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welcome avinaarshi i will update soon and will pm you.
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Edited my post on pp65
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i am liking the plot of the story and the fact that khushi is strong.
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Originally posted by: garash

i am liking the plot of the story and the fact that khushi is strong.


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Heartiest welcome to all arshians, I am back with my update. Sorry for late update. This update all credit goes to anjumenon(off course all regular commenter, but today especially she whose pm had motivated me again) because of whom you had been able to hear me. After previous update because of some readers who had made me realized how bad I write, I decided to quit the writing, but this girl not let me to do. She hooked up with my update from beginning and that too so enthusiastically that I had no option then to work hard for perfection in all my update. And also supported me when I decided to not write, thank you.This update goes to you dear, a long and hope interesting. So now I decided to carry my ff as I thought no matter how bad they are and, sorry in advance as there a long way to cover their many tracks. Especially you will enjoy the love triangle between raj, arnav and pari after truth will revealed, now be prepared for that coming soon. And for instance pari past I can only say that this full past episode will the best one according to me and full of suspense you really will have to get engrossed in knowing who is devil and who is saint.

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And lady called out for raja, from her room throwing out a cup of black coffee.

chahat: where the hell are you raja?

Raja hid behind uday and uday get happy seeing his condition. He brings him to front by griping his collar.

uday: arre chup kaha raha hai, sayam yamraaj ji aapko awwaz de rahe hai, jao vatsya bhagwan aapki aatma ko shanti de.

(Where are you hiding now, god of death is calling you go may your soul rest in peace.)

And push him out. Uday was also about to join him but his phone beep.

Uday: pari di ka message?

(Pari di's message)

He read the message, and remembers something.

Uday: oh god mai itni important baat kaisa bhool sakta hu, di bhi na bhul gaya toh yaad dilate iss tarah akele itna khatra udhana ki kya zarurat thi. Muje abhi hi vaha ke liye nikalna hoga.

(Oh god! how can I forgot so important thing, di should had remind me how can she take so much risk and move alone. I have reached just now there.)

Back to chahat room

Raja: (came running to chahat room)

Kya hua memsaab? Aap itna gussa kyun kar rahi hai?

(What happened mam? Why are you so angry?)

Chahat: toh kya timhari aarti utaru. Kitni baar hume bola hai ki hume coffee didu ki haath ki hi pasand hai. Aur agar didu busy hai toh jaisi woh banati hai, hume woh hi chaiya. Na jyada methi, na fiki. Aur na hi jyada garam. Samaj nahi aata?

(So do I worship you? How many times I told you that I want coffee only of my sister's hand and if she is busy coffee should be like how she make. Perfect mix of sweet-sour and not very hot. Didn't you all get a little thing? )

Raja shook his head down because it is better to be quiet when Miss chahat pari rathore speaks, no one even dare to interrupt her especially when pari is not around.

Chahat takes in hands her dress which she was supposed to wear for going to her boutique

And turn toward other maid name Maria.

Chahat: Maria, what I have commanded you late night yesterday?

Maria: mam, to keep your clothe ironed before you woke up.

Chahat: so may I know reason for being late.

Maria: actually mam we all were busy with pari didi..

As maria spoke pari didi , chahat raise her eyebrows

Maria: sorry, pari mam

Chahat suddenly got tensed and started looking for pari.

Chahat: didu, didu kaha hai aap? Didu

(Sister, where are you?)

And on not finding her anywhere she moves to kitchen to enquire more about her.

Chahat: maa, didu kaha hai?

(Mother where is didu?)

Dai maa tries to ignore topic

Dai maa: arre chahat aap kab udhi, hum abhi aapka nasta lagata hai.

(chahat when you walked up. I bring breakfast for you)

Chahat got irritated and spoke very loudly.

Chaaht: maa hume pucha didu kaha hai.

(maa I asked where is my sister)

Dai maa had no option but to tell truth

Dai maa: woh kal baat hui thi na, wahi gayi hai.

(She informed about the place yesterday, she had gone there only)

Hearing this chahat totally lost her calm. She had a heating up discussion for this yesterday and clearly warned pari to not go there. But then also she not listened her. chahat is very particular about pari's safety, she even not care about her wish for her safety.

Chahat: kal humara mana karne ke baad bhi didu waha gayi.

(I had denied going there yesterday, and then also didu not listened)

Dai maa: aap samajti kyun nahi, yeh unka kaam hai.

(Why you not understand this is her work.)

Chahat: nahi maa, unka kaam hai apna dhyaan rakhna aur kuch nahi baki sab ke liye hum hain.

(No mother, her work to take care of herself nothing else. And for other work I am there)

Dai maa tried her to explain but she not listen her, and moves where pari had gone.

Chahat pari rathore young, beautiful, arrogant fashion designer. She is a time bounded girl, and not even adjusts her routine timetable for a second. Her life had one principle live and let other live. She does what she thinks, having no worries of this world. Her world is her sister pari, to who is protect, love, care, share her life's moment. She was 3yrs old when their parents met with the accident; she was too small to understand it. When she came to her senses from that point she had only witness her father, mother and brother as ansh was always out to meet their business requirement, in pari. Pari had given her all values needed best business sense, intelligentency, respecting other. But devi mayya only know how chahat turned to be a stubborn. Her rude behavior towards others and most important her disbeliefness in pari's devi mayya. She believes that if god is really in this world he had not been snatch her parents from them. She believes that if our happiness credit goes to almighty god, then he is only responsible for their pain.

(Dear readers now going little far from house scene. I am writing another scene whose description is like this.)

