Blast from the Past Thread #10, pg 45, epi 113 - Page 54

Originally posted by: indi52

hi everyone,

off to sydney for a week tonight. will be coming in for a while every day i hope. durga has sweetly taken over episode posting... thanks, my poet friend 🤗.

tried to finish 112/113 before leaving, then the computer ate up the stuff. maybe it's a sign, possibly that rushed writing was nota good idea, hopefully, tomorrow.

i loved diwali week. it was for me the most powerful week of ipk.

the acting by the two in 112/113, just went deep into me and happily sat there. what is with these two. why are they so good? and why am i not seeing them on my screen any more.

i will see you soon.

please do pray that all goes fab with my kid's conversion. and if any one of you is in singapore on 26 may, sunday, please come and celebrate with us her becoming a bat mitzvah girl.

a coming of age ceremony in the jewish tradition. lots of dancing, music, food.

Originally posted by: indi52

hi everyone,

off to sydney for a week tonight. will be coming in for a while every day i hope. durga has sweetly taken over episode posting... thanks, my poet friend 🤗.

tried to finish 112/113 before leaving, then the computer ate up the stuff. maybe it's a sign, possibly that rushed writing was nota good idea, hopefully, tomorrow.

i loved diwali week. it was for me the most powerful week of ipk.

the acting by the two in 112/113, just went deep into me and happily sat there. what is with these two. why are they so good? and why am i not seeing them on my screen any more.

i will see you soon.

please do pray that all goes fab with my kid's conversion. and if any one of you is in singapore on 26 may, sunday, please come and celebrate with us her becoming a bat mitzvah girl.

a coming of age ceremony in the jewish tradition. lots of dancing, music, food.

Originally posted by: indi52

my dear ankle breaker, i am delighted you have adorned me in so much purple and so many kisses. be sure to save some from you know who. really thrilled you liked it and had the same thoughts as i.

achha, now let's talk what if aman hadn't called. you think khushi would have stopped him? maybe asr would have stopped himself? but you know the fire had gone to a point of no return i felt, when he turned and looked at her, there was that crossing over in his eyes, and in her backward step almost a curious craving to see what's there beyond that line. his mind i'd say had touched that zone, hers... not sure... too young, too new to this whole thing, too innocent, just hypnotised by the possibilities of his lips on hers maybe. uff what a gorgeous scene.

i will read yours soon and arshi's. excited.

Originally posted by: ina211

Wonderful discussions about Why Khushi would follow arnav and ask questions after the missed kiss. Really enjoyed reading all the perspectives...

I wonder now what if she hadnt asked those questions that night? What if she had just felt awkward and confused and just let it be and left his house??
I think that is what ASR would have wanted, definitely. He just so badly wanted to forget what had just happened...and he wanted her to just forget all of that even more badly! Yes it was too much dealing with all that at that moment...He just did not want to confront what he felt at that time...but Khushi wouldnt let it be.


Suppose if she had just left that day...i think the situation wouldnt have changed much. Yes ASR would not have announced his wedding plans to La that night...but logically speaking...Khushi would have wanted to confront him some time...May be next day? How could she just let it be? I mean just forget about it? When she has that pressure of saying yes or no to some other guy? Here's the guy she had fallen for and realized it. She want sure if he felt the same way.. Some hints yes...but not enough specially going by how he was temperamental when it came to her? He had humiliated her...saved her life...yet would not miss a chance to insult her when he was angry...You would want a "clear" Yes or No from a guy like that when it is a decision about your life..Signals wouldnt do.

So i feel even if Khushi hadnt asked ASR...ASR would still feel the need to go into complete denial only because he was too shocked at how he reacted that night. I feel, even if Khushi wouldnt ask him, whenever he would meet khushi next he would have again insulted her at any given opportunity to just prove it didnt mean anything to him.

