arshi ff: without you... thread #1, chapters 1-13 **completed** - Page 69

Originally posted by: Arnav_Khushifan

Hi Indrani,

Lovely update. So good to hear Jaa rahi ho. My heart did Dhak Dhak when I read those words. Glad he woke up. deep in her heart somewhere Khushi was afraid that he might die but she knew that she had to keep it together for the rest of the family because with ASR in coma the responsiblity of the family was on her shoulders. She always thinks of others before her needs. Can't wait for the confortation between ASR and Shyam. Why do I have a feeling that you are going to have Anjali and Khushi play a active role in destroying Shyam. Anjali is going to have to do this in order to goon with her life. It will be like a cleansing for her. Thanks again for sharing your story. Looking forward to the next part.

Originally posted by: mandy15

fabulous update dear :)

Originally posted by: -MeraBarun-

Great update

Shatir dimaag ASR is back
Thanks for d pm dear

Originally posted by: mashira

this is how ASR will wake up from coma for sure! was so waiting for the update and so worth it :) loved how ASR works out that it is not an accident quite immediately. very curious about how this will proceed!

i havent yet managed to read your second OS...will do soon! hugs

Originally posted by: divsarunfan

indi di i loved this chapter so much di👏

Originally posted by: ...SaRun...

Awesome update.

Finally ASR woke up and got straight back to business.

Grabbed the pallu and ja rahi ho was superb.

His first concern was that whether his Khushi was alright.

After making sure she was he then he worked out about the whole accident scene

and drew the conclusion that it was Shayam who was behind this.

This is what makes him ASR man in command.

You described it beautifully and poetically.

Love these lines so much

she smiled at his words. this was the man she loved. he had been practically killed by a rampaging bus, his ribs were broken, there had been damage to some organs, he had just been in a coma for almost two months, yet the moment he comes to, he is the master of the situation, the man in command. he holds her and assures her, she is safe. he is here. always strong, a man of himmat since he was a boy, always there for those he loved.

Originally posted by: Msserialfan123

Hi Indi52! am hitting myself for not discovering this FF... i keep looking up your index for your rhapsodic writeups on the episodes on BFTP. Should 've known. Only an Indi can keep ASR flaming hot even in a coma. He's lying there for weeks and Khushi is blushing with the memories of his passion! 😆 Potent, our ASR.

I love the way your love for this character shines through 9 chapters, so much so that his dimaag is up and running to get Shyam for trying to run him down just as he's out of coma!

You know, on hindsight, I wish 4 lions had you for their creative team. This is a swell idea to have continued with IPK and giving Barun his health break, if the stories are true that he never really wanted to quit, just needed a break...! Love that you're an obedient wife and got him out of coma in a jiffy, good for me, starved 45 year old who simply can't find another serial among all our blessed channels like how IPK kept you hooked. Please PM me on the next update, pretty please?

Originally posted by: supriya.arshi

Indi this was really great chapter ⭐️👏⭐️

you're writin level is just way up above the sky...where my thinking would nvr reach 👏⭐️

comin to the chapter
for a sec i thought he lost is memory...wher you've mentioned him askin "who is she (twice) "
you brought out Khushi's biggest fear...Arnav's death... how she had thought it was a possibility nd how she fought all her fears nd lived for the man to wake up nd be with her ...👏

the entire description of the force marriage...Brilliant how do you do it...your writing has its own beauty ...their each thoughts abt each other in your words too good

He is awake finally 😃...their tight hug...she explorin his face, he enchanted by his jhalli ...her kiss on the cheek ..him lowerin down cuz of the pain nd kissin her on the lips...his loop sided smile😉..she kissed him on the mark near to the eye...all of it.. just so natural nd loving

nd OP such a sweet man...keepin the pink purse safely for his master later
you got in a bit of Anjali nd Dr.Verma ...tht was nice

Thank you for not makin ASR's Harvard brains go lost somewher...he figured it all in seconds 👍🏼 thts the guy we knw...the man in command...lik you said...

Katelyn has truly done a grt job with the music...

Originally posted by: Arshika_arshi

yay!!!
he is back from coma...
loved it..

Originally posted by: binimoti

this is getting more and more interesting, Arnav is back and Shyam ki khair nahi lovely part

Update soon