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addictedx53

@addictedx53

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Posted: 11 years ago

#61

Such open-ended endings are opportunities for optimists like me, who always yearn for happy endings!

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Nidsubh007

@Nidsubh007

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Posted: 11 years ago

#62

Amazing! The love, the life and the vows that exist between Arnav & Khushi were portrayed so beautifully within a short story!!!

Very emotional and I loved how you ended it, giving the reader an option of figuring things out.

Edited by Nidsubh007 - 11 years ago

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Shameela

@Sam_Faizal

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Posted: 11 years ago

#63

Originally posted by: purple_rules
Numb..at a loss of words!!! Spur of the moment - really??? Brilliant writing!! I love happy endings so I am gonna imagine my own end for this story! ArHi and their princess living happily ever after!! Don't whack me ok but I totally thought abt the KKHH hospital scene with Tina and Rahul when I read this OS! Yeah yeah huge SRK fan!! Thanks for the PM!

Me too.. With tears in my eyes praying for khushi to be okay as well.

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stg1

@stg1

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Posted: 11 years ago

#64

this is so so beautiful, loved it ❤️ and i love happy endings so i will imagine that 😛

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Ireena

@Ireena.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#65

Reminded me of srk rani scene in kkhh

But even more emotional and heart tugging.

You are a great writer!👏

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akleoawm

@akleoawm

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Posted: 11 years ago

#66

I don't like open endings. But I will choose to believe the best
Wonderfully written

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Zania

@zaniax

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Posted: 11 years ago

#67

Beautiful os n i believe Khushi survived cause i Love happy endings :)

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hiraah

@hiraah

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Posted: 10 years ago

#68

Wow! I am blown away. You had me at the end of my seat and i was just praying khushi would survive. Im actually very Glad that it didnt have a sad ending.
I have preety good imagination so if anything happened to khushi i would have cried...
A wonderful piece.
With love,
Hiraah

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addictedx53

@addictedx53

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Posted: 10 years ago

#69

Short but hard hitting. A love that may go away, but may find itself in a new form...impending loss, but still hopeful. The open ends leave the interpretation to the reader...your renderingnof such scenes are quite evocative of the emotions involved, it sucks us into the flow!