arshi ff: without you... thread #1, chapters 1-13 **completed** - Page 75

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: indi52



arshi,

sort of thrilling to watch you decipher a chapter by me. i feel kinda honoured. thanks, my dear friend. you pick on all pertinent points and you get exactly what i was trying to convey. really that sibling bond is lovely. real. if i put myself in either ones shoes i can see how terribly important they have become to each other.

people survive hardship in different ways. not necessary that in that situation all siblings will react in the way these two did toward each other. but given their circumstances and characters, they did. i find it interesting to delve into the why of it.

on crooner once, we'd had a long chat about why anjali could never turn against khushi after finding out about shyam's thing for her. i'd felt anjali would be mad at khushi. but now i feel, not really, because khushi is too intricately entwined with asr's happiness and there's nothing anjali would do to harm that... she will somehow find a way not to hate khsuhi.

ah, just rambling. character is so important isn't it?

shyam... i am getting to him by and by. but arshi, the story of shyam in "without you" is dedicated to you. he will get what he deserves here and i hope to see you leaping with joy at that. real life can do what it pleases, but here, we are the creators what... we get our way bwahahaha. 😆


That purple is all about it is Her Brother's happiness which she is trying to do since the day he born...praying all along and then praying to fallen stars with HOPES .Hopes of making him Happy which in return makes her happy which is the reality.

But in reality It's hard to find...There are relationships of siblings but rare.

I am honored Indi you are punching Shyam just for me...Then do really good damage...I am worse than a child here in this matter...really wanna see him Flat by ASR...

Thnx

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: binimoti

this part was everything, emotional, beautiful, sensuous...

You updated after so long time and you gave an update worth the wait, thanks for pm
and update the further part soon


thank you, binimoti,

love to read that you had a good time at "without you." i will try and update next weekend. hopefully asli duniya will not interfere. are you writing anything these days?

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Posted: 12 years ago
Beautiful chapter Di...liked the way you developed the Arnav-Anji relationship...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: I_Dont_Know

Tumi ki kore eto sundor lekho? Di and her chotey always there for each other. ASR is such a complex character! His dil wanted her but not dimag.And I love that part where Khushi felt a little bad because of that phone call. Though together they have cme a long way, but its not so simple for a wife to see her husband talking with an ex-girlfriend. I would love to see Lavanya back in their life. As a positive ya negative, you decide. Really excited to know about Lavanya n ASR's past.



aw, banglay aro bhalo shoany, eto shundor lekho... thanks i_don't_know. di and chhotey are so good together. glad you think that little uh huh at call from la is natural. i think it is and normal people would feel it, especially since la was living with asr when khushi came to work at rm. have not yet worked out what brought khushi to rm, think it was lavanya as in the original.

lavnya back in their lives? not a bad idea, did cross my mind a couple of times, so had her call him.

thanks so much for reading and that opening line.

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Newbiesoapfan

Beautiful chapter Di...liked the way you developed the Arnav-Anji relationship...



ash, hi, 😳

thank you for reading and liking asr/anji. was a bit worried when i started writing, you know how we all want asr khushi all the time, but then i thought what the, this feels natural... and what a moment in everyone's kife... the man is back after nearly two months. good to see you.

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Posted: 12 years ago
Nice update.
Chapter 9 was superb.
The way arnav came out of coma, the way you described it was beautiful.
'Ja rahi ho' Khushi thought that she was hearing things and her pallu is stuck but it was arnav.
Every one is so happy and content that arnav is back and now he will make Shyam life hell.
Superb work.

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Posted: 12 years ago
javeria 😳

thanks so much. you read both chapters together... that's pretty long... thanks for that. you liked the return to consciousness? lovely. i thought long about that. wanted it to be perfect. always nice to hear it worked. yes mr shyam better watch out, mr r is not in a good mood. 😆

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Posted: 12 years ago
Thnx for d pm

Awesome updt.

Loved the present the fb of arshi n fb of anjali's chidlhood.

When did Arnav get carried away wid khushi ws it b4 diwali or after.

Updt soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Beautiful update. Happiness is filtering into RM now that Arnav has emerged out of coma like he emerged fom his mother's womb. At both times his Di was with him. Nice touch, In di!⭐️
What was the background to him wanting to make love to Khushi so badly?
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Posted: 12 years ago
I just scrapped you today asking for an update and i got it so soon =)

Started on a very good note by Pablo. Really enjoy his work. Surely added a lot to the chapter.

Anjali's account moved me to tears. So heartwarming and true. Most of us, Asian girls have to face this rejection. Our parents may not be vocal on this but deep down there is a feeling that a boy would have been preferred.

More than Arnav and Khushi, this was about Anjali. She totally steals the show here. Her bonding with Arnav is truly unique and special. And he has proven himself of her love.

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