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moomin4455

@moomin4455

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Posted: 12 years ago

Amazing update! So gutwrenching!!

Get a clue Arnav - she's still a kid at heart and she doesn't need you ignoring her now you're married! Geez! Go Payal! So glad she didn't mince her words and just cut to the chase 😡 Arnav you are a blockhead!

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---Sonia---

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Posted: 12 years ago

l feel bad for khushi:(
continue soon

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lara3110

@lara3110

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Posted: 12 years ago

It was superb just like the first two. Can we have some more. I liked both of them so much that I used to read them before going to bed. I just loved them so much.👍🏼

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arniepervaiz

@arniepervaiz

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Posted: 12 years ago

that was so intense..

loved it..

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FarighInsan

@FarighInsan

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Posted: 12 years ago

loved it... *Sniff sniff* my life is like that jalebi too :(

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kaira101

@kaira101

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Posted: 12 years ago

this was so well written

loved it

a must continue😉

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Angel13

@Angel13

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Posted: 12 years ago

brilliant OS

interesting..

liked how Payal talked to Arav

you must acontinue soon please

thanks for pm

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claireDD

@claireDD

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Posted: 12 years ago

its great that you decided to continue this..
awesome update i tell ya..👏

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shagun05

@shagun05

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Posted: 12 years ago

this one was also a terrific one... all her turmoil and hurt was superbly written...

please do continue with these...

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Amy_M

@Amy_M

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Posted: 12 years ago

Nice . . Please update soon , i really feel bad fo khushi

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