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Posted: 12 years ago

There is this drop dead gorgeous 25+ highly successful business man, dressed in an impeccable 3 piece suit, who moments ago doesn't heed to her hesitation and pulls her feet up to attend to its pain..as if that's his right... the same haq with which he questions everyone around months later at the temple "koi rokega mujhe?" before lifting her up in his arms... the same man.. kneeling, takes this little piece of her jewelry, his precious procession for a while now, from his pocket holds it up with his head bent for a fleeting moment, like a 5 yr old whose act is caught... or so I felt...that soul touching suppleness...innocence.. underlying this undeniable attraction/ desire of this alpha male towards this clumsy child woman... some thing that made this sublime moment "complete" in every possible sense!

"mujhe dosh na dena jagwaalon ho jaye agar dil deewana"!
Edited by Horizon - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: DurgaS

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Episode 110-111

Payal

Ye mastani sham, mehakta hua aalam
Kayee saari baatein tumse kehta hai man
Man mein basee ho jaise tasveer koyi
Iss tasveer ko aaj main bataa doon
Tumhe sataye agar dard koyi
Har uss dard ko main mitaadoon
Ek cheez jo hai mere dil ke kareeb
Uss cheez ko aaj main lautadoon
Ye mauka hua hai mere naseeb
Iss payal ko tumhe main pehna doon

Durga, loved every bit, esp, the underlined.
Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: wiwy


Yes, yes I do understand your sapno ki duniya in your next life, BD. But are you going to try maaro in this life too?! Okay. Sigh! You and Indi can aim for what lies above his nose, and I will be more than satisfied with what lies below. What say, Kate?😉

🤣 🤣 🤣
I say that is perfect, Wiwy! 😉 What a come back on that one!! 😆
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: BarunDiwani

Friendly Disclaimer: My words, thoughts and ideas are mine only, please do not copy. You are welcome to use it, but credit accordingly. Thank you!

Episode 109



Did he walks down the stairs or was is glimpse into heaven? There she sits in the center, surrounding her self with dozens of diyas (candles), the gentle flickering from the dozens of diyas gleefully dance on her face. Best of all, she in the color that appeals to him most, red, the color of passions and desires and of love..The first time he saw her in red, he lost a part of himself that he hasn't been able to recover since. This second time her pull is just as magnetic. He is mesmerized the same way and just like that day, his feet move towards her as if hypnotized.



The wind blows while she lights another candle, she feels his presence and looks up to his admiring eyes. She stands up. A slights smile appears on his face as his heart fills with her beauty.




Even La's entrance wasn't enough to divert his attention off of Khushi, till she talks "what did you do? you've surrounded yourself between candles" she tries to get out, but has a tough time. La asks ASR to give her a hand, well he wouldn't say no to that!
He slowly makes his way into the circle, taking a closer look, he gulps down his attraction. By reaching her, symbolically he has completely made it into her heart, maybe at this moment she knows it's not acidity, or black magic, it's something else, its pyaar.



She has come a long way in understanding this Rakshas, she knows he's anything but. Today she willing to hold his hand and follow his lead. She will be ready to confess her feelings by that poolside later. He continues to walk her out, still mesmerized by her beauty, he can't take his eyes off of her.



Not used to high heels, she would trip and he would catch her...hamesha.


The way her hand fits into his, he's loving it, even looks at her to see how she feels. The beautiful journey comes to an end, but their hands linger in each others.



Actually things have felt just right with each other for some time, just like the red saari...another loud and clear message sent by DM. As soon as Khushi had opened the box, he had immediately fell in love "kitni sundar hai!"...like any girl would do, she walks to the mirror and drapes it across her shoulder with a big smile on her face. It was just a new sari and but i felt her smiling a bit wider.