(Author note: this content has some harsh words. My intention is not to insult any practice just they are wrote because story demand it. They are merely work of fiction not related to any reality)

This scene is of house Mr. Ranjore shah who is head of village goregav (in Bombay)

5 people were sitting in a hall. On one sofa Mr. Ranjore, his wife Mrs. ranjore and his son were sitting. On other sofa a bride with face covered from a long duptta on her head, and his father was sitting. They all were gathered to fix marriage.

Mr. ranjore: toh kahi naam batao tha aapno

(What was your name?)

He ask to bride father

Bride father said his name again with folding her trembling hand and in low voice

Father: huzur atama ram.

(My honor it was atama ram.)

Mrs. Ranjore: arre naam ko aag mai dalo, yeh batoa ki ladki ki maa kaha hai, aisi kaisi maa hai jisne apni ladki ko akele bhej diya.

(Throw name in fire. You tell why her mother not came? Where she is? What type of mother she is who send her daughter alone)

Atma ram silent for a minute and then Mother of bride entered the room

Mrs. atama ram: ji ghustaki maaf sethaani sa , aana mai thodi der hogayi.

(Forgive me my majesty I got late in reaching here)

Bride got elated seeing her mother and ran to give her a tight hug

She whisper hugging her

Bride: ma saa itni galdi kyun aayi, shadi ke baad hi padharna tha na aapko.

(Mother why you came so early? You should reach after marriage.)

Mrs. Atama ram: (whisper) arre mai kya karu us dhakan raja nai muje baad mai aapke bare mai kaha.

(What I do? That idiot raja had told about you afterward.)

Mrs. Ranjore taunts both of them.

Mrs. Ranjore: arre ab kya zindagi bar ma ki godh mai hi rehna hai kya?

(Did you want to live in your mother arm forever?)

Mr. atam ram: nahi sethani sa who kya hai na dono mai bahut pyarr hai isley .

(No my highness actually both loves each other very much. so it is because of that.)

Mrs. Ranjore: thike thike ab yaha badho toh hum kuch kaam ki baat karle.

(Ok now sit here, so that we talk about some important matter)

Mrs ranjore: toh aapki beti ko ghar ke sara kaam toh aata hai na, jaisa khana banana, bhartan karna, kapde dhona.

(Is your daughter know household work to make food, wash utensil, clean clothe)

Mrs. Atama ram: bikul aata hai ji. arre iska khana ka swaad toh itna accha hai mano Annapurna maa nai swanyam banaya ho, aur ab hum kya kaha hamra yaha toh yeh laxmi ban kar aayi hai.

(Yes she knows all work very well. She prepare very tasty food seems likes goddesses Annapurna had prepare. And for us she is not less than god laxmi)

Mr. Ranjore: yeh toh shadi ke baad hi pata chalega.

(This will be get to know after marriage)

Waisa aap daheez kitna dega(by the way how much dowry you will give)

Mr. Atama ram: par daheez dena toh kanonan apraad hai.

(But dowry is illegal)

All father, mother and son gave a loud and evil laugh.

Boy: arre bhuda yaha mera papa ka kanoon chalta hai samja ki nahi.

(You old man here I father rule understood)

Mr. atama ram: ji huzur

(Yes prince)

Mr ranjore: toh atama ram hume yeh toh yaad dilane ki zaroorat nahi ki ab se tumahari zameen humara beta ke naam hai aur

(Mr. Atama ram I don't want to remind you that from now your land is on my son's name.)

Mrs. Ranjore: aur aap apni beti ko khali haath toh nahi bhejagi , uska saath 10 lakhs rupee aur saath hi 5 tola sona , bas shagun mai itna hi khafi hai.

(and you will not send your daughter empty hand , she should bring 10 lakh rupees and 5 kilo gold all this are enough as gift.)

Bride: aap yeh kaisi baat kar rahi hai, aunti ji . hamara babuji ke pass itne rupee kaha se aayega woh toh ek mamuli kisan hai, aur yeh zameen toh inka jeena ka sahar hai.

(What are you taking my father is only a poor farmer how he will manage so much money and this land is only livelihood of them.)

Mrs. ranjore: aye chokri yaad rakh yaha rehna hai toh muh baandh rakhna sikh. Yehi sikhaya hai tera maa baap ne ki bado ki baat ke bich mai bolo.

(You be quiet girl. And learn to stay here. Your parents had taught you this only to speak in between elder people.)

Mrs. Atama ram got very angry when ranjore shouts at bride but bride control her.

Mr. Atma ram: tu chup kar bitiya hum baat kar rahe hai na.

(You be quiet daughter I am talking)

And then turn to Mr Ranjore. : huzur sab ho jayega.

(My highness all will be done)

Mr. Ranjore: aacha aur barati ke intezaam ke bare mai toh hume samjane ki zarurat nahi haina.

(And our relatives welcome steps are needed not to be explained right.)

Mrs Ranjore: aur ha kuch puchna ho toh abhi puch lo baad mai koi ghalti nahi honi chaiye.

(And if you want to ask anything else ask now I don't want any mistake later.)

Mrs. Atama ram: ji who ladka ladki aapas mai baat karle toh.

(If girl and boy get some time alone to talk)

Mrs ranjore: arre paagal hogayi hai humara yaha aisa nahi hota, aur agar mera ladoo ko tumhari ladki pasand hai toh aur kuch dekhna ki zarurat nahi.

(Are you gone mad we don't have this custom and if my son like your daughter than nothing more is needed)

Bride: ji hume bhi kuch puchna hai

(I also want to ask something)

Mrs ranjore: tuje kaha na ladki.

(I said to you that)

She was interrupped.

Mr Ranjore: arre kehna do na bechari iska baad toh chup hi rehna hai.

(Let her speak after that she has to be stay quiet.)

And again three of them laugh. And bride continues.

Bride: humtoh bas itna puch rahe tha ki shadi ke baad aapka ladoo humara ghar mai chat par soyaga ya phir darwaza ke bahar.

