arshi ff: without you... thread #1, chapters 1-13 **completed**

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IssK.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#1041

...And i forgot to mention the snap of that pearly dori...you bringing drama to his engagement i see! Loved! Can't wait to get more...what did she say for it to have happened..i need to know asap!

Sab theek, gulabi is the color all around i say.

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indi52

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Posted: 12 years ago

#1042

awww, thanks for that one. so you love snap too. what did she say? well she whispered something to me today... will confirm and have it up on the next chapter, posting this weekend.
issk, i want you to read my other lunatic tale too, pilleejh. just give it a quick read when time permits and tell me what you think... okay? shurukiya.

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Sunshine80

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Posted: 12 years ago

#1043

Raanisahiba🤗

That's a wonderful update...but I am lil afraid of AsR with gun...but never mind...he will make things right after😆...he does something and then makes it right...who can forget that imperfect yet so perfect man😳. La is back...hope she will be support system during this time where ASR would do something drastic. 😳. And about past...pearl dori breaking..linked to engagement...can't wait to read what you have in store for us👏

Want to write more..but neither time nor strength to write as I have fever. Will be waiting for next update

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indi52

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Posted: 12 years ago

#1044

fever, chhotey?

what's up? you ok i hope?

see? you know the man... pehle gadbad, then set right... don't worry... all will go to the right place. yes he did snap that dori after all. and the pearls they did so scatter.

get well and see you soon. thanks for reading and liking.

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riti4u

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Posted: 12 years ago

#1045

read 2 updates today...😊chapter 10- loved the way you showed anjali's perspective..her love for chottey and how you justified...by his thinking too...she wanted him to comeback to life...not coz she was dependant on him...coz she loved him as family...the only one she had... n how he understood it all...loved the mamiji 's little part too...just wanted it to be explored a little more in the show...i m glad to read it in ur story...Aww..n loved jealous khushi 😳Chapter 11You brought two most imp moments in one update 😃.."kyu faraq padta hain...""And You dont mean a thing to me ..."

In midst of that...loved seeing growing up Arnav and little arshi moments as well...😳

will be back soon after reading next two updates 😃

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riti4u

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Posted: 12 years ago

#1046

Originally posted by: Sunshine80
Raanisahiba🤗

That's a wonderful update...but I am lil afraid of AsR with gun...but never mind...he will make things right after😆...he does something and then makes it right...who can forget that imperfect yet so perfect man😳. La is back...hope she will be support system during this time where ASR would do something drastic. 😳. And about past...pearl dori breaking..linked to engagement...can't wait to read what you have in store for us👏

Want to write more..but neither time nor strength to write as I have fever. Will be waiting for next update

get well soon🤗

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indi52

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Posted: 12 years ago

#1047

hi riti,

good to see you.

read at your pace... am so glad you liked things... hope the reading is easy and enjoyable.

anjali and asr... a deep kind of tie... beyond normal siblings really. and they both i think have a lot of regard for the other as a person, not just loving each other because they are bro and sis.

farq nahi padta 😆 asr hai, how to give faraq so easily.

see you soon.

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riti4u

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Posted: 12 years ago

#1048

Originally posted by: indi52
hi riti,

good to see you.

read at your pace... am so glad you liked things... hope the reading is easy and enjoyable.

anjali and asr... a deep kind of tie... beyond normal siblings really. and they both i think have a lot of regard for the other as a person, not just loving each other because they are bro and sis.

farq nahi padta 😆 asr hai, how to give faraq so easily.

see you soon.

🤗i just loved reading your work di.. i will definately catch up soon...😳a little free in office😆..so will make up with updates i missed😳