arshi ff: without you... thread #1, chapters 1-13 **completed**

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meem17

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Posted: 11 years ago

#751

Thanks for the update
Loving it

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indi52

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Posted: 11 years ago

#752

Originally posted by: renee.bee
Thnx for d pm

Awesome updt.

Loved the present the fb of arshi n fb of anjali's chidlhood.

When did Arnav get carried away wid khushi ws it b4 diwali or after.

Updt soon.

thanks so much, renee.bee... glad you liked the whole thing.

about asr and khushi in the past... there was always an untamed, unmanageable note to their reaction to each other... this scene of love making is from some point after diwali i would think... and i will write a bit about that attraction and his dealing with it in the coming chapters.

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indi52

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Originally posted by: wiwy
Beautiful update. Happiness is filtering into RM now that Arnav has emerged out of coma like he emerged fom his mother's womb. At both times his Di was with him. Nice touch, In di!⭐️
What was the background to him wanting to make love to Khushi so badly?

wiwy,

believe me, i did not know that anjali would remember the day he was born till i sat at the comp yesterday. the lovemaking scene came out of nowhere and got written almost 10 days ago... had to had to be written. really badmaash these thoughts. i knew anjali was standing at the door with kheer, i knew she'd sensed their mother nearby... but then what... and again the thoughts came on their own.

bet this happens to you too when you write... crazy, huh? then i had to read over and tie loose ends a bit... that's when i realised, it was anjali at his birth and sort of rebirth. did not want to make tan tan tan tamasha of it... fabulous of you to get it. i still have no idea how shyam scammed the whole fam... hoping for that to come my way now. all i know is he wil get the dhulai he deserves. 😆

the background to that love making coming up in the following chapter. i just feel his passion for her, even when he has no idea why... his terrible need that breaks conventional barriers... but yes, there was a reason perhaps for that moment, and so will write it.

thanks so much for reading and the your words.

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indi52

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Posted: 11 years ago

#754

Originally posted by: IronButterfly
I just scrapped you today asking for an update and i got it so soon =)

Started on a very good note by Pablo. Really enjoy his work. Surely added a lot to the chapter.

Anjali's account moved me to tears. So heartwarming and true. Most of us, Asian girls have to face this rejection. Our parents may not be vocal on this but deep down there is a feeling that a boy would have been preferred.

More than Arnav and Khushi, this was about Anjali. She totally steals the show here. Her bonding with Arnav is truly unique and special. And he has proven himself of her love.

iron butterfly 😳

telepathy? i actually did not read the scrap... but i saw your like soon after i posted and felt sort of happy. where is her comment i thought... and here you are. thanks for missing "without you," the story so needs readers to miss it. to want it.

so i am looking at pablo and gawking, huh, who's that? picasso? where? i call the man neruda in the head i think 😆... of course just to be difficult his real name is absolutely something else. you like him? love the man's work, feels beautiful to read in the original... esp since i don't understand a word, 😆 though must say the political poems i find hard. most of them.

i am so glad you liked anjali and her story here... this was about her. that meeting after he returns from a coma was crucial i felt (and so did a couple of readers). this relationship is as much about asr as anything else. and i like anjali, she is lovely. that polio and not being a son will shape her in many ways. i was not one of those girls discriminated against... in fact the bros would say it was the other way around. but my paternal grandfather was overjoyed when my brother came along after me and had a grand feast for his rice ceremony in calcutta where they lived. mine was a quiet one with a few people in the place where my dad worked and i grew up...😆 this is an educated lawyer i'm talking about. some ideas are too terribly rooted.

that info is there back of mind when i see girls being treated a little diff.

the little seven year old who was up the whole night the night before his birth came out of nowhere. actually, when something comes like this, and with force, i've now learned to trust it and go with it. you can't design everything.

sorry i ramble. so good to see you.

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indi52

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Posted: 11 years ago

#755

Originally posted by: meem17
Thanks for the update
Loving it

loving it?

aw, thanks, meem.

see you soon.

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nisha_mehta

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Posted: 11 years ago

#756

Brilliant update...beautifully written
The whole family ia thankful tobsee arnav back.
Hope that this time arnav will win khushi love and trust
Continue soon

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indi52

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Posted: 11 years ago

#757

asha_mehta,

thank you for liking the update. yes, a happy moment. well, the two are completely in love with each other... but in life things happen, let's hope for the best. i am happy you enjoyed the family scene... was wondering how to do justice to it.

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supriya

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Posted: 11 years ago

#758

aww Indi 😳

M glad Khushi wasn't achhi 😆 very sensuous update 👏⭐️

wow the romance...he just let her into the bed nd started makinout all over because he felt right...nd Khushi gave in to an extent...so intimidating 😉

Arnav jealous of NK nd Khushi of Lavanya ...how natural but so adoring tht they still love each other to such an extent...😳

Anjali nd Arnav their entire scene...nd how you described Anjali whn she was 7yrs so caring nd such a strog selfless girl...i loved her...
their bro-sis bond so well written 👏
you din leave out Mami tht was very sweet...thanks for bringing out the good side in her 😊

Dr.Verma finally came...nd Arav expression seein his sister all smiles for his doctor...hilarious

Arnav-Khushi - you truly bring the best of them...Fantastic⭐️

Your writing is splendid as always

sunshine her edit...wow tht is one my fav close up shots of those two...so mesmerizing i think it perfectly fit your chapter 😉

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indi52

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Posted: 11 years ago

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^^^

hi supriya,

so happy to see you here. isn't that edit a beauty?

about that little bit of jealousy in both, i think even when they are 96 and 89, it'll be there... so much in love, so possessive in one part as a result of that... feels natural to me. of course, rationally they will be fine with la and nk, but it's the part of us tat we can't neatly explain, that's what i like to venture into and that's what asr khushi are about.

i don';t think he fell for her because she was a good girl, it was that too but had she not been good in the way we want her to be, have a feeling asr would be smitten. he definitely was bad boy and certainly a part of the shaitan appealed to her as did raj kumar. my take. 😆 i am not achhi ladki as you can see.

love is a complex, beautiful, tumultuous thing, i wish i knew how to write about it. but asr khushi did a pretty good job huh.

glad you like anjali... yeah, bro is a bit what the at seeing missy smile so much. and missy has no idea that she is, i wonder how dr verma is reacting... let's see.

thank you for your wonderful comment. so good to see you and your emoticons.