arshi ff: without you... thread #1, chapters 1-13 **completed**

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indi52

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Posted: 11 years ago

#951

friday night update... ironbutterfly 😳

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nishu_shorna

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Posted: 11 years ago

#952

Friday toh kitna dur hai...koi baat nahi...will b waiting (im)patiently...

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mayurisb80

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Posted: 11 years ago

#953

its a perfect way of how you have interwoven the past present...its done so well that it carries the story out in a very different way...loved it...

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indi52

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Posted: 11 years ago

#954

mayurisb80,

i want to thank you for reading three of my stories and commenting so positively on all. without you is of course a little differently woven than not cut out for love, i hope you will enjoy it. the past and present sometimes exist in love stories together i think, especially when the story has matured and love has set in, bloomed. somehow in every moment together all the moments together, the ones where that love grew, seem to exist. just a feeling i have.

have fun reading...

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Aplihs

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Posted: 11 years ago

#955

I just came across your story and have not stopped till now. Enjoyed it thoroughly and can't wait for more

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indi52

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Posted: 11 years ago

#956

😃

thank you so much, aplihs.

i feel so happy and grateful to hear that.

updating late tonight. will pm.

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nishu_shorna

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Posted: 11 years ago

#957

Maine sunna aaj yaha update milne wala hai...I'm waiting...

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supriya

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Posted: 11 years ago

#958

Just read chapter 12

the color difference in text for past nd present...was great help 👍🏼 easy to read

aww you got the kiss here too...how adoring...nd tht too in his cabin 😃
Khushi obviously can't stay away from him

so your jhalli babe is plannin to play cupid 😉 so sweet

m likin Anjali nd Dr.Verma's story ...😊

nd the past ...they meet again nd for tht split second he couldn feel his headache
awww i feel bad for khushi she din have to cry because she got a Job in AR

your buliding up Shyam's story well both sides...as Anjali's husband nd how he is deceiving Buaji nd every1 else 👏

Arnav isn gonna let anythin happen to his babe/baby 😳

it was a nice update 😃

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indi52

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Posted: 11 years ago

#959

thanks you, supriya...

how can jhalli be without him? not possible any more... i am glad you liked the update. there is something about anjali and doc verma that is nice... let me see let me see. shyam is always a deceiver... in his nature. unfortunately such people do exist and how.

thank for reading both the stories... 🤗

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indi52

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Posted: 11 years ago

#960

sorry all, i really thought i could update today, but something came up and mind was all over the place. will definitely update tomorrow morning, see you then.

a special apology to nishu_shorna. sorry again.