Mr. Ranjore: ae chokri yeh kya bakwaash kar rahi hai

Bride: inhe ghar ke kaam toh aate hai na woh kya hai na humara ghar mai koi naukrani nahi hai.

Ranjore son: mummy dekho na yeh kya keh rahi hai.

Bride: ji inhe hal jodhna, bel charana sab aata hai ki sikhana padega.

Mr. Ranjore now gets very angry and all three stand up. And shout

Mrs Ranjore: yeh kya anab shanab bol rahi aapki beti. Iski himat kaisa hui mera beta se yuh kehna ki arre who vahkeel hai yeh sadak shap kam karega kya.

isski toh mai

And raise her hand to slap her, but bride stopped her hand and twist it badly. Mrs ranjore scream in pain and other two get stunned. After a while she free her hand and pull off her dupatta , she was none other than miss pari rathore . Chief executive of pca news channel and crown by the highest and successful string operations for her show " desh ki awaaz" "voice of country" .

(Bride: I was just wanted to ask that whether after marriage your son will sleep on terrace or outside the gate.

Mr ranjore: what rubhish you are talking

Bride: he knows all household work or not actually we don't have maid in our house.

Ranjore son: Mummy see what she is talking

Bride: he know all farming skills or not, otherwise we have to taught him

Mr ranjore now get very angry and all three stand up. and shout

Mrs: what waste are you talking about. How she dare to talk like this my son is a lawyer will he do these downmarket things?

Wait I will teach her a lesson

And raise her hand to slap her, but bride stopped her hand and twist it badly. Mrs ranjore scream in pain and other two get stunned. After a while she free her hand and pull off her dupatta , she was none other than miss pari rathore . Chief executive of pca news channel and crown by the highest and successful string operations for her show " desh ki awaaz" "voice of country" . )


Edited by SAAAAONI - 12 years ago
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Pari rathore

A simple girl. Who live with her family, work for 15 hours in a day and deposit some beautiful moments of love in life. her lifestyle, dreams are not so big like her name she only wants love and happiness in her life , not ravenous of expensive car, or property, heavy jewelry which are obvious in girls of her class. She own one of the business of pca group, their news channel which due to her dedication and hard work had turn from a scrap to a multinational channel. As much as she is simple in her personal life equally a very disciplined, punctual, and particular business women. Perfection is only rule of her professional life and same apply to her team members.

Apart from this society, she has one more world. World of humanity, care, kindness, where she resides. Pari runs many well famed charitable houses and opened hospital for poor which are among top of many private hospital. Many successful programs and events are arranged by her as gift to charity. World salute her spirit. Her tenderness, her down to earth attitude. She is pride of ansh, strength of chahat, daughter of dai maa, aisha best friend, lovely sister of uday and a wonderful boss. Sorry sorry how can I forget her devi mayya, pari's friend who she had never left after her mother death. She remember till now that how she get scared one day and her mother console her my giving her devi mayya's potray and told her to keep her close whenever she feel lonely.

So let's see how you like our pari.

Uday: di careful.

Pari: kya hua sethani sa? Itna gussa. arre ab humara babuji aapse itna mehenga sauda kar rahe hai toh vo samaan sahi hai ya nahi vo toh dekhaga . Aap apne beta ko babuji ko bech rahe hai, toh usse ghar ke taur tarika bhi toh samjana padega.

(What happen your highness? Why are you so angry? My father is doing such an expensive deal with you then he will obviously check with the goods. Now as you are selling your son to my father so he must be taught my house rules.)

Mr. ranjore: humne apne beta ko kab bhecha

(When did we sold our child)

Pai: kamala hai, apni zameen aapke beta ke naam karna, phir 10 lakh rupee aur sona bhi ,toh badla mai hum bhi toh barabar ki kimat vasool karega.

(Common you want our land to be on name of your son. Then 10 lakh rupees and gold so in return we will also should get back same value)

Mrs. Ranjore: arre yeh paisa toh hum tuje ghar mai rakhne ke liye maang rahe hai.

(this money is in token to let you live in this house)

Pari: aacha toh yeh ek hotel hai, humara naya ghar nahi.

(ok this is a hotel not my new house)

Mr. ranjore son : mumma yeh ladki toh paagal hai.

(mom this girl is mad)

Pari: paagal nahi bas aapko apki hi baat ka matlab samja rahe hai. agar hum aapne purana risthe chod kar naye rishte bana rahe hai aapka beta bhi woh hi kar raha hai. Aapko hamara karche ke liye paisa chaiya, phir toh aapko bhi humara pariwaar ko paisa dena chaiya akhir unka bhi kamai ka sahra chut raha hai.

(I am just telling meaning of your own words. If I am making new relationship then all rules applying on me are also applicable on your son as he is also in same place. If you want money for sake of your livelihood then you should also give money to my parents as there source of income is also going.)

Mrs. Ranjore : arre yeh kya tarika hai badao se baat karne ka.

(is this a manner to talk to elder?)

Pari respond very loudly

Pari: aacha jab aapka beta humara babuji se batamizi kar raha tha jab kyon nahi roka aapne. Arre aap kya tameez sikhaya jo khud shagun ke naam par dusro ko sirf lutana janta hai, shagun ke liye toh 101 rupya bhi khafi hai. Lekin aap jaisa bhuka logo ko jitna bhi de utna kam hai.

(then why you not scold your son for misbehaving with my father. The person like you who only in name of tradition know to steal from other will what tell me what manners are. If we talk about gift then 101 rupees is also sufficient. But you people are hungry for money and there is no limit of your greediness.)

