arshi ff: without you... thread #1, chapters 1-13 **completed** - Page 99

Originally posted by: binimoti

Saying itk great would be an understatement, this part was superlative, every inch had emotion, you brilliantly depicted all of it, thanks for pm and it was worth the wait, lovely

Originally posted by: nishu_shorna

What is he going to do...I am afraid Di...terribly afraid...I read somewhere in a comment once that sometimes story leaves you speechless...I happened to me today...I read the update twice...but I really dont know what to say...Arnav's remembering his Maa...then moments with Khushi...decided to not let go Shyam without paying...his desperate need to be with Khushi...only her...asking her those questions...spending a night together as if there's no tomorrow...asking her to not change ever...taking out the revolver...whats gonna happen next...I want Shyam to be punished...but whats ASR trying to do...I am way too anxious...plz plz update the next chapter as soon as possible...

PS: The past is getting more & more interesting with every flash-back...
and good to see Lavanya back...loved how Arnav noticed Khushi's awareness...
loved ArShi in Bike...

Originally posted by: Aplihs

Oh god gun...,..,.I hope its to protect himself and not kill, though I understand the need he feels but stilll

Originally posted by: jg12

Wow amazing update - Arnav's emotions were described so beautifully and the gun part - hope Arnav is not think of killing...

Originally posted by: meem17

loved it
thanks for the update

Originally posted by: indi52

hi nishu_shorna,

you are red. wow. recently, right?

congratulations.

Thanks...and congrats to you too for turning pink..."Indi Di akhon Golapi" (Farha Apu told me U r bangali)

i am sorry for not posting on friday. this time no rash promises, will try to update next sunday.

Its really okay...no need to say sorry dear...our waiting worth it...

don't be afraid. he is asr, he is a thinking feeling extremely emotional but very sharp guy... he will do the best he can in a situation as he always tries to do. but at this moment his mind is not working because of that anger he feels... how dare shyam try to play with khushi's life. i have a feeling shyam will never regret anything as much as that afternoon killer bus he sent... hope he is twitching madly and getting ready for hell.

As much as I rely on ASR's shrewd brain but I easily get afraid of his hot temper...thats why I was so worried...

asr khushi's journey is a tricky one... always problems and challenges... this is one of them... if you are nervous as hell... i am he he glad. the chapter worked. it touched yet another emotion in you. and made you worry for the two of them. that's good, na?

did you like the emotions, his desperate need, his feelings? and her giving in, her just taking him as he is?

I cant even tell how many times the chapter gave me goose-bumps today...and I loved this...

awww, don't worry, nothing bad is going to happen... i am not writing a tragedy here. no.way. yeh romance hai, romance hi rahega...

Ohhh...I am so relieved now...

waiting for next Sunday...

Originally posted by: ArshiHamesha

arshi, salaam and hugs.

you got the whole thing and drew more out of it than i'd hoped for.

this one is about asr, his fears, feelings, tenderness, past, present, all of it. he is just out of a harrowing coma, many experiences there including an entry into another world where he sees his mother.

we change all the time, our life keeps touching us in different ways and we grow. and opening up to life slowly if we let it happen.

asr is permanently changed by that coma... and there is now a readiness in him that hasn't been there before.

yes he broke down and fell to the ground after driving with a mind tortured by memory and elevated lightened touched by thoughts of khushi. she is his jaan, main tumhare bagair jee nahin paaoonga... and now someone is sitting within city limits threatening her security.

i asked myself what would asr do. the answer was he would confront shyam... and this time with a gun. can asr kill anyone? i believe if his khushi is actually harmed or killed by anyone... he can. but at this point... your instinct is a hundred per cent right...yet at this moment he feels he could kill shyam.

in pink... that is so damn beautiful and poignant. oh that fear of being like his father... how it niggles back of his mind.

i so agree with what you say in red... love making is more than physical performance oriented sex, it is survival instinct, it is freeing and beautiful.

and thanks for liking the flashbacks. he did snap her pearl dori... 😳

the motorbike scene, the lovemaking all are in the present.

you love his need to feel free and that bike? i do too. i can see them riding across wide open high ways, her clinging to him, him with his aviators on, hair whipped by wind, shirt flapping, her hair trailing in the breeze, head on his shoulder, arms tight around him, for miles they ride, no destination, just the freedom of wind earth sky.

Edited by indi52 - 11 years ago