arshi ff: without you... thread #1, chapters 1-13 **completed**

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meem17

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Posted: 12 years ago

#931

loving it
thanks for the pms and updates

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indi52

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Posted: 12 years ago

#932

Originally posted by: mashira
hein! delish twist to the puchak kiss indi di! 😛and what is it about ASR and why does he make headache sexy! there is really no explainiya about the attraction of this character/man.

ha, all these puchaks and things come up from behind you when you're not looking and land on your story out of nowhere... half the time they make you write words you had no idea you had in you... there is really no explainiya 😆. oh that headache, makes you want to press certain temples, yes? massage a certain neck? 😆 the man makes being rude and nasty and mean sexy, what to do with him hyuk.

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indi52

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Posted: 12 years ago

#933

Originally posted by: meem17
loving it
thanks for the pms and updates

thanks, meem,

and so happy you're loving it... enjoy. 😳

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shanaya_sharma

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Posted: 12 years ago

#934

beautiful update and thank 4 pm

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indi52

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Posted: 12 years ago

#935

thank you, arshisakshi. 😳

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Crazy4IPK

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Posted: 12 years ago

#936

Finally i could make it. Weekdays are getting too hectic because of school.

Superb update.

It was a bit short, but enjoyed thoroughly. specially recreation of the poolside kiss was wonderful. Arnav still has the same impact on Khushi. she still gets tremulous at his mere touch. And smarty pant knows very well how to make her haywire.

Anecdote of the past was interesting, little different from the show. again I laughed at her innocent candor, when she couldn't recognize arnav.

Hmm, so Dr. Verma is visiting his patient's sister! Not bad. Want to see him with Anjali badly.

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indi52

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Posted: 12 years ago

#937

sohara 😳

i just wrote to ami, and you were on my mind... 😆

short? did i write something short? gah, we must celebrate this. at long last, something suddenly over by indi. 😆

of course, she gets all ahem when he;'s around, it's only been a year or so since they were married. i don't think she'll ever be able to be cool about him. and mister also gets all puddly at her sight, or terribly er you know.

for me, khushi was one of the cutest characters ever... and deep too... and hugely needed in our world. she had tradition in her ways and also progress. she could think for herself. she acted, didn't wait around for things to be done to her. i loved her in her initial days. and sanaya was downright superb then. hope my khushi remains like that. praying. if you detect any sign of acchi bahu, alert me instantly.

thanks for reading, my sweet friend. read whenever you like, no rush. and some day hope i will give you cause to dance. 🤣

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indi52

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Posted: 12 years ago

#938

😃

thanks, mandy.

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afsha

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Posted: 12 years ago

#939

Awesm FF

Loved all the parts

Plz add me to ur PM list

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crazy4ArnavSR

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Posted: 12 years ago

#940

Hy just read your story and I hv to say u r a wonderful writer. I liked it how u r switching in past and present.
And wat I liked even more is the way u r equally focusing on the brother sis part.
Loved the way u wrote about khushi's longing, strength, love and determination to see him back, to have him bk. Very well written.
Welll done!
However, I also want to let u know that since my finals are coming in another 8days...I will not be able to read and post comments for now. But still if u r sending out Pm's plz send me one too. Thank u. And don't end up thinking I m a silent reader. I'll be bk. *wink*