arshi ff: without you... thread #1, chapters 1-13 **completed** - Page 74

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Posted: 12 years ago
Oh my
What do I say!!!
Such a brilliant story- truly touched my heart- I read this story a couple of weeks ago and cried through it - a good crying, mind you - much needed catharsis of sorts. I am stunned at the way you took this one scene which was never shown - and given it the kind of treatment I know the makers could never have. Just for that, I am so glad they did not go ahead with it - I doubt they could have done justice to it, but you, my friend, have totally aced it! Sensitive and mature and still so much our IPK, our Arnav and Khushi... I am sincerely sorry I did not comment earlier but I had been wanting to write something that befit it - seeing your PM tonight (yesI am one of those crazy women who stayed up past midnight to see this show when it ran) I read chapter ten and could not stop myself from commenting.

I loved it - loved the little flashbacks in between - loved the beautiful depiction of Anjali's childhood and her relationship with her brother - loved the beauty and sanctity shown here - loved the fact that ASR is smart and still thinking clearly. Loved Khushi's flare of jealousy - so real - and really so Khushi.

As for your note, I agree with it entirely
Arnav Singh Raizada is a man - who loves his family and his sister is very important- to me, an ASR without these connections is not really ASR - and the Khushi I understood would never have wanted it otherwise- I loved how you showed that here - Khushi giving the siblings their space, understanding what they mean to each other, loved how Arnav reacts to NK hugging Khushi - Khushi is only his - loved how Anjali sees it and understands it - loved your depiction of the family scene, a really sensitive portrayal of Mami. I honestly would like to believe that the makers did want to show exactly this in the show - unfortunately matters went a bit haywire. Thank you for writing this story -

Your story telling touches my heart and warms it. Fills up some little gaps - fulfills little dreams!! 😆
Hugs!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Nice part...
Arnav and anjali's scene is beautiful...the way he understands his sister and comforts her by sayingthat he will never leave her... And he notices his sister's smile...
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Posted: 12 years ago
And I cannot believe you are up at 1 in the morning - liking and replying to comments!!!
Yes well - this is a classic case of pot calling the kettle black!!
What to do - iss craziness ko kya naam doon??? 😆
Goodnight
And I look forward to more... 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: chitrajay

Oh my
What do I say!!!
Such a brilliant story- truly touched my heart- I read this story a couple of weeks ago and cried through it - a good crying, mind you - much needed catharsis of sorts. I am stunned at the way you took this one scene which was never shown - and given it the kind of treatment I know the makers could never have. Just for that, I am so glad they did not go ahead with it - I doubt they could have done justice to it, but you, my friend, have totally aced it! Sensitive and mature and still so much our IPK, our Arnav and Khushi... I am sincerely sorry I did not comment earlier but I had been wanting to write something that befit it - seeing your PM tonight (yesI am one of those crazy women who stayed up past midnight to see this show when it ran) I read chapter ten and could not stop myself from commenting.

I loved it - loved the little flashbacks in between - loved the beautiful depiction of Anjali's childhood and her relationship with her brother - loved the beauty and sanctity shown here - loved the fact that ASR is smart and still thinking clearly. Loved Khushi's flare of jealousy - so real - and really so Khushi.

As for your note, I agree with it entirely
Arnav Singh Raizada is a man - who loves his family and his sister is very important- to me, an ASR without these connections is not really ASR - and the Khushi I understood would never have wanted it otherwise- I loved how you showed that here - Khushi giving the siblings their space, understanding what they mean to each other, loved how Arnav reacts to NK hugging Khushi - Khushi is only his - loved how Anjali sees it and understands it - loved your depiction of the family scene, a really sensitive portrayal of Mami. I honestly would like to believe that the makers did want to show exactly this in the show - unfortunately matters went a bit haywire. Thank you for writing this story -

Your story telling touches my heart and warms it. Fills up some little gaps - fulfills little dreams!! 😆
Hugs!!!



chitra,

now we don't have to stay up till 12 midnight, but still i am at my comp most nights at that time chilling with ipk. paagal huh.

