arshi ff: without you... thread #1, chapters 1-13 **completed**

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nishu_shorna

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Aaj koi aane wala hai kya...

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Crazy4IPK

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Oh Gosh what a cliff hanger!

Arnav is going to kill Shyam for sure. I wish nothing bad happens to him again. I'm really tensed.

Stupendous chapter. Sorry for reading late. I don't want to read your story in haste. Cause I want to feel the depth of your writing. And what a writing. These lines below just took my breath away.

but he wanted to feel free, breathe deep, touch breeze. with her.

he wanted to ride with her, just her, him, the air, the road, and the desire to go, to move, to fly. asr never had such feelings.

the first time he took khushi on a ride and felt her arms slipping around him from behind, her head resting on his shoulder, her body lying against his back, he'd swallowed involuntarily, a feeling welling up. he'd experienced a burst of energy that had flabbergasted him. to feel the wind through your hair, flattening your clothes against your skin, to hear her sigh and giggle as she felt the rush of the ride, the sky above, the road ahead... this was a lightness he'd never known.

he'd never been a young man before it seemed to him. he'd given her hand a quick squeeze in gratitude. he liked being young with her.

Supi's edit was awesome and very much assimilated with the bike scene.

La came to visit ASR and his family. Khushi must felt a pang of pain . after all she was her Arnavji's ex, though Arnav never loved her. But still. i was feeling weird. May be i'm more possessive than Khushi or I'm not an angel like Khushi.

Arnav teased Khushi for her weird dressing sense, but at the same time he loves her the way she is. You know Pom pom is very much in style. I wish if I could design some clothes for her. You know I love designing.

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indi52

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Posted: 11 years ago

#1053

hi sohara,

wow what a lovely dress and a shot... yes, pompoms can be rather cute... and asr teases her about all that i guess but doesn't really care... thanks for liking the update... i must do the next chapter soon... hey don't worry about reading late, etc., this is for fun, you must not feel any pressure whatsoever.. only if you feel like it. and if you don't also he he i won't get all cold and pompommy. supi's edit was sucha lovely surprise.

see ya.