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Posted: 12 years ago

Great update! i was looking forward for this update ... i am glad u updated! I feel terrible for Khushi! I hope Arnav does something quickly to bring back her smile back! Update soon!

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fraser

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Posted: 12 years ago

Luved it
pretty plz update nxt part

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Desiree Benoit

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Posted: 12 years ago

Oh! Poor Kushi! I can't stand it! That ass ia lways hurting her. Are you sure he loves her? This definitely, does not sound like love! When will she have some happiness? Please change her circumstances. Introduce a friend from the past. We'll see how he likes a taste of his own medicine! Poor Kushi. She is becoming sick because of him! Please do something!

Thanks for the PM. Waiting for the next update!

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Megha. â¤

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Posted: 12 years ago

Ths is too good .. or shud i say *Freakingg GodDamn Good* !! Plz Do Continue ..
Nd PM Whn Yuu Update =)

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lara3110

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Posted: 12 years ago

Superb - Just cant stop reading it again and again.

Please can we have some more. 😭

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MaankigopiMadhu

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Posted: 12 years ago

Waiting to see how he sets things right ;) Awesome update :D

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jenshad

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Posted: 12 years ago

Pleashhh Updateee 😳

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Amanda D'Souza

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Posted: 12 years ago

@Dynamix215: Awesum n fantastic OS!!!!😊

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Atyay

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Posted: 12 years ago

👏
It was very nice, please continue!!

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Sanzy|Sanz

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Posted: 12 years ago

Nice loved it ❤️ loved the way how u added payal in :) hope u continue this :D xoxo

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