It wasn't the saari Anjali had intended on giving her, but the it seemed to have chosen Khushi. e to give Khushi one, the girl who sheIts customary that the in-laws would gift the daughter in-laws a new saari for Diwali, but what made Anjali decid hired to train La? does the fact that it is from Anjaliji, Arnavji's sister, have her grinning from side to side? there was something special about this saari in the auspicious red.
When Khushi learns that the it was accidentally switched, she feels terrible,
"maaf kijiye Lavanya ji woh...hame pata nahi tha"
"i'm sorry Lavanya ji, i didn't know"

Beautiful the way CVs show how Khushi never intended to steal the red Sari, it was planned by some unknown forces...just like the man they both have in common, La's response is also telling of the future "Don't be so silly! it looks great on you" as that will be her reaction when she finally sees where Arnav's heart, also red, truly lies.


In this little journey of theirs was so much promise, everything was the way it was meant to be, everything was right, felt right.

For Khushi, within the last few days in the midst of her confusion, the sense of belonging with him never left. Taking care of him when he fainted, stopping his from leaving on a hungry stomach without a car in Nainital, running to his strong shoulders when life became too much to handle. "Arnavji" just like she pulled out of the oil when she stress made jilebi again, all of her being giving her sign, she felt close to him, somewhere he became special, special enough to sweetly wrap his sugar-free sukha halwa that she specially made for him. And when Payal asks "What's this?" she almost gives herself away "yeh Arnav ji ke ...unhe meetha mana hai na" she quickly changes her tone from caring to passive. Even when she handed the meethai to OP after reaching the RM, she makes sure to stress ""yeh dabba Arnavji ke liye, isme bina shakkar ki mittai"...i have a feeling she put some extra love and care into making that sugar-fre halwa.
Arnav also continues to stay lost in her essence, under her "jaadu tona" (spell). He has ebraced these feeling with open arms undlike the frustrated ones he used to have. He has completely let his guard down and now that he's has a strong sense of Khushi's "ulaj (tanglement)" the meaning behind that lone tear when he hugged La is clear allows him perhaps to go even more deeper. Not to mention he can also hear her "dhak dhaks."

Their oneness is surfacing within both of them, a sense of belonging to each other. The proof is in the diya(candle) that she made for his home, which he allowed her to use clay from this beloved garden ... 'whats mine is yours" right?...and when one of the diyas accidentally slips from La, he catches it, remembering that Khush made it he softly grazes over it with his thumb demonstrating once again his desire to feel her and to breathe her in.



They came a long way in just a few days, by the time this Diwali arrived, both have brought light in each other in the truest sense. Both seem to be on the same page now, longing and wanting only eachother. But then again its never easy with these two, A crossroads is upon them. With the help of a lost and found payal some jaadu (magic) and nasha (high) let us do a walk backwards till the crossroad arrives... in between some madhoshiyan as well

DROOL CORNER!!!!!!



Awesome BD!👏 ⭐️ You turned my world red! ❤️ No dont mind you jumping to 109 at all😃 Are you still offering free pillows with you DC to faint hearts like me?!🤢
Posted: 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Horizon

There is this drop dead gorgeous 25+ highly successful business man, dressed in an impeccable 3 piece suit, who moments ago doesn't heed to her hesitation and pulls her feet up to attend to its pain..as if that's his right... the same haq with which he questions everyone around months later at the temple "koi rokega mujhe?" before lifting her up in his arms... the same man.. kneeling, takes this little piece of her jewelry, his precious procession for a while now, from his pocket holds it up with his head bent for a fleeting moment, like a 5 yr old whose act is caught... or so I felt...that soul touching suppleness...innocence.. underlying this undeniable attraction/ desire of this alpha male towards this clumsy child woman... some thing that made this sublime moment "complete" in every possible sense!