Whatever he says...he still felt that "need" to justify and reaffirm that she means nothing to him.
This is also the reason he pushed her her about her questions about her payal when in his SUV. She refused to ask it again...
He had said.."nahi jaan na chahti apni payal ke baare main?" Some people said ... had she said yes...he would have told her...i say No way!
That was just his need to tell her...she had no importance in his life...he needed to break her heart and someway still maintain "Farak nahi padta hai" to maintain his own sanity.
And would have always been in denial...forced denial...had it not been for news of Khushi's engagement...
That is when his mission changed...
From mujhe farak nahi padta to...proving that mujhe pade na pade Tumhe zaroor padta hai!!!
somewhere he knew she knows ASR ko farak padta hai but the thought of her being snatched away by some other guy...the very thought was scary for him.
"Kya kar rahi ho tum" he would say...!
Well for now...i think Khushi should have just gone to ASR and said the same dialog after shaadi announcement to La..."KYA KAR RAHE HO TUM!!!"🤣

Originally posted by: indi52

thanks, chalhov, durga, supriya. 😃

supriya, i am hindu, my husband is jewish and we have brought up our daughter jewish. she will be officially accepted into the faith on 9 may in sydney. thanks for all your wishes. and i mean it about that party in singapore. 😳

Originally posted by: supriya.arshi

Wiwy i hope this is wat u asked for...i just added a lil extra scene 😉...hope u lik it 😊

do save it....



a lil diff : http://i.minus.com/i7GnBamDPLzWV.jpg

Originally posted by: sohara

Episode-111

Her beautiful foot is still resting on his knee. He gets the payal out from his pocket and shows it to her with a guilt look.She is astonished, looking at him incredulously. He delicately puts the anklet around her ankle. There is tenderness, care and lots of emotions in his eyes.- lovely!

She drops her saree down and pulls away her foot from his knee. He slowly stands up , takes a step back, but still can't take his eyes from her. Khushi looks at him with eyes full of questions, but she is also spell bound. He intends to go, but turns back, he just can't leave her out of his sight. A gentle wind blows, makes her errant locks touches her beautiful face. He is mesmerized, wishes to touch those tendrils. His amused look makes her wriggling her hand in anticipation. the ambiance becomes rife with the passionate note of Jadu hai nesha hai. He starts to walk towards her prowlingly, -what a scene,

and you words causing dhak dhaks in me

causing her to take a step back involuntarily. He keeps moving towards her, she is stepping back. Finally he plasters her on the glass door. Her bosom is heaving in anticipation, her luscious lips are quivering in desire. she is looking like a seductress. He can't take his eyes off from her for a single moment. He lifts his hand and cares her tendril gently. she looks at him. She can't see the yearn in his eyes. She closes her eyes involuntarily. He starts to care her soft cheek with his rough hand.They both want to indulge in forbidden fantasy. His gentle cares makes her edging towards a chasm. He leans towards her quivering lips, she is clutching her saree in perturbation. His sensuous touch causing chaos and disorder in her already uneven hear beat. He cups her angelic face and delicately lifts it a little upward. He has been longing to seep the nectar since the day she fell on his lap in seesh mahal. He has been vulnerable since that day. He tried so hard to hate her, throw her out of his life, yelled at her,humiliated her. But he is lost against her own self. today his lady love in red is burning him in aphrodisia. He can't resist himself to taste those rosy lips, he has to seep the nectar of her, cause he is feeling a billow of love for this girl. --Sohara,this is amazing, in bold so true, her lips drew his eyes since the first time

Things have changed drastically after the Nainital trip. so many things happened in their lives. He felt her importance in his life more than ever. Her reliance on him at her most distressed moment, his affability towards her, all of their recent encounters brought them more closer to each other. She also found the reason of her dhadhak that Arnav didn't cast a spell on her, but her heart pounds for him, cause she is in love with him. She is also ready to give him the pleasure. So she is also pampering her desire. when he cared her delicate skin with lots of passion herbody automatically ignites from his eternal heat. They are quite oblivious of the rest of the world creating a gentle cadence that beat in harmony with their thumping heart.👏👏

But the outside world is so imprudent that can't let them alone for so long. The shrill ringtone of his phone throws him to the real world instantly. He snatches away his hand from her face in a jolt, he is flummoxed at his action. He slowly steps back from her, turns his face and closes his eyes in anticipation. Khushi is still tremulous .He gives her a last look and huddles away from the place. She is still perplexed, "what is just happened?" She is blaming herself to get weak, but still can't get the answer, why her payal is with him!

pause: Both Barun and Sanaya was outstanding in the scene. And honestly I never witnessed such a romantic, intense passionate scene never in my life. And of course Sarun made it special with their brilliant acting and magical chemistry. Gautam Hegde is absolutely right, they are the missing pieces of each other.- agreed!

In the hall, a sardonic man closes his eyes in convulsion. His mind is whirling in vortex of emotions, "How could I do it? what happened to me? why did I become weak?" ASR can't get weak for a girl, he can't fall in love, cause where there is love there is deception, what he learnt from his distorted past of his parents.- so true and also that no being weak is key to his success

He doesn't want to face the girl who makes him weak. but the girl is valiant, she needs to know the answer. She comes and stands right beside him. He turns his face to look at her. There is lot of questions in her eyes. But he doesn't let her speak and leaves the place.

