arshi ff: without you... #2, chapters 14 - 27 **completed**

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Posted: 11 years ago

#1021

U AGAIN LEFT ME SPEECHLESS...

did she killed that creep creature Shyam...well if she did i will be more than happy...

he and his so-called-father killed Arnav and Khushi's parents twice..he deserves it..may worse than this...

Khushi will always stand beside Arnav...no matter what...Hamesha

i want to see them either dead or rot in jail for rest of their life...

i want to see Arnav & Khushi in peace...

i want Arnav to over come from that feeling of helplessness what he left 14 yrs back seeing his maa leaving him...

I want to see Anjali smiling...happy...live a peaceful life...

this whole update gripped my heart and held my emotions..something unsalable...

The below paragraph is something which really describe the feeling that Arnav & Khushi feels for each other...

they have the same pain...

they have gone through the same painful torture...

they both have lost their loved ones...

& that's why they can understand each other unspoken words, feelings & pain...

till this man who was running back toward danger came, and hurt her, yelled at her, doubted her, shouted and berated and threw her into complete disarray, shook her from deep within, questioned every belief every certainty of hers... then dragged her into his arms and seemed to reach right inside through all the pain he gave to that snapped place and tied something there. a simple tie. and in it she felt the touch of hamesha.

always, forever... he became hers and she his.

they belonged. and that was all there was to it. she never really knew how to give this thing a name. nor asked herself why it was so... perhaps years of talking to stars and an idol made of mud had grown in her an ability to perceive things from another place in her, not necessarily always from her five senses. she just felt and accepted what seemed to be true. an absolute truth...

she knew now that if he was running back to that terrible heart numbing place, he had a reason for it. arnav ji, i love you, said her heart.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#1022

Originally posted by: shiv456
nice update

thanks, shiv, good to see you.

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RizArshi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#1023

Wonderfully written action packed chapter. It gave the perfect closer to the Sheesh Mahal saga. Finally Arnav Khushi and Anjali can let go of their past and move on. Loved it. Thanks for the PM :)

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Posted: 11 years ago

#1024

Originally posted by: Arshi67
Indi that was simply beautiful.
Arnav knowing his Khushi wouldn't balk at anything, Khushi trusting Arnav implicitly to have a reason for whatever he's doing, and that that is reason enough for her.
I liked how you made him turn around and face his demons. He needs closure in order to be able to move on. I think he needed that physical releasing of his anger towards his Chachaji.
I was willing her to pull that trigger, but know that slimeball is just not worth it!
I continue to be awed by your innate ability to express the emotions of our favourite couple.

PS - I love your new signature. That particular scene by the pool was when he'd first smiled at her ajeeb ness, and had looked totally *thud*

you like the ajeeb siggie? it is totally a thud point, i so feel it every time. and i have promised myself i will write a long ramble on just that interaction... 😆

arshi, 🤗 thanks so much. you know i was going along with him running out with her and maybe anjali, doc, akash, rahim chacha and cops meeting them at the entrance, then maybe shyam catching up... was not happy... so i just asked myself what would the man do... and there it was... he would turn around.. even though he wants to save khushi and won't take risks with her. even then. tonight he will take it all on... crazy how characters decide for you.

khushi with that gun in her hand, haunted me that image. promise. ha ha. very drama queen writer.

yes, what you say is all true. he needs head on collision for any sense of the end of nightmare to come.

thanks so much, see you next week.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#1025

Originally posted by: mpuhan
this chapter was both power packed and emotional.
so arnav turns back to finally face his past demons and so does khushi. she doesn't even think to question him as to why he would do that. loved the way you have described how arnav tied up the gaping hole in her heart.
the man who was responsible for so much killings and heart ache is finally brought to justice. but the destruction and pain that he left behind is immense for guptas and the raizadas to bear.

hi mpuhan,

there is mending and destroying, you are so right, both in this chapter. two young people, actually three, no fault of theirs are completely devastated by the actions of one man essentially. asr's father was a weak, drunken pawn, an object of hatred... but chacha ji, he is what nightmares are made of... and no conscience. neither he nor shyam. let's see where we go from here. aww, asr and khushi are so just right for each other. thanks for liking that tie bit. and for reading and your lovely comment.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#1026

Originally posted by: ranogill
So at last they can breath little bit...I kind of closer they got...awesome update

hi ranogill,

yes, at last a little breathing space, an end to the nightmare at a physical level. thanks so much for reading, always good to see you.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#1027

Originally posted by: ArshiHamesha
Indi I have to read two chapters as I have lost the track...

Finally the truth is out there...

Does he care anything at this spot besides Khushi...nope ...She is everything to him...a pure Rose among thorns and his mother showed him the difference and the way how to pluck it without getting hurt...it took him time to learn this painful art after several attempts of getting hurt but he DID it...

Khushi who doesn't have that strength to keep the pace with him but at this spot ,does she care how fast or slow or which direction she has to look ...nope ...He is everything to her...his family, and who knows the meaning of that more than her...

Both orphans , knotted together in this by their mothers...one got dead and other got blamed but got dead in the process but their souls got knotted to make these two one and that was the whole game ...

They are one , they fought as one and today again the FAMILY...and all the elements are there but their union and oneness got victory...

Nothing matter after that...I don't need anything Khushi ...That stands out for me at the end of the day...

Thnx for this lovely Ride...muahhh🤗

muaah to you, faiqa,

what a lovely comment... and that telling me about how they got tied... yeah somehow their mothers seemed to have left whispers in the wind so they could find each other... and no matter how scream shout one was and how paagal the other, that knot got tied.

i love the way you look into what i write and find things i had not really thought of.

so happy you really liked it. i think we are nearing the end of without you, i see only about three more chapters maybe, max four. let's see, what asr and khushi say to me next.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#1028

Originally posted by: hajr
Thanks for the pm
Really good update.

hajr,

thanks so much for reading and liking the chapter. see you next week.

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indi52

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Posted: 11 years ago

#1029

Originally posted by: yoga123
Awesome part...thanks for the PM

yoga, 😳

thank you so much, see you next week. take care.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#1030

Originally posted by: cinthiann1758
indi brilliant but I must read again before i can further comment. very intense.

hi cynthia,

if you enjoyed it and felt uff... enough for me. 😳 and i am waiting for you to write your next chapter... the diwali girl and her uncharming prince...when, sir.