arshi os: no media, please.

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Ayesha

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Posted: 12 years ago

#101

Beautiful...

Loved it😊

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indi52

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Posted: 12 years ago

#102

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hi, thanks so much for liking the story. i am thrilled that so many of you liked it.

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indi52

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Posted: 12 years ago

#103

Originally posted by: I_Dont_Know
I never thought result of banning media can be so good. There are some stories, where some simple moments can bring such a huge smile on your face. This is one of them. Such a good one shot.😊

hi i_don't_know,

i am smiling at what you write... thrilled i touched that spot. thanks you so much.

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indi52

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Posted: 12 years ago

#104

Originally posted by: goofy
👏@Indi Di

Beautiful writing...Love both scenes👏
Love the way you connect their bonding...They know each other so well.Especially Arnav ...

Khushi's love and care has no boundary as well

Thnx😊

thank you so much, goofy,

so sweet of you, such a lovely comment.

how are you? all good, i hope.

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indi52

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Posted: 12 years ago

#105

^^^

thank you, parikc. 😳

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indi52

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Posted: 12 years ago

#106

^^^

thanks 😃 dprover.

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indi52

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Posted: 12 years ago

#107

^^^

hiralhk... thanks so much. 😃

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Putija

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Posted: 12 years ago

#108

Indi a very cute story knowledge of certain other things indeed😉

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indi52

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Posted: 12 years ago

#109

^^^

thanks, chalov, for reading... miss your gana these days.

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Smita

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Posted: 12 years ago

#110

What a lovely OS to read at the start of the day!

I had a smile on my face for most part of the OS.

Stuff that I loved:

How tuned Khushi & Arnav were to the other's thoughts & feelings.

Arnav calling Khushi baby.

Khushi applying teeka to his photo!

The way Arnav told her that since she became a part of his life,his successes were hers. Theirs.

The description of Arnav's smile & eyes. 100 % Accurate!

The line: This is how she always wanted to see him. Made me think about Barun & his smile. Dont we fans always want to see him happy & smiling?

The poolside scene.

Aman getting a bonus & a break. Well deserved!

Great work,Indi! (needless to say!)

Just 1 suggestion/correction- The word for "use" in Urdu,which is generally used while speaking Hindi is istemaal. In shudh Hindi,it is upyog. So when Khushi said "aap chahe jis shabd ka vyavahaar kare.. I think it should've been istemaal.

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