thank you for that fabulous post, i am so touched. you really like the story? i just feel such a mad need to write, so i just do. to tell the truth, did i ever think i'd write something called fan fiction? not really. not even the tale of how fifty shades got written excite me enough to write this. but somehow, that releasing of his death shots before second anniversary... just got to me. and here it has brought me.

hope i can tell a meaningful story with all the hotness that is asr and all the beauty that is khushi, actually, adjectives interchangeable 😳.

glad you agreed about the two characters. and the nuances of the story touched you. yeah, i bet asr will never be ok with any guy other than him touching her. and khsuhi will always have a little nahiii about women he's known before. feels natural somehow, not silly.

thanks for reading and every word up there. read... comment when you like, no compulsion. and some day, the singapore brigade of ipk fans should catch up for how can la.


hyuk, just saw comment above... last night i was here till 3am. nothing to say. goodnight.
Edited by indi52 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Siya6490

Nice part...
Arnav and anjali's scene is beautiful...the way he understands his sister and comforts her by sayingthat he will never leave her... And he notices his sister's smile...



hi siya,

so happy you like anjali and asr's scene. that relationship is so important and rather lovely. siblings have the deepest connections sometimes, trying to portray theirs right.

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: ArshiHamesha

👍🏼Indi👏

Really nice and touchy.There are certain things which are extremely compelling.
-His birth , Anjali's prayers,their bond since the day 1 and the Mother's blessings...sibling connection to each other can have a different show separately...it's the most beautiful Bond ever😊
-Their lovemaking while he has commitment to La...but this undeniable pull of her is dragging him in this dreamland the orbit of which always revolves around Khushi yet he denies each time just a Dil vs Dimmag games of his play along in his character strongly to make him do what he regrets at the end...Love it the way you are weaving past in between.👏
-Dr and Arnav's shaking hands is a good sign and the 1st step towards friendship😊
-Shyam is about to come in the pic,how he did it😡



arshi,

sort of thrilling to watch you decipher a chapter by me. i feel kinda honoured. thanks, my dear friend. you pick on all pertinent points and you get exactly what i was trying to convey. really that sibling bond is lovely. real. if i put myself in either ones shoes i can see how terribly important they have become to each other.

people survive hardship in different ways. not necessary that in that situation all siblings will react in the way these two did toward each other. but given their circumstances and characters, they did. i find it interesting to delve into the why of it.

on crooner once, we'd had a long chat about why anjali could never turn against khushi after finding out about shyam's thing for her. i'd felt anjali would be mad at khushi. but now i feel, not really, because khushi is too intricately entwined with asr's happiness and there's nothing anjali would do to harm that... she will somehow find a way not to hate khsuhi.

ah, just rambling. character is so important isn't it?

shyam... i am getting to him by and by. but arshi, the story of shyam in "without you" is dedicated to you. he will get what he deserves here and i hope to see you leaping with joy at that. real life can do what it pleases, but here, we are the creators what... we get our way bwahahaha. 😆

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Posted: 12 years ago
it was another awsum chap ...love sibling bonding beautfill
arnav notice how is di behave while dr came ...
n wht to say abt their love making 😳 but again asr brain start over working 😊
khuhsii really understand them well how she gave space to them,i m loving this story dear
thank u so much for pm
do continue soon
Edited by yashal_khan - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Tumi ki kore eto sundor lekho? Di and her chotey always there for each other. ASR is such a complex character! His dil wanted her but not dimag.And I love that part where Khushi felt a little bad because of that phone call. Though together they have cme a long way, but its not so simple for a wife to see her husband talking with an ex-girlfriend. I would love to see Lavanya back in their life. As a positive ya negative, you decide. Really excited to know about Lavanya n ASR's past.

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Posted: 12 years ago
^^^

thank you, yashal khan,

glad the brother sister love is being enjoyed. it was a lovely relationship. i loved the bossy elder sister act and the oh no you nirupa roy younger brother thing. beneath that was so much connection. each necessary for the other.

you liked the love making? you know, that part came to me first. it was funny, i just had to wrote it down and then look at anything else.

thanks you for reading. will pm you when i update.

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Posted: 12 years ago
this part was everything, emotional, beautiful, sensuous...
You updated after so long time and you gave an update worth the wait, thanks for pm
and update the further part soon

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