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Arshix144

@Arshix144

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#21

^^Yay great to see you here Amu, I knew you would like this very unique and beautifully written take on ARHI Fiction! Loved your comment too! I definitely love the fact that this FF as you put it is more like a live stream of events from Khushi's point of view. There is an air of mystery around everything while we await for more events to unfold and let us discover more of the story and the characters.

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Shy

@st03im

Explorer

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#22

Interesting concept. And I was happily surprised to see that you included MBTI as well. It's quite a hobby of mine. Interestingly, in the show, Arnav was the INTJ, cool, calculating, strategist, action-oriented, while Khushi was his polar opposite, ESFP, emotion-driven, center of attention, dramatic. I always found them to be so in character, you could almost predict how they would react to situations. And now you've made Khushi an INTJ. And Arnav an ESTJ!?!?! Super intrigued. An ES Arnav will be interesting to see. And Khushi as a master strategist, without the F guiding her, that should be interesting too! Super excited to read more and see how these characters develop as per how you've set them up.

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Nandz

@Nandz

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#23

Beautiful ( Arnav style)update!!

Now heart is one topic on which i guess people can go on n on. But in just two lines you summed it all!! Wonderful👏

I love how khushi's dil stops functioning at the mere mention of his name!!

oh god Arnav is a poet too. he is quite multi talented it seems. so arnav has a past!! Those lines spoke of heartbreak! Who would be so unfortunate to lose him? The mystery around him is simply growing!!!

Loved the update!!

Eagerly waiting for the next note!!

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SS88

@SS88

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#24

This note was lovely. Esp the poem.

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soaringskies

@soaringskies

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#25

these notes are cute and they bring a smile on my face😃😳 and nice poem 😊

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Preethi

@blackdove

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#26

Beautiful...

Are u kidding? The poems are absolutely beautiful...

Now it feels as if his heart is broken...

Do continue soon...

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javeria

@Javeria3991

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#27

Beautiful notes👍🏼

Brilliant concept to write a story👏

Update soon 😃

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Arshix144

@Arshix144

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#28

Ah Note 6 is here already, I don't know how I missed it but here I am.

I am speechless again, what a beautifully written poem as I started reading it I thought perhaps Arnav has noticed Khushi too, I thought perhaps this poem is written for Khushi till I reached the ending where he talked about the broken vows and promises. So Arnav has a past, a tragic love story perhaps?!

And the more I discover, the more mysterious this story becomes!

Bring on more M, loved it!

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Nandz

@Nandz

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#29

Lovely!!

How beautifully you conveyed khushi's relationship with her parents in just two lines. we could clearly feel Her pain, her disappointment for not having a good relation with her parents,her yearning for her parents like any other child.

I loved how you connected khushi's pain with arnav's! I think they here a connection is formed between them!!

Beautiful!!!

Waiting for the next note!!

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Arshix144

@Arshix144

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#30

Wow Shika yet another immaculately written piece! I must sound like a broken record here but you write so well that we don't even notice the length of these notes because you manage to convey so much in just two lines.

Nandz pretty much covered everything I wanted to say about note 7 so I will just say bring on more, I am hooked and can't seem to get enough.

PS. Just a quick suggestion, if you can perhaps PM your readers only once just so they are aware of these beautiful notes you are updating and then you can stop as you like! I just want more people to be able to read this wonderful work!