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Posted: 12 years ago
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I was depressed with studying straight for the exam next week, so i switched on the computer to look for SOMETHING that might cheer me up, and jumped in joy when i saw the early post!!!! The BEST GIFT EVER! πŸ€—
Just yesterday i was thinking that should i suggest you to mention Bua Ji and Khushi's parents in an OS. SO this was a double surprise indeed! Later if u can, plz think about writing an OS regarding Arnav and Khushi both visiting Bua Ji's for a while, with Garima Ji and Shashi Ji included of course. I really loved the fact that Arnav behaves differently with the elders in the Gupta family, specially with Bua Ji. It was totally adorable in Maha Episode after Arnav-Khushi's fight about contract,( just after the kidnap track, if u remember;) Arnav tried to manao Bua Ji... SO cute. He actually doesn't mind being treated like a son there, whereas he wouldn't tolerate such treatment form Di, Nani, or Mami at Shantivan.

Also, i want to make a suggestion regarding the previous OS, The Remembering. After reading that, now i SO wanna see an OS including an Arnav-Khushi visit abroad, and an interaction with ASR fan-club u mentioned in The Frequent Flyer. It'll be so fun!!

PS. Loved to see Dhruv!
PPS. Glad you suggested a face to Dhruv. OH, figured out now who it was, so editing the post. Yeah, Vikrant's nice. He has some resemblance to Arnav, not much to Akash though.
Edited by aruni50218 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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AWESOME! I didn't stop laughing when read the NK screaming part! So much that my mother had to ask me what I was laughing so much about! Lovely story. So light hearted and yet filled my heart with warmth! It was literally a treat seeing your PM! Glad Dhruv's back! And Vikrant Messey, eh!? I LOVE that guy! So do you live in Delhi since you mentioned the bandh?
Waiting for your next update and thanks for the PM!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#33
superrr se uperrrπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†
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Posted: 12 years ago
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haha!! nk is so funny!! and druv πŸ˜†
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Posted: 12 years ago
#35
Thanks for the dedication baby! - Love you! muaahh!
Now coming to the story... What a smart way to tell us about your version of Shantivan... Wah wah...
I could imagine the corridors, the verandahs, the middle level balocony, then the lounges and then keep mapping it to what the show showed us as well... nicely done... You didnt end up explaining toomuch about the nook and corner of the building as you feared.. you pretty much stayed focussed on the story.
The subtle mention about the simplicity observed by Kushi even after being a bahu of a respectful, rich house- was very very nice... by that you highlighted the fact that the girl didnt lose her basic nature, her way of living, but still had been open minded to imbibe her Husband's sophisticated ways...
Oh poor NK, that guy almost stripped for Urnilaji... (by the way was the snoopy aunty an inspiration from another show which also has a snoopy Urmila character in itπŸ˜‰) Something is seriously wrong with NK's destiny... that guy gets linked with only auntyji's- bring home a nice girl for him soon😳
Haa..lucky you... you got two days off?😲 For us they asked us to come early to office... I was at office at 7.00 AM for two days...
Edited by abavi - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#36
OMG, the whole NK moment had me tears! That was brilliant! πŸ˜†

I love your writing and have become a stalker, I read your story usually before you PM me. Please don't stop, you are my link to the show.


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Posted: 12 years ago
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By writing down this OS you have successfully managed to convey a message as well I would say! Changes in buaji's neighbor was explained really well, first impressions always don't do justice and this was a prime example and its not good to draw conclusions on people with out actually knowing them😊 NK' was hilarious as always and the reason why he got so scared by noticing a woman peeking in to his room was even more hilarious,seriously you write so well and it fits to characters that we know of,no deviation from their personalities which is great!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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I just love your style of writing. You seem to capture the essence of IPKND... as if the episode really existed. I hope you continue to write well into when Arnav and khushi are grandparents!!

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Posted: 12 years ago
#39
poor me!!!!!!!! i had no holiday!!!!!!!!! :(

n NK was as usual so hilarious... loved the guest appearance of Dhruv!!!!!!!!
Very well written (which of course u do very well!!!!!)...
the big mad raizada family is truly very humble... the end was perfect!!!!!!!1 just shows how down to earth they are!!!!!!

Awsome!!!! Fantastic...
bole to raapchik...;)
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Posted: 12 years ago
#40
that was kinda lol!!! I enjoyed it!!!

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