She turns to atama ram

Uncle aap apni beti ko inn logo ke hawala kar rahe tha, aap hi bataye kya woh iss mahol mai kush reh pati. Aaj toh aap inhe paisa de dete par kal agar yeh aur paisa mangta aur aapki beti ko hi kuch kar dete phir kya hota. yeh toh accha hai ki samay rehte aapki beti nai hume sab bata diya varna toh aaj kya ho jata.

(uncle you were giving your child hand to such people did she can ever stay happy with them? Today you will fulfill their demand but what happen when after sometimes they urge for more and for that have done something to your daughter. It is god sake that I came to know about this all on right time.)

Mr Ranjore: yeh sari baatein karna bahut aasan hai par jab mahengayi ki maar padeti hai toh sab sharafat bhaag jati hai.

(All this talks are easy to be said but when crisis knock the door all humanity run away.)

Pari give a sigh and speak to ranjore's son.

Pari: dekhiye hum janta hai ki iss mangayi mai akele ghar chalna muskil hia. Par kya aap iss tarah dusro ke paisa pe ji sakega. Kharcha nikalna ka kahi aur tarika hai. Aap aur apki patni saath milkar kam kar sakte hai aur…

(See I know it is not easy to survive in this costly world. But can you live peacefully with others money. To earn money there are many alternative, you and your wife can.)

Mrs. Ranjore interrupts her

Yeh kya keh rahi hai humara yaha ladkiya kam nahi karti pata nahi.

(What you are saying in our house girls do not work.)

Pari: kyun jab aap ladki ke pariwaar se paisa maang sakte hai toh ladki se kyun nahi. Agar woh apni kamaai se aapki ghar chalena mai madaad karde toh isme buraai kya hai. kam toh saraswati ji ka ashirwaad hota hai jise hum sab pujte hai.

(When you can ask for money from girl's family then why not accept the same that a girl earns. It will help in running your house. Work is blessing of sarawati god whom we worship.)

Par rehna dijiye hum aapko yeh kyun samaja rahe hai, aap logo ke dimag mai yeh baat nahi aayegi. Aapka faisla to iss desh ki janta hi karegi aur police hi aapko sabak shikhaaga .

(But leave it , there is no use of telling this things to you all. Your decision will made by the audience, and might now police can only teach you a lesson.)

Mr. Ranjore gave a dirty smile

Mr. Ranjore: woh toh jab hoga na jab aap yaha se jayegi.

(This will happen when you will go from there)

With saying this he indicates his man to catch them. Uday and goons enter in a huge fight and in all this mess pari was left isolated. On taking advantages of which ranjore's son try to hurt pari. He brought his hand near her face but was stopped by a firm and strong arms. She was chahat who came to save pari from there.

Chahat : itni badi ghalti mat karna. (Squeezing his hands very roughly) varna phir kabhi haath hilana layak nahi bachaga.

(don't do such big mistake(Squeezing his hands very roughly) otherwise not able to move your hands for any work.)

Pari try to stop chahat but she silent her by gesturing with her hands to not interfere.

Mr. ranjore: ab tu kuan hai?

(now who are you?)

Chahat: that doesn't matter you. Inspector

And then police arrive arrest the family.

Pari: ek second.

(wait)

He move towards ranjore's son.

dusri baar jab ladki dekhna jao toh uska bank balance dekhna ki bajah uska dil padhna ki koshish karna , kyunki riste paiso se nahi dil se banta hai. Aur agar sahi humsafar saath ho toh koi bhi sari muskil aasan ho jati hai.

(when you will go second time to see girl instead of seeing her bank balance try to look into her heart. Because relation are bulid from heart not money. And if right partner is with you every hurdle seems easy. )

And police take all three in jail.

Atama ram thanks pari. By folding hands.

Pari: nahi unkle aisa mat kijiye aap bade hai humse. Bas agar hume dhyanwaad karna hai toh apni beti ke liye aacha aur sacha ladka dhundia. Baki sab ki chinta chodiye aap toh janta hai na hum aapne employees ka kitna dhyaan rakte hai.

(unkle don't do that you are elder from me. If you wants to thanks then search for a good and true life partner for your daughter and for other things don't worry I take care of my employees very well)

Chahat (sarcastically) : absouletly correct no doubt in it.

And pari stares her eyes on chahat warning her to be quiet.

Mr. atama ram: jeti raho beta. Bhawan kare aapko aisa pati mile jo aapki jindagi khusiyo se bhar de.

(God bless you. May you get a husband that fills your life with happiness)

Pari get elated listening it.

Chahat: lagta ek aur sainik ab shahid hone ko tayaar hai.(in reference to marriage)

(i think one more soilder is ready to die ) (In reference to marriage)

Pari knowing her sister and her comment very well, decide to take leave.

Pari: ab hum chalet hai.

(now we take a leave)

Chahat: ha aapse bahut sari baatein bhi karni hai.

(ya I have to talk to you about many things)

And went out. Pari also start moving but moved back by uday

Uday: di thakur to gayo, ab tera kya hoga kaalia.

(di king had been arresested now what will happen with you)

Pari: woh hi jo manjoran chahat hoga.

(That only what chahat will wish)

And all come to home. House scene chahat is scolding pari.

Chahat: aap kya chati hai. Kya soch kar aap waha gaye. Humara mana karne ke baad bhi aapko humara ha ya naa se kuch farak nahi padta.

(what you want? What was in your mind while leaving to that place? I had told you not to go there but it seems my yes or no does not matters you.)

Pari: parta hai. Par humne bhi us ladki se wada kiya tha ki hum uski maadad karega. Aur itni choti si baat ka itna bada issue kyun bana rahi hai.

(it matters. But I have also promised that girl to help her, and whyyou are making issue of this small thing.)

Chahat: choti baat. Gunde mavlio ka area hai woh. Aap dono ko kuch ho jata toh. Aapko ek employee se kiye wada ki fikar thi aur us behen ki nahi jisne aapki safety ko dhyaan mai rak kar decision liya. Agar mai sahi samay par nahi aati.