Agree absolutely. 👍🏼 Going to bed with these thoughts...Thanks Horizon!
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: indi52


ami, very lovely take. especially that ponder about all that's been going on between them.

sometimes i wonder, did he figure out that she had the dhakdhak thing for him, or was he not conciously aware but his subconscious knew it well. and her, did she feel his eyes on her and know why this was so? i really liked her coming up to him after the kiss and asking what was taht? so many intangible yet palpable notes of helpless pull everywhere in these episodes. really worth astudy, don't think i've seen sucha thing anywhere else before. best part, one can identify with each and every bit of it. all of it can happen. and maybe when you're in tat state, a background music palys in your head too. 😳


Lovely write up Ami! 👏 You described it beautifully and the pics are great!
Right from the moment he saw her, busy lighting those diyas, the attraction was there!

Indi you wrote if she felt his eyes on her, I think she definitely did, because I believe there is a seventh sense women have...a sense that they can notice when a man is attracted to them. I think that's why she went to the poolside because she could sense him looking at her, a look filled with desire and that frightened her! So she went away from the lingering gazes to be alone, away from him and the scary new feeling growing in intensity between them!

See how he seems more attracted to her when she's busy lighting diyas...that's true of so many men...they are more attracted to you when they think you don't know they're watching you. After she saw him and their eyes met, well that was it, he could not look away even if he had tried, and with her hand in his, he felt ...complete!

Loved this part Ami :
"She has come a long way in understanding this Rakshas, she knows he's anything but. Today she willing to hold his hand and follow his lead. She will be ready to confess her feelings by that poolside later. He continues to walk her out, still mesmerized by her beauty, he can't take his eyes off of her. "
"The way her hand fits into his, he's loving it, even looks at her to see how she feels. The beautiful journey comes to an end, but their hands linger in each others. "

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: indi52




will i ever see a man look at a woman with quite that look in his eyes.



and a woman looking back like this.

episode 111 soon.




Beautifully captured! The look that speaks a thousand words!

Btw, love all your previous episodes posts Indi, sorry I haven't commented individually, but I love the way you write about their emotions and then bring it to a personal level by including quotes and poems, they are a joy to read!
I really, really love your write ups!👏
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: DurgaS

Disclaimer: Please do not copy my work anywhere. If you do please give credit.

Episode 110-111

Payal

Ye mastani sham, mehakta hua aalam
Kayee saari baatein tumse kehta hai man
Man mein basee ho jaise tasveer koyi
Iss tasveer ko aaj main bataa doon
Tumhe sataye agar dard koyi
Har uss dard ko main mitaadoon
Ek cheez jo hai mere dil ke kareeb
Uss cheez ko aaj main lautadoon
Ye mauka hua hai mere naseeb
Iss payal ko tumhe main pehna doon
Translation:
This frolicking evening, fragrant surroundings
Lot of things my heart is telling you
You are in my heart like some picture
Today I tell this picture
If any pain is harassing you
I will erase every such pain
One thing that is close to my heart
I return that thing today
This chance was there in my destiny
Let me put on this anklet on you


Wow Durga this is amazing poetry! The second verse is tugging my heartstrings...truly beautiful!
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Horizon

There is this drop dead gorgeous 25+ highly successful business man, dressed in an impeccable 3 piece suit, who moments ago doesn't heed to her hesitation and pulls her feet up to attend to its pain..as if that's his right... the same haq with which he questions everyone around months later at the temple "koi rokega mujhe?" before lifting her up in his arms... the same man.. kneeling, takes this little piece of her jewelry, his precious procession for a while now, from his pocket holds it up with his head bent for a fleeting moment, like a 5 yr old whose act is caught... or so I felt...that soul touching suppleness...innocence.. underlying this undeniable attraction/ desire of this alpha male towards this clumsy child woman... some thing that made this sublime moment "complete" in every possible sense!

"mujhe dosh na dena jagwaalon ho jaye agar dil deewana"!


Just wonderful Horizon! Yes he has "sadda haq" over her, loved this kneeling part! :-
the same man.. kneeling, takes this little piece of her jewelry, his precious procession for a while now, from his pocket holds it up with his head bent for a fleeting moment, like a 5 yr old whose act is caught...👏

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