Arnav joins the party. Khushi is following him. She needs the answer badly. But La intervenes her, "where have you been Chamkili?". She wants to take Khushi with her. But nothing is more important than talk to arnav now. When their eyes finally meet, Arnav avoids her.

Mami is chitchatting with some guests. They ask her where is Akash? By the way where is Akash bituwa, why he is absentia from the partiya! I think he is coochicooing near GH! Anyway the guests ask about his marriage. Mami brags that he will marry Miss India. Suddenly their sight goes to Khsuhi. they get amused at her beauty, 'who is this beautiful girl?" Mami teases, "she is phatti saree." Gosh mami, torn saree or whatever you have to admit, she is sparkling like a diamond in the party.

Anjali notices Khushi's tension "are you upset that you are getting late? don't worry we will drop you home." Khsuhi is lost in some other world, cause her eyes is groping for Arnav. Finally she finds him standing by the poolside.She rushes towards there left Anjali flabbergasted.

Arnav's mind is whirling with conflicting emotions. so he needs some isolation. When he saw Khushi is coming towards him, he pretends to talk on the phone. Khushi speaks with bravado, "I know you are not on the phone."

He understands that he is caught, so he gradually gets the phone down from his ear, "i don't want to talk to you.".

Khushi is no less," you have to."

I must say, she has all the qualities to be a perfect Mrs. ASR in every aspect. Khushi starts her queries - yep girl that's always been able to do this, i love this scene

"when and where did you get my anklet? how long it was with you? why didn't you return it to me? why you decided to give it today? answer me."

He looks up at her. Anger is raising in his voice,

"don't you understand the words I told you once? just leave me alone. i don't want to see your face. don't you understand?"

Khushi is indignant, "nahi understand. you make me understand."

He is fuming, " go from here."

he intend to go, but Khushi blocks his way, "plz make me understand. why did you keep my Payal with you? why didn't you return it before? what does it mean? And that thing?" She means his attempt to kiss her. He looks at her intently.

She is incredulous," or what, that happened a while ago?"

Arnav says with a big grin on his face, "I said just leave me alone."

Khushi tries to speak more. But he holds her vehemently, grabbing hold of both her upper arms tightly. She gets tremulous in fear, tries to vacillate, looks at his grip on her arms, tears well up in her eyes. He can't see tears in her eyes. He wanted to avoid her for so long, but she keeps provoking him. He extricates her slowly but closes his eyes in perturbation. She looks at him with heavy heart. He says scathingly, " I don't need to answer you."

Back in the party, some mean guests mock La. They accuses nani to shelter a damsel in their house. they crosses all the limits by directly hitting her, " you talk about marriage, customs and rituals, but left your grand son with a girl without marriage." (pause:gosh I never saw such mean guests in my life, comes to the party and insults the host! Is it happen in real life!🤣- i know it always seems to happen to the poor raizadas!) A terribly disturbed Arnav enters the party hall, grabs La's hand. All of the people around them get stunned to see the sight.The mean lady gets another chance to insult the family, "look what is happening under your nose?' Arnav stops her mouth right then. "I'm going to marry. Khushi turns in consternation. Anjali is confused. Arnav assures her that he is going to marry La. Khushi feels a scorching pain in her heart, as if someone bereaved everything from her. Gosh I'm crying again. It's to painful.😭Anjali, nani, mami la, everybody's face glint with a smile. La's happiness knows no bound. But sorry dear i can't feel happy for you. Arnav assures nani, she sure will marry La. but he is saying it looking straight to Khushi. why man, what joy you are getting to hurt an eighteen year old orphan girl, whose life is already laden with pain and anguish! Anjali tells both la and Arnav to take nani's blessings. They hug nani, but arnav sight is fixed on Khushi, as if enjoying her grief - sorry dear must disagree there in blue, he was hurting and kept looking at her b/c sh was in pain.af first maybe some pride that he successfully pushed her away, he can't stand her in pain. Did you see his reaction when she turn her back on him, he was like "no dont' go"

