arshi ff: without you... thread #1, chapters 1-13 **completed**

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indi52

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Posted: 12 years ago

#941

Originally posted by: -afsha-
Awesm FF
Loved all the parts
Plz add me to ur PM list

hi afsha,
i am thrilled you liked it. will pm you. and good to see you.

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indi52

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Posted: 12 years ago

#942

Originally posted by: crazy4ArnavSR
Hy just read your story and I hv to say u r a wonderful writer. I liked it how u r switching in past and present.
And wat I liked even more is the way u r equally focusing on the brother sis part.
Loved the way u wrote about khushi's longing, strength, love and determination to see him back, to have him bk. Very well written.
Welll done!
However, I also want to let u know that since my finals are coming in another 8days...I will not be able to read and post comments for now. But still if u r sending out Pm's plz send me one too. Thank u. And don't end up thinking I m a silent reader. I'll be bk. *wink*

hi crazy4arnavsr,

what a lovely comment, delighted you enjoyed it so much. will pm you. won't fret if you don't show up...

have a fabulous exam. study hard. all the v best.

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laruma

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Posted: 12 years ago

#943

Poochne ki baath hai kya? Of course, your update is awesome and very interesting! Indi I've been wanting to comment on your writing for a long time and finally doing it. I wish I could write like you so I could tell you how wonderful your style of writing is. How do you do it? Words just seem to flow, all perfect, appropriate, at the right pace like a stream gurgling, calm and heavy at times. Just wonderful! I recall how heavy and filled with emotion the first few chapters were and now the tense flash backs with the light and happy present. Simply superb! Love the contrast in ASR in the flash backs versus the present all in one update. Honestly you should seriously consider publishing your writings.

Please don't take too long between updates. Eagerly waiting for the next!

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indi52

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Posted: 12 years ago

#944

laruma,

🤗

thank you thank you and some more thanks. that was such a lovely comment. the feel of the chapters, glad to hear that's coming along... about publishing... while i am totally scared by the thought, i do wish for it sometimes. but for that... must be one's own work. fiction thought up from scratch. but honestly the thought is exciting... i am so glad you like the pace and feel of without you. yes, heavy in the beginning... now opening up a bit. wondering where we are headed. it is so interesting to write about asr and khushi. thank you for reading.

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Amita2014

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Posted: 12 years ago

#945

Just read all the parts...
Amazing story..hooked to it..

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indi52

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Posted: 12 years ago

#946

neha,

thanks so much... glad to hear you enjoyed yourself. 😳

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laruma

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Posted: 12 years ago

#947

Originally posted by: indi52
laruma,

🤗

thank you thank you and some more thanks. that was such a lovely comment. the feel of the chapters, glad to hear that's coming along... about publishing... while i am totally scared by the thought, i do wish for it sometimes. but for that... must be one's own work. fiction thought up from scratch. but honestly the thought is exciting... i am so glad you like the pace and feel of without you. yes, heavy in the beginning... now opening up a bit. wondering where we are headed. it is so interesting to write about asr and khushi. thank you for reading.

Indi

I'm totally sure you can do it, come up with your own I mean. Start with short stories perhaps.

Love reading fan fictions about ASR and Khushi especially when the characters are the same as the show. When are going to update? Just can't wait!

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Sunshine80

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Posted: 12 years ago

#948

Di...I am jst enjoying the story...read Ch 11 and 12 in one go

I love the way u r showing both bonding between bro and sis and love between Arnav and Khushi. It's important...Love sis or wife more is not a question to be arised, as both are equally important for him. My ASR is shatir and I am thankful to you to keep him shatir. Wht's Khushi in for that ASR wants to keep her safe???hmm...will wait. I am liking the small romantic encounters between Arhi...can't wait for next Chapter

Edited by Sunshine80 - 12 years ago

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indi52

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Posted: 12 years ago

#949

thank you, chhotey ji.🤗

i like your cat, maybe asr needs a pet 😳. asr has understood that bus could not have been there in a narrow lane just like that, he believes khushi is in danger and he also believes shyam is the culprit. so he is out to find out all he can about shyam. he of course does not know about the phone call shyam made, because no one has told him...