(small thing. That area is full of goons. If you both got hurt then. You were considered a employee promise over my decision for your safety. If I would have not came at right time.)

Pari: kuch nahi hua devi maiya ki kripa se sab thike hai.

(don't worry every thing is fine from god sake. )

Chahat: aapko waha se humne nikala aur ha aapki devi mayya na nahi toh aaj kuch kiya aur nahi us din jab mom dad ki car khayi gir gayi aur woh ma.

(I had save you from there. Your god had not done anything not today and not even on that day when our mom dad car accident happened and they di….)

Chahat stopped abruptly realizing what she said and her words left pari in tears and lot of pain. Pain of separation , pain to loose parents , and pain on rememberence of hard days of past. Chahat initial her hand to console pari but she shoved it off.

Chahat: didu

Pari: nahi chahat aap sahi kehti hai, humara bhagwan ne kuch nahi kiya agar kiya hota toh aaj aap iss tarah unke liye. Hum toh bhul hi gaye Jis sakti ko puri duniya pujti hai who aapke liye aabhishaf hai.

(no chahat you were right my god had not done anything if he had then you would be not talking like this. I forget that the power whom whole world worship is a curse for you.)

Chahat turn her back towards pari front.

Chahat: haan aisai hai hum humara liye bhagwan, pyarr, shadi jaise emotion sab bakwass hai. Hum bas itna janta hai ki aap humari zindagi hai aur aapke har roz ke is kam se hum pareshaan hogaye hai. Isliye aapko aapne kaam aur humara bich mai se kisi ek ko chuna hoga. Aur aap bhi janti hai chahat kisi ko koi choice nahi deti isliye kal se aap kam par nahi jayegi.

(Yes I am like this. For me love, god, marriage are all waste of time. I know only one thing that you are my life and your all this daily work had fed me up. So now you have to choice me or your work. And chahat never give choices so its final you will not go for work from tomorrow.)

Dai maa: chahat par

(But chahat)

Chahat: no, I hope I have made each and every member of house cleared about my decision, especially di.

And retired to her room, after which all also proceed to their room.

After 2 hours.

Uday and dai maa talking in uday room

Dai maa: chahat bhi na bolne se pehla kabhi nahi sochti, dekha rula diya na pari ko.

(chahat never think before saying , her words today made pari cried.)

Uday practicing with his dumbles.

Uday: haan vo kya hai dai maa chahat ke dimaag ke sara screw ghayab hai so you know manufacturing defect.

(you are right actually chahat's brain all screw are missing so you know manufacturing defect.)

In response of which dai maa bat on his shoulder

Uday: aauch

Dai maa: chup, thike chahat ka dimaag karab hai aur tera yeh jo itna wajan har roz udha ta hai gundo se pitna ke liye . Kya kaha tha tune dai maa mera hota pari di ko koi chu nahi sakta.

(be quiet, chahat brain has defect and you who lift so much weight everyday just to get hit by goons at right time. What you assures me that dai maa don't worry till I am there I will not let anyone to touch pari di.)

Uday: ha to

(yes but)

Suddenly raja came inside running, and with tensing voice

Raja: aap sab jaldi kitchen mai chaliye varna choti malkin aaj pura Mumbai ke liye jalebi bana degi.

(you all fast run to kitchen otherwise pari mam will prepare jalebi for whole Mumbai.)

Uday jumped out listening jalebi

Uday: wow , pri di's yummy jalebi

Dai maa: hai dm aaj jalebio ki raksha karna. Raja aap jaldi chahat ko bulaia voh hi hai jo pari ko rok sakti hai.

(hai god please bear jalebi, raja you call chahat quick she can only stop pari.)

Pari in kitchen

Pari: sab samjta kya hai aapne aap ko hum toh chote bacha hai na jo apna khayal nahi rak sakte. Itna gussa mai baat ki humse aur order mara jaisa hum uski nahi woh humari badi behen ho. Devi mayya se bhi aisai baat ki humse toh chalta hai par bhagwan se koi aisa baat kasa kar sakta hai. Chahat nahi hitler yehi sahi naam hai uska liye.

(what every one thinks of thereselves , am I a small child that cannt take care of herself. She talked with me in so anger and also ordered as if I am not her big sister she is bigger than me. She had also badly talked to devi mayya , its ok she talked to me like ths but how can anyone say all that to god. Chahat no it better to call her hitler.)

Uday: iss jawab ko lock kiya jaye, aur sahi jawab ke badla mai aap jitte hai yeh crispy, delicious jalebi.

(we lock this answer, and in return of right answer you win crispy and delicious jalebi.)

And with that he was going to put a jalebi in his mouth but pari touched hot spoon on his hand and warn

Pari: haath mat lagna humari jalebi ko varna aaj kisi ki kher nahi.

(don't touch my jalebi, otherwise today I will not spare anyone.)

Uday acting to cry

Uday: aacha abhi kuch der pehla hum saath saath hain aur ab hum aapke kaun.

(few times back we were hum saath saath hain and now hum aapke kaun)

Pari: dodo dekihye mera dimaag abhi is tel se bhi jyada garam hai itna ki aapki saari dvd issi tel me tal dega . Yaha hume ek pachi ki tarah pinjare mai baandh ker rahe hai aur aapko pictures ke dialog yaad aa rahe hai.

(dodo see my brain is much hot than this oil , that much that I will fry all your dvd in this oil only. Here I am been prisoned in a cage and you are remembering picture dialog.)

Aur who hitler waha,

(and that hitler there)

She stopped seeing chahat standing on corner of kitchen. And started making her jalebi again with teary eyes. Chahat come inside and hold pari hand. But pari unhold and move out but to be stopped again by chahat. Getting irritate pari turned back and saw chahat neeled down on her foot and crying.