. La leans her head on his shoulder. He smiles back at her half heartedly. Rabba vey in piano, Khushi's pensive state, her tears, heaving my heart. My heart is too weak. i can't take it any more. Arnav keeps starring at her, ramrod, measuring every bit of her pain, how relentless you are Arnav! You are not my sexy boy any more. You are bad and I hate you. - nahiiin! ok i guess that good for me and wiwy😆

The family are exulting in happiness, they are hugging each other, guests are congratulating Arnav. But another distressed damsel is noticing everything with teary eyes. her heart his heavier than the rain laden clouds. La is so happy, she needs to gratify the person who is responsible for her happiness today, "where is chmakili?' Anjali is delectable, "I'm so happy for my brother. My chote will soon become a groom.' Mami, nani all are showing their love to him and sharing their happiness.. Finally all of their wishes came true. Arnav seems in despondent state of mind. He is gesturing the greetings perfunctorily. He is checking Khushi's sad face incessantly. He is literally mortifying her. Khushi can't take the torture any more. She turns to leave but looks back to see him for the last time.

A heart wrenching gazal of chitra sing is resonating in my years

"mera dil bhi shauk se todo

[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?feature=player_detailpage&v=UIvCTVYmx98[/YOUTUBE]

My Arshi VM for today is another Gazal of my mom's favorite singer Mehedi Hassan.

thanks to sheena to make a vm with this gazal

[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?feature=player_detailpage&v=psXwz3LctDg[/YOUTUBE]

Originally posted by: BarunDiwani

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Episode 110: Jaadu & Nasha

The payal dangles from his fisted hands yet again. He had kept it close, kept it safe and only he knows how many other times he pulled it out to admire the "Khushi-ness" it exudes. The chirpy loud, happy, beautiful piece of jewelry fell out off her ankle, only to be noticed by Arnav. Before her payal fell into his life, it was her pearls that found their way into his pocked the day they met, but when thoughts of her became too much and he thought she had left him "hemesha ke liye", he vigorously threw them out, in hopes that she would leave with them. However the payal he would go out to rescues when no one was looking. Maybe his wanting to keep the payal marked her return back into his life...whatever it was he immediately felt the attachment towards it. Today he learns its significance to Khushi, they are the only thing left of her Amma, who he knows by now just how much it means to Khushi. As he holds it up, seems a mix of emotions run through him, not wanting to part with it, but at the same time he knows he must. On a higher level, could it be just that the purpose of the payal, is over? it did have a mind of its own when it freed itself from Khushi's ankle and chose to stay with Arnav. At that time it was uncertain when they would see each other next. Arnav needed something to live by. Now her place in his life, his heart has become permanent. He would never be able to throw her out try as he may... starting tonight. he will probably find some other item to hoard

"Chotey" His thoughts are interrupted by Anjali and Naniji, he quickly puts away the payal in his pocket. Anjali has a huge smile on her face "Chotey, nani wants to say something to you" Nani also in a good mood as La has made her proud by sticking up for the RM family and its values in front of her friends.

Nani explains,"i never thought i would say this in my dreams but the way Miss.Kashyap"

"Oh God, now what happened" poor guy, so used to the pattern of Nani's complaints about La.

"let me complete my sentence, the way she stood up and protected the respected of the Raizadas in front of her friends, i felt really good...maybe this is the Ms.Kashyap i'm looking for so i've mad a decision...I have no problem with yours and Ms.kashyap marriage"

Arnav knew what was coming as Nani has never talked so highly, he was uneasy as she went on. La might have changed but Nani forgets that his outlook on marriage hasn't, and makes no plans to ...except for the occasional fake marriage with a crazy drama queen in Nainital.

He turns around in anger and frustration, Anjali asks "what's wrong?"

I know things are being setup for later, but still wonder why they expected some other reaction from him, hasn't he been completely clear that he doesn't want to marry? He broke up with La at one point didn't he? if he really wanted to marry La, can Nani really stop him?

"Nani if you think by telling me all this, i'll marry Lavanya, then you think wrong" he clarifies again. Nani leaves disappointed after telling him to think about it "if not today then tomorrow, you must start your family life" Also, the sympathy for La is tremendous as she becomes the innocent victim in all of this. I still fail to understand her constant ignoring of Arnav's attraction towards Khushi at times even forgetting it, why did she ask him to help her through the diyas when she know he feels something for her? How did she figure that just because Nani accepted her, ASR would also as his wife?

"Ab ASR mujhse zaroor shaadi karenge" (now he'll marry me for sure)" elated she tells chamkili.

