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Posted: 12 years ago

#121

index 2 of truth

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first chapter of past

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khushi had a bad dream

arnav plan suprise for khushi

page 48

author note

please help arnav

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author note

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khushi teach arnav to respect other

content: arnav give khushi a special gfit

page 55

teaser

page 59

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arshi date

arshi rain dance

consumption

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teaser

page 65

precap

page 80

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Posted: 12 years ago

#122

index 3 of truth

part 1

part 2

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Posted: 12 years ago

#123

Originally posted by: desigirl_sydell
i have lost interest as of flashback

thnks for honesty

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Posted: 12 years ago

#124

Originally posted by yashu_95

To say, we are really missing Arshi but I think the flashback is also important... bcoz the running track cannot be ended abruptly and u may end it a bit fast if more votes are for Arshi track. It would be better if it ends faster but not without clarifying everyone's relation with Khushi.

dont worry i will end it as thought but now in fasttrack. and you will also get soon srshi update ok.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#125

Originally posted by jm020

I agree with yashu_95 missing Arshi but the flashback tracks are important to find out what and how the relations with pari and Khushi are so ending it abruptly wouldn't make sense

Jenny x

it will make sense and also it will according you all wish

so now i decided to end it in two update

bt not in unmanner it will end properly and like i

thought ok.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#126

Originally posted by prerna1

hi dear
i had no problem with flashback initially but now it seems very long and confusing too
if you dont mind try to cut it short and to the point
sometimes the flashback is way too detailed with not much thing in it
i like this story but somehow loosing interest due to this long flashbacks.
And also plz clarify the character of Raj sometimes you have introduced him a ok character then after sometime as a negative character. Where the original khushi according to your story fits in all this.
And if Raj is bad and pari left due to his and khushi then why he is still with singhanias

Hope you understand and clear my doubts soon

ok i got the point i will now be very precise and also you will not be confuse.

please dont now leave me in midst i will surely end flashback after 2 update.

the raj character cannt be clarified bcoz it only the twist

and rest ans you will get in note of ff.

thanks a lot for your true feeling.