Chahat: sorry didu, aap janti hai na subah udh kar aapka cher nahi dekhte toh darr gata hai, aur phir hum kya kar rahe hai hume bhi pata nahi chalta. Aapko khone ka darr hume itna pareshan kar deta hai ki hume bas lagta hai ki aap kahi nahi jaye humara pass rahe, issi tarah aapke haath humara sir par rahe.

(sorry didu, you know that when I wake up in morning and not find you I get stressed and after that what I do I also not know. The fear to loose you trouble me so much that I only wish that you stay always with me, with your hands on my head like this only)

I am sorry

But pari went out of kitchen not listening to her.

Evening time. Pari was sitting in mandir area of house. And preparing for prayer. Chahat come and down her head in pari's lap.

Chahat: naraz hai

(are you still angry.)

Pari smiled

Pari: apni jaan se bhi koi naraz hota hai.

(can anyone get angry with her life.)

Chahat: hum bahut tang karte hai na aapko.

(I trouble you a lot right.)

Pari running her fingers in chahat hair and placed a kiss between her hairs.

Pari: haq hai. Aapki behen hai, maa hai, papa hai aur bhai.

(you have right. I am your sister,, mother, father and also brother)

Chahat erect herself and give pari a tight hug.

Chahat: hum bahut darr jate hai didu, hume aapke bina jeena nahi aata. Mama aur papa ki maut ka dard humne kaisa bhi she liya lekin agar meri kismet nai muje aapse bhi dur kar diya toh mai toh marr hi jaugi.

(didu I get very much scared. I cannt leave without you. Mama and papa death pain I tolerated some how but if faith will separate me from you I will die)

Pari broke the hug and stop chahat from speaking further.

Pari: aisa nahi kehta. Devi maiya ki kripa se aap 100 saal jiye , humari umar bhi aapko lag jaye.

(don't say like this. By devi maiya grace you live 100 years and my life also get submitted in your breath)

Chahat gave a huge laugh

Chahat: duniya idar ki udar ho gaye par aap apni devi maiya ko nahi bhul sakti. Didu aap unse itni prayer karti hai ki baki sab ko toh waiting line mai khada rehna padta hoga.

(World goes here and there but you will never forget your devi maiya. Didu you pray so many times that I am sure other has to stand in waiting line)

Uday: aur iska udharan hum hain bhaiya.

(and I am the biggest example of it)

Jab hi toh 5 saal se inse ek ladki maang raha hu par ek kya inhone toh aadi bhi nahi beji

(I am praying from 5 years for a girl, but 1 is far they have not even granted a half of her.)

And sit near pari with pouted face.

Chahat tease him

Chahat: kya hai uday bhai aap world k ek antique piece hai toh aap ke liye toh ek aur antique piece chaiye jo bhagwan ne abhi tak nahi banae.

(uday bhai you are world one of the antique piece so your girl should also be antique , which god till now not created.)

Pari hold chahat ears.

Pari: chup rahiye, dekhna humara dodo ko ek din duniya ki sabse aachi ladki milegi.

(Be quiet, you see my dodo will get best girl of world one day)

And full house again with babblings, laughter and lots of happiness.

Raja: choti malkin ab agar sab thik ho gaya ho toh aarti karle.

(Mam if all things are alright then can we do prayer.)

Pari: yeh toh chahat se hi puchaiye.

(that you ask to chahat only)

Chahat: ok baba aap ko jaha jana hai, jo karna hai kijiye. Par ek shart par.

(ok you do whatever you want want but on one condition.)

And with that two men entered with guns.

Pari: nahi phirse

(no way again)

Chahat: soch lijiye office jana hai ki nahi.

(then you think you want to go to office or not.)

Pari: thike.par yeh mera kam main interfere nahio karega.

(ok but they will not interfere in my work.)

Chahat: sure. Aap inke kam mai mat karna yeh aapke kam mai nahi karege.

(sure. You don't interrupt in there work they will also not disturb you.)

Dai maa: aacha ab dono mai sulah ho gayi toh aarti karle.

(ok now if both have done settlement can we start prayer.)

All get ready for evening prayer. And worship god

Chahat: ok guys carry on , bye .

But pari held chahat hand. And made her hold thali , in a manner that chahat hand was holding thali and pari hand on chahat's from which she was carrying thali.

Pari: aapko devi maiya par vishwas nahi hai, par humpar toh hai. Aur hume in par.

(you don't trust devimaiya, but you have trust on me. And I trust her.)

And with that she forcefully involved chahat in prayer and chahat not protest because of pari wish.

Like always pari unwilling made chahat do all procedure by holding her hand

She pray

Pari: devi maiya aap gussa mat hona, aap toh janti hai ki yeh sirf upar upar se aisi hai magar iska dil bilkul saaf hai. Aap humsa iski raksha karna aur isse khub taraki dena.

(devi maiya you don't get angry she is only pretending to be rude, but her heart is pure. You always protect her and give her success.)

After prayer all have dinner and retired to there room. Pari was going in her room when her sight fall on chahat's room gate which was half open .on going inside she found that chahat was unproperly slept while working. She made her sleep confrontably , pull her in duvet and was to leave when chahat hold her hand.

Chahat mummers in sleep

Chahat: didu aap mammy aur papa ki tarah muje chod kar mat jana.

(didu you don't leave me like mom and dad.)

Pari eyes got teary , she kissed her forhead , slowly removed her hand , and switch off the light.


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Night was very heavy for pari as usual she cannot able to sleep due to tension for chahat, her dependence on pari always worrries her, and she knew that one person only can heel her stress , her ansh bhaiya.

She check out the time and make a call to ansh.

