arshi ff: without you... thread #1, chapters 1-13 **completed**

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Cynthia Abruzzo DeSiena

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Posted: 12 years ago

#691

Indi, just lovely. Love the take command ASR. Only our ASR could wake up from a coma and become detective, have strength and kiss his wife like she was the only woman in the world. I disagree with you on one thing, I would have made him make love right then and there.😳 He is our ASR you know!!!😆

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indi52

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Posted: 12 years ago

#692

^^^

hi cynthia,

i am rofling... i took the man far enough away from reality and now the one who knows for a fact how that can never happen (possibly... ) says he should have immediately made love to her. ha ha that's the power of asr, what. but those broken ribs kept bothering me... poor thing, i didn't want him collapsing again. 😆

thanks so much, loved your thought though. mind flying.

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indi52

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Posted: 12 years ago

#693

Originally posted by: Omoraboti
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Will be back after reading.

I reserved and now I am staring at the screen quitely bluntly, not knowing really what to write here.

He has woken up. And I have been in her and in his shoes throughout the update .. seeing through their eyes, feeling through their pores. Awesome!

The man .. Arnav Singh Raizada .. the first thought after he wakes up is still his wife .. her well-being .. his need to protect her. Wonderful!

I am really short of words here. This was one amazing update. He wakes up completely as the man .. the same man who went into coma .. with the same love for his wife. Two months have changed nothing within the man .. and how wonderful was to see the reunion.

I will be silent now .. because frankly, I dont know how else to put my reaction to the chapter.

In one word. Awesome. 😊

thanks, farha,

first, i just res-ed on d and d, quick scan, some dhak dhak and thought, i will read it at leisure this afternoon.

about chapter 9... thanks for "awesome." i am hoping you have been hit hard the most pleasant way. i always had the option of making him wake up more "realistically," but this was asr... inactivity was anathema to his being practically. i thought when his parents went the way they did and he was thrown out of his home one fine day... penniless... did he pass out, give in? no. an extraordinary show of energy by a 14 year old. do such things happen? when i hear individual stories of overcoming terrible odds and not only getting through but at times doing unimaginably well in life... i realise the human spirit is indeed a rare thing and indeed anything can happen.

people who overcome have a different energy too... people like asr. they burst with it. they claim it as their right. they do not give up no matter what. they have a tenacity average people would not understand. and when something is important to them can practically move anything to achieve that. certainly their physical bodies.

i asked myself... his last image was khushi, a bus hurtling toward her, him pushing khushi away. he was hit after that. two months of slipping through many realities that we in the "conscious" world do not touch, he sees his most precious lost world... maa. he wants to go to her. but she seems to urge him otherwise... he turns and sees... khushi. he knows he must return.

in that state of spirit his eyes open.

what would he do then? and he was seeing the woman who practically embeds him after many days... what would be his first thoughts?

the chapter came from there. i just wanted to share the thought process with you because you write... sorry for the usual ramble.

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arshi_lover1

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Posted: 12 years ago

#694

Loved it plzzz continue soon!

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indi52

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Posted: 12 years ago

#695

^^^

thanks, arshi_lover1... glad you liked... i do hope to update soon. 😳

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riti4u

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Posted: 12 years ago

#696

Indi di..you made me cry😭this was so beautiful... and so much emotions attached... fear of khushi... concern of arnav... happiness of anjali on hearin arnav's news...i really want to write so much...but this cudnt have been better...if I mention what i loved the most

"i am here, you are safe..."

😭