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ASRphanki

@ASRphanki

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#11

Loved the notes concept..
t was very good to see rain scene..:)

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Nandz

@Nandz

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#12

Amazing!! U r such a wonderful writer!!

Simply fell in love with the whole scene!!

All the while i was imaging this scene, seeing it happening in front of my scenes!! And the whole scene left such an impact on me!! I litrally have no words to express. Wish i was as good with words as you are!!!

One could so easily feel what she must have felt seeing him!!

The whole setting, rain , children playing, him playing with kids and she experiencing the same happiness that he was experiencing!!

Simply superb!!

Waiting to read more!!

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Nandz

@Nandz

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#13

Interesting note!!

Loved the discussion!!

Y am in not surprised that ESTJ was arnav! Itnhad to be him only!! Not the one to live in a dream world and follower of logic!!!!

one to have a totally opposite personality and thinking than our INTJ khushi!!

I love how with every subsequent update the lenght of the note in increasing!!!

Waiting to see their interaction now!!

Lovely update!!

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Arshix144

@Arshix144

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#14

What a beautiful and unique way of expressing the story! Your work is incredible :-)

I find myself thoroughly amused, engrossed and fascinated with the story so far that seems to be in notes form from Khushi's perspective. It makes me wonder whether we will end up getting Raizada's POV as well? Loved all the 4 Notes I read so far and I can't wait to read more!

Would love to be included in the PM list if you are sending PM's out for this one at all! Cheers

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Arshix144

@Arshix144

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#15

What a beautiful assessment of ASR's character! As KKG unravels the mystery behind this guy she can't seem to get out of her system we also get to know more about him.

Your writing is simply Extra Ordinary, Loved it! Bring on more whenever you can!

PS. Nevermind about the PM's, we would rather you update this as well! Besides with the story as good as this I am sure noone will mind stalking it, as long as the heading of the thread is updated! All is well! :-)

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Nandz

@Nandz

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#16

Beautiful!!
Arnav is as much a mystery to her as to us.
Yes with every note a different facet Of arnav is revealed! Each side is totally in contrast to his other side! No wonder khushi is totally enchanted by him!
It strange that she didnt even know his name and had already fallen for him!

I totally love this story! How in barely few lines you are able to convey so much more that too so beautifully!! This story defintely deserves more readers!!!
Dont worry! Will keep following the thread!
Please update soon!!

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Preethi

@blackdove

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#17

Beautiful description of her feelings...

Loved the way she was looking at his name in the class-register...

Do continue soon !!!

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katunkka

@katunkka

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#18

This is beautiful. Poetic and everything an art suppose to be. Love it and I would love it if you pm me but if not I'll happily stalk the thread.

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soaringskies

@soaringskies

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#19

short, sweet, simple and cute Maggie 😊

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amus5

@amus5

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#20

beautiful... 👏 the notes seem to be more of her thoughts that flow as a stream of events... looking at the entire vortex of love-life-relationships from khushi's POV an INTJ 😃

its short,crisp and leaves enough space for the reader to dwell in the situation and reason it out by himself the depth of the thoughts...very classically portrayed (felt as though i was reading literature )😃

i find may writers on IF (irrespective of whether they are established or otherwise) who feel compelled to explain the actions and situations to the reader which leaves no scope for thinking - these notes come as a relief

wud definitely love to stalk this thread for updates - but pls always update the thread heading to show the updation

thanx to Mini(Arshix144) for the link...

Edited by amus5 - 11 years ago