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AngelTeen

@AngelTeen

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Posted: 12 years ago

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AngelTeen

@AngelTeen

Stunner

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Posted: 12 years ago

.~. Saiyyaan .~.

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Harshitha Shankar

@-_-harsh42

Dazzler

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

Aah. . . .

That gentleness in each of his action. . . .

Its sooo. . . sooo. . . . SO... *sigh*

Yes, you just rendered ME speechless!! 😛

*Runs to check blog* 😃

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Sona

@mistyrains

Dazzler

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

Res! :)

I love the way you've written out every emotion flitting across their eyes in the initial part, its beautiful. And it is engaging, equally like the part after it, where the dismal environment, the hurt, disappointment and prominent anguish brimming in the atmosphere.Very emoting, you know exactly how much I'm looking forward to this story!;)

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...Doctor...

@...Doctor...

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

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Rae the blog looks beautiful, so colourful. I love it. And the banner *sigh* I am in love with the title.

The prologue left me spellbound. So beautifully written, perfectly worded. I loved the scene between Arnav & khushi. The way he held her close, that blush that crept up her cheeks, her heartbeat, their eyelock..everything looked so perfect & then you drop the bomb. Bravo Rae! The flow was flawless & I am so excited to read this one :D

BTW who's that girl? Anjali?

Eagerly waiting for the next update.

Continue soon :)

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Gals

@Cute_Gal

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

beautifully written..
waiting to read more..
loved d blog..

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deviarshi

@deviarshi

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

I love the title & the prologue. Wish to read further & y not bcoz all ur writings are superb.

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vgedin

@vgedin

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

Beautiful, Rae ! Several things -

Firstly, I love the look of your blog. Vibrant, delightful; they remind me of holi and happy times.

Then theres that whole scene between Arnav and Khushi - you only talk of what their eyes and their gestures emote, yet it was so engaging! Arnav-ness and Khushi-ness reeking out of every movement in their eyes. And then I always fall for the "Tum thik ho?" Haye ..

I am very intrigued by the mystery couple in the second half. Is that Khushi, or Anjali, or .. because at this point my imagination is allowed to run wild - Lavanya ? Anyway, I will wait for you to tell us more.

The whole prologue had this sense of foreboding, like there are sorrows and great threats looming over their heads. Very interesting premise and characters, want to read more :)

Great work, Rae. And thanks for the PM :)