapter. Happy Hew Year!

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Originally posted by: mpuhan
superb update Indu!
A vulnerable Arnav with so many genuine questions is heartbreaking. He is absolutely right when he asked why wasn't Lavanya enough for him but he forgets that even if he would have gone ahead and married Lavanya, it wouldn't have lasted coz after a while Lavanya would have wanted and deserved his love which he did not have for Lavanya.
Really hope Dr Verma and Anjali find love and consolation in each other with Mamiji's blessings:)
But my heart is thudding with an unknown fear... the skeletons of the past ... Arnav's recurring dreams ... Sheeshmahal. What has Shyam planned this time? Hope they overcome the strom.

mpuhan,

thank you so so much.

i am so happy to read all the various takes on lavanya and his relationship with her. what i always found intriguing was that almost none of us called him a lech because he was living with one girl and feeling things for another... for many months at that. i wonder if it was in the way it was written or the acting or both.

whatever it was, i think asr is deep and dark with bright streaks of amazing light and he has a mind... he would think of all this at some point... mainly because of his relationship with his father.

he is vulnerable, he is genuine, he is flawed, and yet he is strong and capable and an innocent clean being. thanks for reading... working on mami ji to saty out of anjali bitiya's lifewa... 😆

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Originally posted by: mayurisb80
As always beautiful update...Arnav has his own vulnerabilities behind his stone facade..and kushi understands all that and more...I hope main does not throw a wrench into Anjali and Vijay s relationship...

mayurisb, thanks so much for liking the chapter.

asr and khushi and love and life... a curious four corner game, teaches me all the time... and thrills. i do want to see some day, when something happens which khushi or asr, one of them does not understand... i really would like to find out what happens then. 😳

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Indi 👏👏

Fabulous update

First of all thnx for Payal and Akash touch , that was must needed one.Their relation is always strong yet they never faced the real challenges like ARSHI and that's why they can't reach to the extreme side of emotions.The love is always there but "Shidat" nahin hai...woh ISHQ nahin hai...Woh ibadat nahin hai...which brings your heartbeat up to the level where two can see, hear, feel and do all which a devotee of God does as Khuda aur Mohabbat becomes one in ISHQ.

But Akash did prove Khushi's bro in a true sense.Love that touch and Payal is always her pillar.Me luv they know the ARSHI elopement and why not Khushi's DM will make everyone realize her sacrifice 😊

Awww...they are becoming parents ...you are closing all the loops😊

Anjali is not a scary one any more and she is into this Vijay's thing.Poor guy had to see his lover dying in front of him.That's cruel reality and dream to get over.

Naniji dance wali Naniji is the best.She knows how to adjust with the kids choices and that's what I always admire in elders , they need to be open minded but doesn't happen that often.She was way wiser in her acts.

Now the honey bunnys.Their relationship is the most weird and amazing of all.Their style of hostility is their love making all the time with words, with expressions, with everything.That's IPK style and ARHI style.

His Dukh is always there eating him alive till he submerges in his relation up to the point where there is no rom of this feeling...life with full house of commodities...wife to adore, kids to cherish, and everything along with it ...because the LOVE of all of this will take these thoughts at the back seat and future will shape up as Khushi was right...zindagi ka hissa ...everything becomes Hissa...

Must say...LOVE THE BANNER and waiting for Sheesh Mahal😊

faiqa,

thanks for that take on my nacheez chapteriya. 🤗

see, payal has to have bachhe kacche... otherwise aloo kumar and poori kumari or whatever it is that their masi wants to call them, how will that happen? 😆

love your words on ishq... woh ishq hi kya if it hasn't been tried to the hilt and burned and almost died and returned again, a bit changed each time, touched by the lesson, yet always deep inside, the same the very same. the day they set eyes on each other the first time, their future was sealed... worlds shifted, tectonic plates moved, and what was born would never be denied...

not all loves perhaps are like that.

maybe only a few have this written in their lives.

to many it may seem like too much, a whole lot of melodrama... but if you dare, ishq will come to you and take you on that ride. enjoy kijiye.

your hunny bunny log to happy happy i say... my mami ji side is so wanting to make them suffer a bit... taki ishq bade.

ha ha.

