||ARHI|| OS: The Girl In The Mirror

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vibha92

@vibha92

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Posted: 12 years ago

#31

brilliantly written...awww...u write her pain so perfectly...thnx for pm...

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Jessie

@jessjazz

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Posted: 12 years ago

#32

I loved it for the way you wrote... the nuances, her feelings, the pain she was going thru... 👏

BUT I don't want to relate it to Khushi... too painful

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incarnadine

@incarnadine

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Posted: 12 years ago

#33

Abi..!!

This is beautifully written!!! I loved it!

I could feel Khushi's pain..

Just beautiful! Just WOW!! 👏

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mishti_17

@mishti_17

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Posted: 12 years ago

#34

Fab OS.. Really loved it.. Loneliness really makes life unbearable.. 😒

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..SunnYaara..

@..SunnYaara..

Sparkler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#35

Wow brilliant...but too emotional...thanks for pm

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ITS_LEENA

@ITS_LEENA

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#36

beautifully penned about the inner conflicts and emotions,harsh reality

thanks for pm

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Fuj

@-ElmoFuj-

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#37

My God that was beautiful! Yet so so s depressing!

She just killed herslef like that? She probably failed to realise that she still had that friend, had other friends too im sure!

Life isnt so dull if you look into the colors of it ! *sigh* this just depressed me so much! *sniff*

but beautifully written, beautifully! The irony, the sybolisms! AMAZING!

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annab

@annab

Voyager

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Posted: 12 years ago

#38

Brilliantly written...it was soo painful to read...there are so many people around us who we think have the perfect life ..but in reality it is very different..i can easily understand khushi's pain.😭😭 ...Her friend in the office talks abt her perfect life ,and it hurts khushi thinking abt her own life...i dont normally like sad stories..But this one is exceptional..very well done 👏👏..And many thanx for the pm...