But there was a twist in story as called was answered by a strange voice

He was none other than destiny of pari . mr. raj singhnia. But they cannt hear each other due to disturbance in line.

Raj: hello

Pari: hello aapki aawaz nahi aarahi hai.

(hello your voice is not clearly coming)

Raj: hello mam see I am not that who you are thinking

Pari: kya hum kya soch rahe hai. Arre hume toh yeh puchne ke liye phone lagaya ki aapne apni dawai samay par li ya nahi.

(what? What I am thinking? I only want to ask that whether you have taken medicine on time. )

Raj: mam I am telling I am not ansh rathore

Pari: ansh rathore. Aap apna naam kyun bata rahe hai.

(ansh rathore. Why are you telling your name.)

Raj speaks very loudly.

Raj: what a creep, see you silly girl before starting your session of question answer make yourself aware that I am not ansh rathore. my and his phone got exchanged so can you please call sometimes later.

And it was raj bad luck that this time pari listened clearly.

Pari: you to told me silly, listened you whatever just do one favor give the phone to mr. ansh and forward her the message that I have call him. Then wait and watch what he do to you on talking to me like this.

Raj: first of all I am not here his employee nor your servant if you are eager to talk him so much then you are welcomed at London. This Indians I tell you always ready for argument

Pari: what? How dare you , I very well know nris like you who live , study here and then fly to foreign and there also cruse our country only really a cheap mentality.

Raj: mind your language miss.

Pari: first you learn to mind your own business oh sorry your own mobile. Atleast you will not need anyone else.

Raj: excuseme

Pari: excuse, I know mr. ansh is very kind he might have given you this phone as charity.it is ok I understand , you please pass my message to him. good day.

Before raj could speak anything call was cut.

Pari: batamize

(misbehaviour)

Raj: crazy.

In London after phone fight.

There was knock in raj's cabin

Raj: coming

And meet him mr. ansh rathore.

Mr ansh rathore. 30 years old owner of a successful group of companies pca. He was 18 when his parents died and from then had handle all responsibility of business and home with mr. singhania, father of raj and childhood friend of ansh's dad . ansh dad and raj dad have both started this chains of company together which have news channel, multinational hotels, malls and many areas covered in group. After both death now these business are handled by there children. Ansh is simple guy who is workaholic and live in london from 9 years. He love his both sister very much and work hard day and night for there better life. even he not got married for this reason.raj and ansh had recentaly completed a project together and in no time span became good friends.

Raj: mr ansh please come in

Ansh: actually my phone got exchanged with you.

Raj: ya I just now discovered it. Here you go. keep safe your phone and dude I never saw your girlfriend but I can say her temparent is very low.

Ansh: what girlfriend?

And ansh gave a laugh. Not possible.

Raj: she called just now just check call list. And then raj started with his work on laptop.

Ansh check the call it was of pari.

Ansh: oh god pari. Maina toh dawaai li hi nahi aaj toh meri shamat paki hai.

(oh god pari. I have not taken my medicine also today I will surely land in big trouble)

Raj: pari, raj eyes turn up on listening the name.

Ansh: haan meri choti behen pari rathore. Tumhe yaad nahin .

(yes my small sister pari rather, you don't remember)

Raj: ya just caught it now, offcourse we were together in school for some standards. If I not wrong chief executive of pca news channel and director of sucessful show " voice of country" right.

Ansh : yes, with that world best sister and wonderful human being. It will not be wrong to give all our Indian venture sucess credit to her.

Raj: oh I see.

Ansh: sorry raj I just make a call and I hope you have not spoil my surprise and tell her that we are coming to india.

Raj: relax I have not disclosed, actually she not given me opportunity of that, and you should call her soon otherwise world will encounter with another volcano

Ansh gave a sweet smile knowing her sister and how he had treated raj and exit from room

Raj: toh miss crazy, ko business karna bhi aata hai . interesting . meet you soon in india. Hum bhi toh dekha ki jiski aawaz itni khobsurat hai woh kitni khobsurat hai.

(so miss crazy you know to do business also. Interesting. Meet you soon in india. Let see whose voice is so sweet how she would be looking)

Ansh call pari

Ansh: aap soyi nahi

(you had not slept till now)

Pari: aapka phone ka hi intezaar kar rahe tha.

(waiting for your call only)

Ansh: aap rorahi hai.

(you are crying)

Pari wiping off her tears.

Pari: nahi aap bhi na kuch bhi sochta hai.

(no you think anything)

Ansh smiled and speak

Ansh: aap janti hai jab aap iss duniya mai aayi thi toh sabse pehla humne hi aapko udaya tha , aur tab se lekar ab tak hum aapki har baat bina bole hi samaj jate hai.

(you know when you first time arrived in this world , I only took you in my arms. From that time to till now I understand you without need of any words.)

Pari: who aaj subah

(today morning)

And she narrate full story.

Ansh: pari aap thik hai itni laparvahi. Aap bhi na apne kam ke chalet kisi ki parwah nahi karti. Woh toh uday waha hai isliye mai yaha aaram se reh patu hu.

(pari you are alright? You never pay heed to anything before your work. Thank od uday is there because of whom I live here peacefully.)

Pari: ab aap bhi hume chahat ki tarah datega.

(now you will also scold me like chahat)

Ansh: sorry.

Pari: it's ok. Bhaiya I miss you.

Ansh: kya hua pari.

(what happened pari)

Pari: bhaiya chahat ka darr hume bahut pareshan karta hai. Us darr ke karan hi vo aaj itni accrue, zidhi ho gayi. Usne hume iss duniyaa se toh bacha liya par khud iss duniya se bahut dur hogayi hai.

(brother chahat's fear tense me. Because of her fear today she is so rude, stubborn. She has safe me from world but done herselfaway from the society. )

Ansh: aap aisa kyun sochti hai. Galti sirf aapki hi nahi meri bhi hai shayad maina hi kabhi chahat ko vo attention nahi diya which she deserve.