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indi52

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Posted: 11 years ago

#446

Originally posted by: ...SaRun...
Awesome update.Dr Verma's story was very touchy.
So glad that you brought Khushi's sudden wedding issue into the story as Payal also knew the reason for that.Payash going to have family now.
Beautifully knitted their first visit to Dhabba with their honeymoon.
His father really badly affect his life but it is good that he is addressing it with Khushi who was there to sooth his hurting heart.
Happy new year to you and your family.

lizzie 🤗

always lovely to see you. and thanks so much for reading. yeah, got to address that relatioship with his dad. the more i write, the more i see, how the story had not at all "run its course" 😆 😆 but yes, it would be difficult to stick to nafrat paas aane na de... yet, there could be all sorts of misunderstandings and situations which need resolution again and again.

it was ridiculous to imagine, that just because now he is in love with her, he has stopped being who he is... his confusions, his longings, his completely unresolved emotions just disappeared into thin air.

he will always be asr... with all that made asr asr. yes, more evolved... happier... daring to reach out and touch emotions, but not silly and smitten and constantly smiling.

same with madam... she no achhi bahu, i am telling ya. 😆

wish you and your family the best for the new year.

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indi52

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Originally posted by: cinthiann1758
Indi love how this story is heading. loving Anjali as a stronger woman who can find the love she deserves and Naniji giving her permission!! love that woman!
I told Faiqa, the white linen bed, uff! loving each other all day! Naughty girl crossing over to my side heh?
Payal a mommy...so happy.

This part my fave and I can't wait, Sheesh Mahal. Everything must be wrapped up there.
"i feel that is my real sasural... where your mother had her garden... i have never been there after our marriage, will you take me?" her eyes were clear and large and he knew she felt every feeling of his.

Looking forward to next chapter! Happy New year my friend.

cynthia,

i can see i touch your indian soul. 😆 ha ha, yes, if they be on honeymoon i figure certain activities cannot be far from a certain waistcoat man's mind. so crazily exciting to think of these two making love. maybe that's why they never wrote it hyuk hyuk. every time the writer got down to it, he combusted... aaah let it be, let's put cameras in their room instead. reallly what bilge. and though we all said whatever it is it's the best serial out of what;s on offer. that was not the point.

a really good show which needed not to be compared to be loved... suddenly had to be.

no fair. as the very wise say. 😆

thanks you for reading and liking... i am trying to get into this as best i can, because i so need to, but really, writing fiction is not easy... me loving it though.

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indi52

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Originally posted by: RebeccaDaphne
Wow Indi! What can I say, I've been away for so long it's been a treat to read all the chapters in one go! Love it, I can see Khushi and Arnav in front of me as you write. Excellent work, emotions captured wonderfully, big hugs for you 🤗,
Going to read all your other stories for my holiday treat! 🥳

rebecca... 🤗 🤗 🤗

it is you it is you.

so good to see you here... and big huge thanks for enjoying the stories.

i will pm you now on... but read if you like. bas.

we miss you at blast, hope all fabulous. see you soon.

and hope the ishtories make the holidays eve more fun.

really lovely to see you.

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indi52

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Originally posted by: vandana1965
love how the story is going, with ARSHI bond growing deeper and deeper.

hi vandana,

thanks so much. that arshi bond makes me crazy, i want to see where all it goes. 😃 see you soon. and thanks so much.

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indi52

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Originally posted by: anonyasr
Great chapter. Really glad that Arnav's emotional infedelity to Lavanya is addressed here. Very well written chapter. Happy Hew Year!

anonyasr,

thanks so much. i always felt, when he had had enough distance from the whole la thing, he would ask himself... why? one, because of his relationship with his father, a complex web of love hate despair breaking of trust perhaps longing and fear, a fear he might have even the slightest trace of his father in him. and second, because he is a man of conscience.,.. the way he broke up was clear evidence of that... but he would still ponder. i felt the distance had been done... and as sheeshmahal looms with many questions... this would somehow come up.

so happy you liked.