OS: INCOMPLETE!! (PART 3-UPDATED) pg 4 - Page 4

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Posted: 12 years ago
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must say guys khushi is the one who was addicted to watch all the shades of ASR
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Posted: 12 years ago
#32
what happens next then
why is she thanking him for
is it for giving blood but she dont know about it
or was it for feeding her and taking care of her
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Posted: 12 years ago
#33
Please pm me when you update it! loved it!!😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#34
waiting to read pls post other parts
Posted: 12 years ago
#35
Arnav went to Khushi's room and...😭😭😭!
Pls cont..😃
Posted: 12 years ago
#36
aww part 3 ws so gud..pls cont!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#37
Awesome!

Please PM me ur updates!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#38
i am sooo sorry 2 update late! but i was damn busy! nywy herez d next update! hope u all like it!! 😊
PART 4
K- Kyunki...aapne humara itni achi tarah se khayal rakha! Matlab ki... aap yahan... i...it..itni der se baithe huye ho.
A- Shutup Khushi! Sab log busy the.
K- Aur aap? Aap busy nahi ho??
RABBA VE...
(Arnav changes the topic at that moment)
A- Doctor ne kaha hai ki tum kal ja sakti ho. Toh mein saare formalities puri kar ke aata huin. Tum yahan se hilne ki koshish bhi mat karna.
Kuch bhi chahiye iss switch ko press karna aur nurse aakar tumhe jo chahiye degi. Get that?!
K- Theeke Arnavji...par hum aaj nahi ja sakte? Hum yahan baith baith kar pak gaye hai. Humein Amma, Babuji, Jiji.. sabse milna hai...
A- Meine kaha na...hum kal chalege. Ab chup chaap baithi raho. Mein aata huin.
(Arnav goes)
K- Hey Devvi Maiyya! Ab aphi bataiye ki hum kya karein...aisa lag raha jaise ki hum aek zinda laash hai! Kya karein?! Yahan se bahar kaise jaaye woh bhi jaldi!
Suddenly the door opens...and to Khush's surprise...Amma and Babuji and everyone will be there)
Khushi gets really very happy.
K- Amma, Babuji aap sab??!
Amma- Khushi bitiya tum kaise ho? Eee dekho hum tumhare liye ka laye hai..
K- Jalebiii
(Arnav comes in..and stops her)
A- Tum pagal ho?! Tumhe pata he ki tum ye nahi kha sakti..phir bhi...
(Arnav then turning towards Garima)
A- Aur aunty aap bhi ye kyun layi hai?! Isse abhi ke liye sirf simple khaana khana hai!
(From the other side Anjali di notices Anrav and smiles continously on his caring behaviour towards Khushi...Arnav notices her and..)
A- (looking at his DI) I mean...doctor ne kaha hai..
(The doctor comes and checks Khushi and finds everything perfectly fine and so says that they can take her back home)
(On hearing this Khushi getz sooo excited)
Anjali- Buaji agar aap ijazad de toh kyun na Khushi ji humare ghar rahein..jab tak woh theek nahi ho jati.
Buaji- Naahi..Naahi bitiya...iski kono zaruat naahi!
A- Buaji...waise bhi Khushi ko apni behen ke saath rehna tha..toh...
(Anjali looks at her chottey..and with a naughty smile says..)
Anjali- Haan..Haan buaji...chottey ekdam theek keh rahein hai! Hum sab hain na unka khayal rakne (looking at Arnav)...kyun chottey?!!
(Arnav looks away)
(Buaji finally agrees and allows Khushi to go)
(In all this no one asks Khushi..and she is really confused! But also happy to meet her sister)
(They all reach the Raizada Mansion..and everyone asks about Khushi's health)
(Later in the evening Khushi is allotted a room by Anjali and Payal)
Anjali- Payal ji aap idhar hee sooo rahi hai na?
(Khushi confused )
Payal- Ji di..
(Khushi interrupts..)
K- Kya..?! Jiji aap humare saath soo rahi hai?!
Payal- Hain Khushi! Woh kya hain na..tum abhi..abhi hospital se aai ho..toh meine socha ki...
(Khushi interrupts again)
K- Nahi jiji..aap idar nahi soo rahi hai...aur woh bhi abhi..abhi shaadi hui hai..aur aap idar...humare saath!! Nahi jiji!
(Payal just opens her mouth to say..but Khushi dosen't let her say)
K- Jiji ummm..aap..apko humari kasam..aap ab seedha jija ji ke paas jaigi!
Payal- Khushi tu pagal hai!?
(Payal off's the room lights..and goes)
(Khushi starts getting scared...as it is completely dark! She later curses her ownself for not listening to her jiji!)
(Meanwhile Arnav gets restless...he only and only thinks about Khushi! He tries to do some work..but can't focus properly)
(Khushi on the other side closes her eyes and keeps uttering "Devvi Maiyaa")
(All of a sudden a strange sound comes..and Khushi opens her eyes and sees...)
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Posted: 12 years ago
#39
Amazing update
Loved it😛
Waiting for d next
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Posted: 12 years ago
#40
dude its really nice!!! continue soon!!!
and listen make an index na..with the page no's...it makes it easier to read!!!
bt luv ur story

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