(why you think like that , fault is not only your I think I have only not given enough attention to chahat which she deserves)

Pari: no bhaiya. mana ki aapne hume samay nahi diya par aaj aapki wajah se hum dono ek aachi aur healthy life ji rahe hai. Aaj humara pass jo bhi khusiya hai vo aapki hi di hui hai.

(no brother. I agree you have not given us time but because of you today we both are living a good and healthy life. all happiness we have today is because of you only.)

Ansh: ab aap chinta mat kijiye pari kuch din aur phir mai sab thik kar duga.

(no you don't worry few days more than I will fit all matters)

Pari: matlab?

(what?)

Ansh: kuch nahi surprise hai abhi se bataduga toh maza kya rahega.

(nothing it is a surprise if I will tell you now then what will be the fun)

Pari: bhai this is not fair aap jante hai na humse intezaar bikul nahi hota, aur surprise ka naam sunta hi humari excitement aur badh jati hai please bataea na.

(it is not fair, you know I cannt wait and epsceially surprise I increases my excitement. please tell.)

Ansh: sorry pari you have wait this time.

Intezarr kar apne surprise ka jo teri zindagi ko khushiyo se bhar dega.

(wait for your surprise which will fill your life with happiness.)

(ansh speaks to himself seeing towards raj)

Pari: ok.

Ab hum rakte hai par aap apni dawaai samay par lena aur khana bhi kha lena.

(now I keep the phone but you take medicine and eat well on time)

Ansh: ok madam. Bye.

Pari: bye.

And after talking to ansh pari doze off to bed.

In morning. At breakfast table all were there but chahat was missing.

Pari: maa chahaat abhi tak nahi udhi.

(mom chahat has not wake up till now.)

Dai maa: pari aap bhul gayi aaj unka kitna bada aasignment ki date hai, bas subah se usi ki tayari kar rahi hai.

(pari you orgot today is due date of her big assignment, she is busy in preparation for that only.)

Chahat enters thedining area while talking on phone.

Chahat: she raina(her secretary) if sample is not available in that area search any where else. I want that piece of cloth only so now you borrow it from sky or dig it from ground that is not in my consideration. Understood.

And after ending call was leaving for boutique when pari stop her.

Chahat: didu. What? I am really getting late and in no mood to listen any thing.

Pari: thike jaisi teri marzi par hum aapko bina nasta kare nahi jaane dega.

(okay as ypu wish but I will not let you go without breakfast.)

Chahat: no way di? Clients are nothere way and see raina is again calling me. So sorry

Pari took the phone and command raina.

Pari: miss raina, can you bear your mam for 20 minutes so that she finish with her breakfast. I am sure there will some stuff with you to show to client in meanwhile. Right.

Raina: offcourse pari mam. Sorry for my disturbance.

Pari give phone to chahat

Pari: problem solve.

Chahat: didu aap kitni zidh karti hai.

(didu you really force so much)

Pari: kya karu tuje hi sikha hai.

(what I do I have learned it from you)

Dai maa: chahat kha lijiye thoda sa varna pari bhi aisai hi bhuki rahegi.

(chahat eat a little otherwise pari will also not eat.)

Uday: phir di office mai hum sabka dimaag kha jayegi.

(and then di in office will eat our brain)

And chahat quiet and settle down for breakfast. Chahat always ignore her health for work because of which pari is extra cautious in chahat's matter. From her breakfast to dinner, all heath related things are responsibility of pari.

As chahat sit at table her phone rang again and she helplessly see at pari

Pari: aap baat kijiye hum aapko kilate hai.

(you talk I will feed you)

Chahat: bas didu ab hum jaye.

(didu now can I go)

Pari: 1 minute.

And pari goes to kitchen and bring a small bowl in her hands. She forward spoon near chahat's mouth but she step back making faces.

Chahat: didu noway I don't like it

Pari: (insering spoon in her mouth)

Yeh aapke taste ke liye nahi hai balki aapki raksha ke liye hai.

(it is no for taste it is for your safety.)

Chahat: but

Pari: chahat shayad aap bhul gayi hai ki humara ghar ka rule hai koi bhi dahi sakar khaye bina ghar se bahar nahi jata. Isse din aacha gujar ta hai.

(chahat I think you forget that there is a rule of my home that no one will step out without having curd and sugar, ifrom this our day go pleasant.)

Chahat: ok now can I go

Pari: sure

Chahat place a kiss on pari cheek

Chaah: bye

Pari: best of luck

The below scene are of present . after pari's death

Chahat: thank you

And chahat flashback end coming to reality. She was standing with tears and pari photo in her hands.

Chahat: didu aaj humara liye bahut bada din hai hume best of luck nahi khegi.

(didu today is a big day for me don't will you wish me luck)


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continue soon...


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hey where hv u gone again?????????

plllzzz update...
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loved it...

thanks 4 d mahaupdate...

part 1 & 2...

loved d way khushi was doing a social work for protection of women & their upliftment...👏👏
i loved d part where she was asking d lady whether her son knows how to do farming,household work...🤣

chahat is really typical asr type...really rude to others,care only of family especially overprotective of her didu...loved her character...😃😃😃

part 3...

loved d bonding pari shared with every1 especially ansh & chahat...

part 4...
felt sad 4 gudiya that chahat scolded 4 her no mistake...
feel that chahat should soften down towards gudiya a bit...she should not punish d poor gal 4 hr mom's mistake...

loved d way pari consoled gudiya...

m l'il confused y didn't gudiya recognize pari in the hospital...



so chahat joined ar...

waiting 4 d great pari-chahat meeting wid a big bang...


continue soon...

waiting eagerly 4 next part...
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