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Seeta

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Posted: 12 years ago

nice one please update soon...would love to see how 'blockhead" resolves this one

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lara3110

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Posted: 12 years ago

Great third part and I hope you will continue as promised. This part is still incomplete. Gread reading - Love it very much. Absolutely fantastic.⭐️
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With each part, I get choked and emotional feeling Khushi's frantic call as to why this is happening to her. Where did she go wrong? Always giving her love, was it not enough????????

Still Arnav is so full of himself

Love to read more, please.

THANK YOU.😃

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lara3110

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Posted: 12 years ago

Thank you onceagain. These three are my favourites. I have also loved Fear, Destructive Lies too. Are we going to get some more in continuation to Jalebis.

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Take care and God Bless.

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Mariam

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Posted: 12 years ago

That was really nice...loved it!

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Nidsubh007

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Posted: 12 years ago

I hope you are continuing this!!!

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VasantiLad

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Posted: 12 years ago

Ya I reckon you should continue with this thread

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Arshi_fanad

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Posted: 12 years ago

A Matserpiece it was.

Pls pm me when u update.

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Posted: 12 years ago

Ist aweosme when will u post the next part ? 😳

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Ruthi777

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Posted: 12 years ago

I feel bad for Khushi !!! Please make this as an SS. Want to see how you would conclude this.

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lara3110

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Posted: 12 years ago

Will you continue this as promised. It has been too long after the 3rd part ' Jalebis'

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