There is that look on Khushi's face, just one step short of a lone tear drop. "chamkili, what happened, why do you look sad, don't worry this time ASR won't be able to say no to me" Khushi fights off the strong feelings to force a smile.

"The guests have started to come." Op comes to inform.

The party is in full swing, mamji ready to "show off" the decor and the "buttiful boquet" While Anjali once again has to answer questions about her husband. Khushi comes down with La, Nani proudly introduces her to her guests.

As Khushi stands there, the gust is back stronger than before bringing along with it pure jaadu (magic). Her eyes draw to him and for the first time she sees it, his "mehsoos" of her, as he turns to answer her call the eyes know exactly where to look. He can read her startled face, the same feeling he has when he felt her "mehsoos" of him.

Wow lovely creation

La interrupts and pulls her away just as the tunes of the majestic song "jaadu hai nasha hai" chimes in and Khushi's eyes default back to him, his eyes still where she left them. Uff the electrifying mutual attraction here is intoxicating, no confusions from her, no walls to hold him back, just two people only seeing, feeling the scorch of each other in a crowded party. lovely explanation they just cant but turn their eyes towards each other

She can't look away, neither can he, soon they embrace in dance of their own, gliding together across the room. He matches her steps , fully aware of the effects they have on each other. mesmerising looks both seek each others eyes

She soon looses him to a guest, but not his attention. Their sizzling atraction, how did they manage to keep is a secret in this room full of people? Even when on opposite side of the room, it was as they were inches from each other. Perhaps that's why Khushi's got flustered when Anajli casually asked where Chotey was, she stayed mum, it may have given her away? uff the screen was sizzling with their chemistry both so far yet so near

When he walks over he stood by Khushi, but her dhak dhaks definetly got faster than her saansein (breaths)...till La slides in in between. Soon after they were left alone, both in front of each other, hesitating to leave, slowly they start walking the opposite direction

dil ne kaha chupke se yeh kya hua chupke se	The heart said silently, what is this, that happened silently?
kyo.n naye lag rahe.n hai yeh dharatii gagan	Why do the earth and sky suddenly seem fresh and new?
mai.n ne puuchha to bolii yeh pagalii pavan	When I asked this, the mad wind said,
pyaar hua chupke se yeh kya hua chupke se	love happened silently; what is this, that happened silently?
kyo.n naye lag rahe.n hai yeh dharatii gagan	Why do the earth and sky suddenly seem fresh and new?
mai.n ne puuchha to bolii yeh pagalii pavan	I asked this, and the mad wind said,
pyaar hua chupke se yeh kya hua chupke se	Love happened silently; what is this, that happened silently

He can no longer fight the magnetism, turning around he catches her attention. With a determination and intentions of some sort he steps towards her, taken back by his fierce-ness, she steps back and bumps into someone. Maybe he would've given her the payal back here had La not snapped her fingers to snap him out of it, but have a feeling there would've been more. Arnav seemed irritated as Khushi had disappeared.😉😉

For someone who always accidentally bought these two together, she sure is interrupting them a lot today. Telling of whats to come maybe?

All the enthrallment, the desires, the attractions follow them outside by the poolside to add a little nasha (buzz/high) to their magical night.. Khushi sets up more diyas by the poolside. OP leaves, while a pair of long legs make an entry in slow motion behind her. Alone at last. On his face, a certain sense of urgency to be close to her, a "cant stay away". His voice soft, sweet, vulnerable, uff how her name sounds with his husky voice in such a state.

"Khushi"

Khushi goes still for moment, perhaps that determined walk of his full of intentions still fresh in her mind, she tries to get up fast and loses balance and twists her ankle, but as hamesha, he "sambhaaled" her.

"come"

He walks her a few steps to the lounge chair, and after sitting her down, he kneels inches away from her face, his hands on her shoulder, he's been itching to be this close to her all night. How badly does he want her?

She senses his strong sexual desires for her, as soon as he looks down to her feet, she retracts them under her saari pleats. He look displeased. Immediately with full rights he grabs her hand from the pleats and moves it up but a "trust me" vibe along with it. He lifts up her leg and puts it on his thigh. How very intimate and profound..she is no low-status girl, she's everything. She is his he claims his right haq to put the payal on her feet then why fight himself and his feelings and insult her😕

I can feel his fingers gently brushing on her feet, and bit a of a tickle too.

