Originally posted by: supriya.arshi
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the 1st page is Literally Fireworks👏⭐️...u hav done a Fab job with your writin nd your edits❤️ ⭐️👏❤️❤️
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"he was smitten but perhaps a tad scared, the feelings overwhelmed him. she was no fool yet she never guessed that what she felt was attraction most elemental. when trouble came, and she was lost, she found herself when she saw him, and there was nothing to do but run and hold what felt solid, steadfast in a shaken world;" - Amazingly said 👏👏
" what felt like her own. and it was him. his arms came up, he wanted more than ever to tell her he was there, he would let nothing happen to her. khushi, khushi called his heart, yet he couldn't let himself embrace the one he wanted to hold the tightest, closest, warm, and safe. he heard her say she can't be brave any more, she wanted to give up, and his eyes closed feeling her intense suffering, it was reflected in him. yet he couldn't say a thing⭐️." - are u tryin to make my cry here...
" when he could say her name out loud, she had started to retreat. the girl who had run to him and thrown herself upon him; wanting his arms around her, hugging him with all her might, crying into his shirt, burying her face against him for protection, hope, and yes, love, she now stepped back and ran away, her dupatta flying winging her out of sight. she never looked back. there was just a question left between the two... why?" - tht one scene...nd u hav given a beautiful description on their emotion nd feelings
every word is brilliantly written ⭐️- This is awesome 👏
if he had held her back, then the questions wouldn't ever come, would they.
u hav done a brilliant work with your Beautiful writings , updatin the episodes nd also your Edits
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A big Thank you for takin over this thread...nd keepin us together 🤗
ps: thanks for mentionin me twice in your reply 😃
hi supriya,
want to make me cry or what. i have done nothing, just posted every day. all of us, including this collage maker i know have kept thread happy.😃
you know when i made the black and white composition, which happened just like that, i thought of you and wondered what you'd say about it... ha ha, i am becoming needy, sir.
have i mentioned you twice somewhere? good. next time, three times.
i hope you are making one of your stunners for this thread, would like to post it on the main page.
thank you. and i will update 100 soon, so keep handkerchief, bucket, towel handy. 😆
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