arshi ff: without you... #2, chapters 14 - 27 **completed**

First Previous

Page

109

Next Last

Frequent Posters

indi52

@indi52

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#401

Originally posted by: cinthiann1758
My dear Indi, I am so happy you took them back to Nainital! How romantic! Him setting things right, changing the past memories to good ones! Thanks so much!
I agree with Sohara when she writes that you describe the inner feelings of Arnav and Khushi so vividly, you help us to truly feel what they feel by your description of their emotions. Brilliant!
Snakewa yeah I agree shoot him!

come, let's go snake shooting together. 😆 😆 😆 i have a feeling, faiqa will insist on joining us. hyuk. we'll all go to sheeshmahal and demolish him together.

thank you for that lovely comment. i just write whatever comes to my head... that it works makes me jump with joy. i felt nainital had to eb returned to... something happened there that day, changed the equation. have you noticed how we all never judged him for thinking of one woman while living with another. something rather adult and together in that.
ah me loved that whoel nainital thing, so here it is.

Quote

indi52

@indi52

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#402

Originally posted by: 1987Trisha
Simply Awesome dear...
Every time Arnav looked at Khushi...he feels peace immense peace in his heart & mind..
She is not less than an angel for him...her innocence, her caring nature, her love for her loved ones and he thinks he is lucky as he is also one of them whom she loves unconditionally

loveddd ittt

thank you so much, trisha.

so glad you loveddd. 😳

Quote

Looks like you are new here. Register for free, learn and contribute.

indi52

@indi52

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#403

Originally posted by: henamani
the way u express how moved arnav is with khusi is just par excellence

thank you so much, hena... good of you to write. hope all well.

Quote

indi52

@indi52

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#404

Originally posted by: ravalisharma06
its was beautiful...
thankz for d pm

hi ravalisharma,

thanks for reading and enjoying. 😳

Quote

Chochoo83

@Chochoo83

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#405

it was awsumm chapter they went nanital for honeymoon 😊
loved it
wicked shayam is back ... 😕
thanks for pm dear

Quote

indi52

@indi52

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#406

^^^

hi yashal_khan,

thanks for reading and so glad you liked.

Quote

wiwy

@wiwy

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#407

All the beautiful Arshi moments I wished for you made them come true. This read like a fairy tale In di. I smelt the roses of 14th December between the lines you artistically pieced.

Thank you. It was a lovely update.

Edited by wiwy - 11 years ago

Quote

Mysticaldivine

@Mysticaldivine

Stunner

+ 10

Posted: 11 years ago

#408

Originally posted by: indi52

you are the cutest... 🤣

no. of course i didn't think of all those things when i wrote, but now that i read it, sounds rather good. especially that gomti thing and lakshmi as mother. peace... kabooter... uff i never ever thought of that... subconscious working overtime. 😆

i love your explanation, suddenly khushi's bakbak which he fell for for its lunatic value, feels cool and deep.

i need you, faiqa, my "without you" needs you. muaah muaaah.

Indi 😊

I am glad you liked this crack head's cracking observations 😆, I told you my bak bak is what makes me insane but if it is enlightening your path with your story then I'm glad I helped.

Quote

indi52

@indi52

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#409

Originally posted by: wiwy
All the beautiful Arshi moments I wished for you made them come true. This read like a fairy tale In di. I smelt the roses of 14th December between the lines you artistically pieced.
Thank you. It was a lovely update.

thanks, wiwy.

it is a fairy tale being spun by a witch. 😆

14 december there? 😆

Edited by indi52 - 11 years ago