Arhi SS: Monster Music Description Upd.

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hello every one,

I have had this idea for a very long time, in fact even before I started my other 2 fanfics, such as A Crack In The Mirror, and One Last Wish. How ever I was having trouble developing one character, and I kept it inside my mind pending. Although finally I developed this character and I have decided to post the prologue. Now keep in mind I will start this fic after I am done A Crack In The Mirror, which will finish very soon. Then our journey with this story will begin.

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Prologue


''Did you do it?''

''Yes.''

'' Tell me the truth because the consequences are very severer, and you will have to face it all if you don't tell me the truth.''

A malicious laugh echoed through the moldy, dark walls, ''In case you didn't notice I am beaten up, bloody and broken. How much more can the consequences be severer. Unless they are planning on boiling me in hot water, to kill me.''

''So you rather die than tell the truth.''

''This is the truth and you better start accepting it right now.''

''Then look in to my eyes and confess.''

His blood shot pupils rose to meet her own, ''I Arnav Singh Razaida, killed Manish Singh Razaida, and that is the truth Miss. Gupta. The solid truth.''



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I need full feed back on this please. Every one kindly please tell me what you think, and don't hesitate to do so. This concept will be full of different characters, although as usual a sense of reality will be present.

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Anyways, enjoy and PLEASE COMMENT. Liking is awesome and I appreciate it a lot, but comments help me get motivated to write. I love hearing feed back so PLEASE help a writer out. :) Thanks.


Index

Character Description: Pg 5

Music Description for characters: Pg 8




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Shweta1691 thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Dhinka chika dhinka chika dhinka chika dhinka chika...re re re!!!

Reswa

--Unreswa--

Well this sounds very interesting!!!!
So so many questions...
He didnt sound too perturbed about killing a man...😲

Will be waiting


Edited by Shweta1691 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hey!
I'm intrigued ... very intrigued ...
I hope to read more of this when your other story is complete 😊
Thanks for the PM.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Loved d prologue
Thanx for pm 😊 😊 😊
continue nd update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Shweta1691

Dhinka chika dhinka chika dhinka chika dhinka chika...re re re!!!


Reswa

--Unreswa--

Well this sounds very interesting!!!!
So so many questions...
He didnt sound too perturbed about killing a man...😲

Will be waiting



LOL Your res made me laugh so hard. Yup, only you. <3
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Interesting! :)
please update 'a crack in the mirror' soon.. :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Dalmuthuya


LOL Your res made me laugh so hard. Yup, only you. <3


We aim to please 😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Its really interesting one... Pleasee do conitnue and thank you for that PM..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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interesting. Do continue n pm me
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Very interesting..
So Arnav singh Raizada seems to kill a Raizada only.. But Khushi isn't that convinced with his confession...

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