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Mariam

@--Amy--

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#31

What an amazing start!

I loved the OS,you wrote before!

It was beautifully written...just perfect

I loved the way you described their each and every emotion!

and who is the girl in the end?

Is it Anjali?

I'll be looking forward to it...

thanks for the pm

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claireDD

@claireDD

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#32

wooowww...arshi as actors !!!!
i always adore the way you explain the emotions so vividly yet with so much delicacy..
are they married????
waiting eagerly for the next update..

ps-i can't comment on your blog...and i can't figure out why😔

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ArSh23

@ArSh23

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#33

I'm a huge fan of your stories! Great start! I love the detail with which you explain everything. It almost feels like I'm watching it happen in front of me! Awesome job!

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JerryTheMouse

@JerryTheMouse

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#34

I'm so excited!

Checking blog now.

😃

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JerryTheMouse

@JerryTheMouse

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#35

Can't post on blog for some reason.

I have to say, the rawness of emotions in both the scenes just floored me.

Thank you, and I would love to read more.

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golpokobita

@golpokobita

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#36

wonderdul! i am amazed by the quality of your writings, beautiful narratives! you are going to be a great writer, no doubt!

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Raven

@TouchOfArHi

Voyager

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#37

I'm a new reader and I really do like this FF of your's :)

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Reem

@TRND86

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Posted: 12 years ago

#38

You are writing another story 😃. I look forward to how yo take this forward!

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arshiyakanishka

@arshiyakanishka

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Posted: 12 years ago

#39

First n foremost...d blog is so vibrnat n beautiful n d banner too.

So glad dat i can read some of ur work as most of the earlier ones r on private blogs.

Coming to d update...d first half described d attraction dat Arnav n Khushi secretly felt towards each other n their feelings beautifully.D touch,d stares,d heartbeat,d eyelock,d breath,d caress...everything felt so real.Very well written Rae.

D latter half described an environment totally opposite d half...full of sadness,despair,distance, loss of faith n dissappointment in love.I don't know if m right ot wrong but something tells me dat d second half also describes Arnav n Khushi only but their current situation while first half is their flashback.

But both d parts display a myriad of emotions albeit of opposite kinds n to think its only a prologue!So very excited to start this journey with u 😊

Tried posting on d blog but i m unable to do so.😔

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Deeksha

@-Dee-

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#40

The blog is so radiantly colourful that I forbid myself to believe that the second couple might be Arnav and Khushi. I look forward to the revelation and the story in all its bright glory. 😃