Blast from the Past Thread #17, pg 72, epi 188

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Crazy4IPK

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Posted: 11 years ago

#351

Originally posted by: DurgaS

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Episode 175

Chumban - 2

Lagaayi shart ke dikhe uska baukhlaya chehra

Dikhe gaalon ki laali hote aur gehra

Daudh chali wahaan se chodkar shart adhoora

Kya ye khwaish bhi thi ke wo shart kare poora?

Takraar ki vajah bani zara si haldi

Hasee rukwane usey dupatte pe mal di

Khule baalon se phir chid gayi behas

Na kiya jatan, khulasa vajah ka hua sahaj

Khel hi khel mein shart ho gaya poora

Shart hi tha, ya maamla tha koyi dooja?

Na kare koyi ikraar apne haal ka

Na koyi theek hai, asar hai ye uss baat ka

Pehle na kabhi aisi huyi haalat

Na pehle huyi aisi uljhan

Phir kyun khoya sa rehne lagaa

Kyun bechain kare uska chumban

Translation:

Made a challenge so that her flustered face could be seen

Her cheeks becoming redder can be seen

She ran away from there leaving the challenge incomplete

Was this wish also there that she complete the challenge?

A little turmeric became the reason for conflict

Which was rubbed on to the dupatta to stop the giggles

The opened hair started the argument again

Didn't try to, the disclosure of the reason was made automatically

The challenge was completed in a play mode

Was it really a challenge or something else?

No one admits to their state

No one is okay, the effect of that matter

Never before was the situation like this

Never before had this problem

Then why am I being so lost

Why her kiss is making me restless?

DurgaS's Index

just wonderful!

loved your edit also.

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Mysticaldivine

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Posted: 11 years ago

#352

INDi

In this whole beautiful segment...my grabber is this

how come wise, deep beauty is sleeping, not letting her shaitan feel a bit better. he's been trying desperately since that fight and forcing her to remember the contract. disturbed me. but no matter. priya, thanks for that woody allen quote, we're all in it for the eggs really. i want it, mr raizada wants it, and something tells me sleeping beauty will wake up soon and ask for an omelette.

3. after the thursday episode where the towel dancer floored us, i'd written: "i do have a crib i confess. i am not connecting to khushi as well as i want to. is it the writing that's making her tad too strident and sp bahu? or is it performance? or both? no idea. gut again. khushi kumari gupta is far more than this. i hope the problem corrects soon. asr and kkgsr need the other to be completely themselves." and the next day, khushi just got it all back, i was lost in her. had been so wanting to see her looking gorgeous with minimum fuss. and there she emerged in her lbd. has a black blouse ever been this sexy and sat on such an innocent bare back. the straight long hair minus buffaunt, the silver touch on arms and ears, the bindi, absolutely alluring. both times asr chose her clothes, he did a pretty neat job. 😆 fire her designer, employ her husband instead. her huq.

right from that moment on june 6 2011 when they first set eyes on each other, we've been coming toward last friday. one long, unbroken dori gathering pearls, one by one, ah so many many memories. now that a string is untied, a string is done, and the next one begins. an extraordinary tale of love, be prepared for giddiness, dizziness, giggling, laughter, heartthudding, pillow clutching, and tears.

hamari dhakane ek ho jati hai.

it was the breath we took when we first met.

listen. it is here.

Indeed after the reminder of contract I was a bit mad ...regardless he tried his best yet He did the good damage to shake her Trust again...and blamed her for Anjali's situation...He realized it very soon though and his words..."aur main"...and her answer had layers of his questions...

"Agar di kush nahin tou kya aap kush reh sakain gey..."

And then back and forth all the dram for bringing her back in RM and then Dadi...we reached here...but their love and Trust crossed all the 7 rivers of ultimate tests that they didn't need anything...Bharosa is a small word for that...me like it...😊

Thnx for sharing...

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Crazy4IPK

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Posted: 11 years ago

#353

Originally posted by: salooni
good morning all
i will come back soon
trying to make a edit on 21 sept
and also 3 updates today
so have pull socks up

tried this pls sorry if not came out good
first time tried this edit

This is excellent Soni.

You are making me spell bound with your every edits.

It should be on the first page.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#354

Originally posted by: sohara

This is excellent Soni.
You are making me spell bound with your every edits.
It should be on the first page.

thanks sohu

i am so glad you liked

your like means it is really good

took 3 hours to make

i am happy if work a little

meet you in update today

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Mysticaldivine

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Posted: 11 years ago

#355

Originally posted by: salooni
good morning all
i will come back soon
trying to make a edit on 21 sept
and also 3 updates today
so have pull socks up

tried this pls sorry if not came out good
first time tried this edit

This is beautiful Soni...love the texture and color...👏

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@soni19sweet

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Posted: 11 years ago

#356

Originally posted by: ArshiHamesha

This is beautiful Soni...love the texture and color...👏

thanks di i have not use texture here

i have brush the edit and then played with color and brighness

mix of green and blue color

and it came out this

and flower boundary is also from brush t

thanks for liking it

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viv04

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Posted: 11 years ago

#357

@ Arshi 179
Wow great detailed interpretation. Symbolic connection of Shyam, lodged bangle piece, A's tooth and dislodgement was interesting. K receiving the bangles and saree from the groom as completion of the rituals before they hit the temple, nice observation. Hmm complicated mirror images and so much more. Thanks.

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Mysticaldivine

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Posted: 11 years ago

#358

Originally posted by: viv04
@ Arshi 179
Wow great detailed interpretation. Symbolic connection of Shyam, lodged bangle piece, A's tooth and dislodgement was interesting. K receiving the bangles and saree from the groom as completion of the rituals before they hit the temple, nice observation. Hmm complicated mirror images and so much more. Thanks.

Thnx viv...😊.mentioning all and for reading so keenly...all the connections...Indeed Arnav is going to bear this broken glass piece of Shyam with his gritted teeth for his sis...and will give Khushi pain even though he is removing that piece...

Thnx😊