He gets into position. "thoda dard hoga" a slight warning A quick jerk to the left "aahh" she lets out and her hand immediately grabs on to her shoulder, another quick jerk to the right the same reaction. Who knew sprained ankles can result in such a sexy moments. Only Sobti would make want to sprain my ankle...😆😆😆

The much talked about scene with double meaning, after watching again, the way she grabs his shoulder and especially these sensuality in his eyes as she lets out her pain are suggestive of a sexual act. Perhaps it was the only way the CVs could relay their intensity and the depth of their desires especially on Arnav's side.

"Ab teek hai?" - "is it ok now?"

Not in her right mind to answer him, all she can do is remove her hand off his shoulder fast. Her heel still in his hold, she tries to lift it up but he keeps the hold. she's puzzled. Slowly he reaches into his pocket and pulls up her Amma's payal, his eye go down for a second as he is guilty of taking it and it meant so much to her.

She is in disbelief, questioning him quietly. Seems payal did have one more purpose after all.

I need to stop here with this episode, and brace myself for the major madhhoshiyas (intoxications) on the way.

DROOL CORNER!!!!!!

❤️ this expression as he watched Khushi witness her mehsoos in him❤️

kaisi yeh nazar hai 😉

Episode 111: Madhoshiya (Intoxication)

- really nice effect

A silent plea from her "don't go" 😊as he turned to leave after he lovingly placed her amma's payal on her ankle. did he hear her plea? yes the whooshing wind is proof he heard. To her hearts content, he stops, and with his best palat ever, turns his eyes to her. 👏

Thirty still for this lady in red. He marvels on. Admiring the delicate curves under the red sari, from her waist, to her chest, to the lean neck then her beautiful face.😳

- WoW 👏

His madhhoshi (intoxication) shows in his slow blinks, completely oblivious to his surroundings. How can any woman survive a look like this from any man...let alone THIS man?

Khushi tries her best, but there was no escape from that look, those eyes...not that she was looking to escape. A bit scared of course, these aroused feeling all new for her, her body untouched. but she wanted him just as bad.😳 - true...she desired him to

She had to look away if she was going to survive, but with her heaving chest, twirling fingers, and blushing chheeks, how will he? This intoxicating moment puts all else on freez. Its just a man and a woman, a gentle breeze and tons of fire in between. - 👏 too good

Before she knew it she looked down to his feet, they were eagerly coming towards her the same way they did at the party, determined and full of intentions.

As he came near, she stepped back. they've made a habbit of this, but tonight its different, tonight her stepping back only pulls him closer😳. One step after anothoer, she walks backward, he moves forward. "jaadu ha nasha hai, madhhoshiya..."

👏⭐️

She looks at his unwavering eyes, still stepping back till there was not more back to step in to, a wall stops her, nothing to stop him. All she can do is wait. His eyes burning with passion, he wants her and she waits for him to take her.😳 - very true...👏

His left hand lifts on her right side to gently tuck her long bangs behind her ear, so he can see her better, she quivers with his touch, his hand lingers where she's rested her face, nudging her to look up at him

- damn good 👏👏

, and she does. The way he looks at her, like telling her what she has meant to him in the past few months, the only confession from him before till the kidnapping.

👏

How, delicately his other hand cups her innocent face. how he's dreamt of doing this many times, and how she indulges in his embrace😳...he slides her bangs back again on the right side, she is dizzy and absolutely crazy with all he's doing to her. she grips the side of her saari. With her face in both of his hands, gently he lifts it towards him.

he leans in and looks down on her trembling pink luscious lips in anticipation, alluring him even more, he leans in closer. Both are in a state of pure ecstasy (major madhoshiya)👏. With her eyes closed, she's ready to experience the inexperienced, and He wants so badly to taste her soft, pink, luscious lips , to take the trembling away when he takes them in his own. Close enough to feel each other's warm breath, 😳 - really amazing writin her...marvelous⭐️!!!!!

tririiing triiinnng tririiing triiinnng tririiing triiinnng

(the moment where all IPK fans simitaniously screamed NAAAHHHIIINNN! and some other expletives.) - m one of them 😆

loud irritating sound doing what nothing else has been able to do all night, like a vaccum sucking both of them out of

this mind blowing

Ami Beautiful writing of emotions combined...👏⭐️👏 every highlighted part is wat i hav loved...your writin is soo tender...nd fragile i feel⭐️...you hav tried to reason out Arnav...i see tht

but i din like one thing...i din want Arnav to regret the move...atleast ot in front of her!!!!

Marvelous writin 👏⭐️ with wonderful edits ⭐️

nd do check your pm...hav sent you a pic 😊