SS: THE NIGHT to forget Pt 20 & Conclusion

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dreamgirlrus23

@dreamgirlrus23

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Posted: 11 years ago

#51

beautiful story!!!! and it also ended wonderfully "a night to remember " awesme

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Sana Sultana

@sana11

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Posted: 11 years ago

#52

read through all the parts..

story was superb 👏 👏 👏👏 👏 👏

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ayu_tripathi

@ayu_tripathi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#53

😛😛lovely OS..I😊😊😊...just loved the beatifuk bond arnav and his daughter shared..it was amazing reading it..!😃😃😃😃

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Sarita

@sarita_barun

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Posted: 11 years ago

#54

This story was amazing!!!
Really enjoyed it.
P.s. Can you update the title of the first part of the story... so it would show that there is more than 9 parts and the story is complete now. 😊

Edited by sarita_barun - 11 years ago

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Aishwarya

@Aish002

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Posted: 10 years ago

#55

read this in 1 go...amazing story..arnav's realization fo whose baby khushi is carrying was very realisitc...their love for anisa was touching...have you written any other story...u r a really good writer...😊

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Nazifa

@Nadz_786

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Posted: 10 years ago

#56

Originally posted by: Aish002
read this in 1 go...amazing story..arnav's realization fo whose baby khushi is carrying was very realisitc...their love for anisa was touching...have you written any other story...u r a really good writer...😊

Thank youuu and no I havent really posted any other stories yet, I've just been too busy with college :'( but I probably will in summer :)

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chilukuripuri

@chilukuripuri

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Posted: 10 years ago

#57

just a amazing story i read in one go dear u wrote so nice...

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hiraah

@hiraah

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Posted: 10 years ago

#58

Awesome!! Wow! For a first attempt this is beyond good. I was actually sad when i saw the words "last part" sometimes when people have these many parts the story might lose its touch and readers might lose interest bit you managed to maintain it in your story to the very last part and had your readers ( i dont know bout others but i was) hooked!

It was a wonderful plot with an interesting twist and a satisfying ending. Plus.. sham died a terrible death! ( this is truly the most brutal death i have seen him face and i must say, i am pleased).

There was a nice dose of comedy too like the kissing- red-lipstick scene. I was especially happy with the length of your updates.

With love,

Hiraah